Girlie, you got nothin' to worry about with this chappie...except it was too short for my taste (but don't listen to me, I love Leon Uris, James Clavell, ya know-wordy stuff).  This really helped to explain Bella's reticence in thinking she deserves this opportunity to get off the street.  Just don't let her screw it up.  Our boy Edward needs her too much.  More even than Bella needs him (at least at this point). 

Cannot wait to see how Alice cracks the whip...Those screamers aren't going to be so tame either (I'm guessing)... 

Author's Response:

Hey hon, thanks so much for killing my butterflies.  I can't tell you how much I was freaking out about this one - God I'm so needy!

Love your reviews - they mean a lot to me.  Keep it up!

Mwah!

I thought this chapter was very well written and had a nice balance. Glad Bella took the job. Having Edward come out to find Bella and having her tell her story to him really filled in some blanks. Hopefully, the story can move forward now.

Yay! I loved it! I'm glad he has such an understanding of what she's been through and why she's so 'hard'.

I really love this story! I can't imagine going through what Bella has. I'd be in a mental ward right next to Edward. Hmm, that might not be so bad. LOL

I am looking forward to seeing what you have in store for our lovely couple. 

Thanks for sharing your fic with us.

 

That was a pretty intense chapter but I'm glad to hear what she went through. I'm looking forward to the hijinx in the coming chapters!

Loved this chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes next. Great job!

this story rocks. keep it up!!!!

holy crap.... my heart literally broke after bella's story! this is one of my favorite stories now! it is so well written and i like how edward and bella aren't all happy -go- lucky, but they are freinds. its a nice change. so keep up the great work!

this story rocks. keep it up!!!!

this story rocks. keep it up!!!!

I'm addicted to this storyline!  Love what you've done with the characters, too

Your story is hilarious.  I love how Alice and Bella get along so well.  Bella is pricless and I love that she makes Edward feel so comfortable and happy.  The quick updates are amazing.  This is the most interesting, intriguing, funny, awesome story that I've read in a while.  So please keep up the awesome work.