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Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:42 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
She is sooo hooking up with rob... dont they see resemblence in each other? hahaha
Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:52 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
that was confusing...rob talking to edward...edward talking to rob.... :S but sooo awesome i LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewer: dreamygurl (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:25 AM · On: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
holy crap, i love the ending! wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 01:12 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
no words to describe how much I enjoyed this chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 12:05 AM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
I freaking loved that chapter! And the fact that you chose Rob Pattinson, that was too fucking funny! And I love the that Edward got so jealous. Oh my God, woman, you are talented! I see Edward as a cross between Rob and Chace Crawford. it's kinda weird, but in my head it works! Absolutely, can not wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: dreamygurl (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Pity-poison and Porn
i really liked how you set up the timing for this chapter!
ooh, and angry withdrawal edward is so freakin sexy!
Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:19 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Great chapter. I love this story. I always know I'm going to laugh
first fav line: "We'll be landing any second....I looked at my watch. Four hours and fifty-five minutes to go. SHIT!!" Unfortunately my two youngest kids had fallen asleep in my bed and I almost woke them up when I started laughing.
I have to admit, I don't normally like when RP is written into a story. It usually is just awkward and forced. But this was funny. I loved it. Edward's mood shift while watching fangirl Bella was hilarious. Looking around for the screamers after RP left...loved that. The whole fingers through the hair thing had me rolling on the floor. Thank God I had put my two kids in their own bed in the middle of the chapter. No more holding back.
2nd fav line: "Rob and I sighed heavily and ran our fingers through our hair. DAMMIT!!"
Reviewer: dreamygurl (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Big-Tit's Buffet
gah! bella is fricken hilarious! i love her. and this story. :)
Reviewer: thal89 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:44 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
I just have to say that I am loving this fic. That scene with Rob and Edward was awesome. I have to admit I got all giddy when I started reading that. I totally would have been jumping around like Alice and Bella if I ever had the chance to meet him. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:30 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
LOL oh my this chapter was fun.
Oh and I LOVE Monty Python. Awesome.
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:30 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Love
Reviewer: ericasmom4ever (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:11 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Totally hilarious! Was laughing my butt off through the whole chapter! Thanks for giving me a great way to end my Thursday! You ROCK girl!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:42 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
let them get together
Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:34 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Okay, now are they screaming because they met hot and sexy Rob, because he bears a striking reseblance to hot and sexy Edward, or is there something I'm missing? Great idea to introduce the alter ego as a supporting character... funny too! Bella's not the only one changing her panties frequently, especially with all the self indulgence you've got Edward doing... you're definetely increasing my laundry load too. Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Hey honey,
They are screaming because Edward and Rob are practicallly the same person - and yes, both are hot and sexy (a bit weird for Alice, but she can crush on Rob all she likes - I bloody do.)
Sorry about the laundry - however it will get worse. Mwahahahahaha!
Thanks for reviewing.
Mwah!
Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:22 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
another great chapter..
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:19 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
Somehow bella and alice have an evil masterplan behind this
poor edward...he NEEDS to calm down or this will end badly
loved the chapters and I look forward to more
rachie
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:17 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
great chapter!! but im confused! what was so great about robs hands?!
Author's Response: Ah, the hands. *sigh* Just something my girlfriends and I are obsessed with, so sorry it was a bit vague. But seriously, have you SEEN Pattinson's hands? *sigh*
Thanks for reviewing!
Mwah!
Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:04 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
OMG - that was absolutely wonderful kiddo
hilarious - entertaining - witty- holy crap, all things good!!!
WOW
THE "SELF-TALK" STUFF IS JUST SOOO BLOODY FUNNY
I am still smiling and laughing to myself while typing this - I look like a nutter!!
update soon - i need me some more SNL
Leisa II
Author's Response: You know it's really weird. I sit down and write this story, and then when it gets posted I read it back and think, Jesus, did I really write that? That's some seriously fucked-up shit right there. But I'm so glad that you find my fucked-up shit entertaining.
Sorry for making you look like a nutter.
Mwah, Leisa I
Reviewer: bellehaine (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:55 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
haha... nice
Reviewer: BabyVampBella (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:52 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
loveloveloveloveloveovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove!
Is that enough or do you need more to get the next chapter out before the end of the weekend?
Author's Response: Thank you Baby. The first part of the next chapter has just magically appeared on my laptop! Keep the love coming!
Mwah!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:43 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
LKSJDLKASJDKSAJD
lmaooo i love this story so much
it's fucking hilarious and amazing.
Reviewer: aimeexjeannette25 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:32 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
That was fucking hilarious. I love this story. Update soon.
Reviewer: IntoTheNight (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:23 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
OMG. I laughed my ass off at the Monty Python thing. Seems like we're getting ready for an epic chapter with the SNL thing. Can't wait!
BTW. Now that his lotion(and consequently his goodies) smells like corn chips and beer I definately have to say I approve. Sounds... yummy. You big tease. :P
Author's Response: You know, I think you could be onto something there. Maybe we should market special Nacho flavoured cock-balm to help us girlies go to work on our men? Mmmmmm....interesting.
x
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:23 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
When I saw the title to this chapter, I swear that I thought of the Monty Python skit!! That was so great!! I was laughing so much!!
Poor Edward. Do he and Rob look like cousins or anything, lol! Same hair pulling, love it!
Great story, please keep going.
Julie :)
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:13 PM · On: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
LOVE IT!!! It was hilarious! But I got a question, how are they going to avoid touching one another and being close when they're suppose to be pretending to be dating? And why would Alice have them pretend that when she knows they really want one another? Just curious ;0)
~Susan
Author's Response: Oh Susan, don't go confusing me with logic and stuff!! Ok, here's my ATTEMPT to explain. Alice knew Bella would be good for Edward. Hired her to keep her around. KNEW that Edward was a filthy man-whore and would want to fuck her senseless. KNEW that would fuck things up royally. Wanted to keep their relationship building without complicating it with the big S.E.X. So touching, in the line of 'duty' is fine. Friendly touching is fine (but frustration and very HOT.) Penetration of any kind (for the moment) is off the menu. Ok? Clear as mud? Yay!
Thanks for reviewing hon.
Mwah!
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