Love, love, LOVE it :) I think I've read this before on another site bc I feel like I remember it continuing longer. Either way, I'm really glad I found it again. You know how to write some AMAZING stories :) I hope you continue to update this...& Soon! Xoxo

This is really awesome.  Don't quit now,  I have to know where this goes!

Are you kidding!  Don't apologize, this chapter was great!

 

This story is excellent!! You have done such an amazing job tugging at my heart strings with this one. You have the characters pinned perfectly. I just wish you would continue it!! Are you planning on finishing this story? A story this fantastic deserves to be finished. Please consider coming back to it. I've fallen in love with it and it hurts my heart to see it just stop abruptly!! :-) So update soon woman! You'd make one lil' girl in South Carolina very happy! :-)

Please finish.  I want to know how Bella makes Jacob see what he did.  Or does he see it from her POV?

Update! This story is going good so far.

just a thought: i would have REALLY enjoyed Charlie beating Jacob with his baton (or w/e u call that stick thingy) Secondly, Charlie, Charlie, Charlie *shakes head in disapproval* is THAT how he reacts after Jacob rapes his ownly daughter?? Really??? Damn him...

And Edward, i'm glad he stayed with Bella to help her through this tough time.

oh! i almost forgot! what about Rosalie! They went through the same thing, and i know she doesn't like Bella, but surely, not even she can hate bella that much now. Wouldn't a bond be formed between them? Oh, and just a suggestion:

*at the cullen house*

"I'm what?" Bella asked horrified, tears streaming furiously down her face.

"Bella- I-I'm sorry but you're--" Carlisle's sentence cut off suddenly as Bella shakes her head frantically.

"NO" was her tortured scream as she bolted from the living room into the kitchen. A look of utter desperation consuming her features. It happened so quickly we all stood frozen for a fraction of a second as we watched horrified at what Bella was doing.

"GET. IT. OUT!" her piercing scream shook us out of our frozen stupor as she continued to plunge the knife repeatedly in her abdomen.

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Yea i know... its a little morbid and drastic. But tears can only do so much...

but anyway, great writing skills! i feel like im actually there, and i feel so helpless because i can't help either Edward, Bella and her family...

Author's Response:

Oh, gods! i LOVE YOU! hahahaha and no, not morbid at all! It sounds like something i would totally write myself. Anyway, I stopped writing this story b/c i was no longer sure what direction i wanted to go....I have to admit I like what you wrote here. This has really helped me out a lot x) so thank you lots! Rest assured that if I decide to go in this direction, i will surely credit u! xD Take care, love!

OMG!!! Amazing. Going to read the enxt cahpter now!

I love this story...I'm really intersted to see what happens with Bella and Edward and everyone else....Please ud soon

I hope you update again soon, it will be interesting to see the reactions of the other Cullens and of the rest of the pack.  I imagine Rose will have the most violent, angry reaction.  As for Jake... hope he gets what is due

excellent chapter

very well written pov's and story

Edward will help her overcome- he is what she needs now more than ever

looking forward to the next update

poor.... EVERYBODY!!!

 

but please continue!!!!  I don't know why I'm hooked... I guess it's the potential for fluffy ExB moments..

i really enjoyed this chapter, you seriously have a talent for conveying emotions, i loved it when bella was talking to her father and he cried there it was heartbreaking yet beautiful that he let it out. im surprised he hasnt tried to kill that dog though i mean he hurt his baby but anyway great chapter. i guess i can understand why they would want to keep edward away for a little while in the last chapter i mean she might freak out around males but anyway i think you did a great job of jacobs pov in this chapter, the insanity really came across. sams pov was a little upsetting, how he was saying if edward wasnt here or didnt exist non of this would happen, i mean honestly jake chose to rape bella, he chose do to that noone forced him, he cant blame anyone but jake, and there was no guarantee that they would have ended up together, what if she chose to be with someone else? i hope it doesnt mean war on the pack because none of them were participants jake should be left alone to answer his fate regarding the cullens. if the pack defends him they'll be defending his actions and unecessarily causing war, anyway again good chapter please update soon.

wow that was really intense, im hopeing the cullens get to jacob asap and that the other wolves dont retaliate because that was just cruel.