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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
=D I don't know why...but I'm completely LOVING this story.
and like Bella, I think we're all hoping she'll get lucky =P
Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
OoooohMama! I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Your writing is so on point! The beginning was perfect. And I'm loving Bella's word vomit and Edward's semi-coolness. He is majorly smoking.
....Oh, and I can't wait to find out what tats he has!
Please let me know if and when you get a thread for this story! I want to see pics of the tattoos!
XOXO
~JO~
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Soo cute. I really like it.
Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
I'm so happy that I found this story! Its really good and I can't wait to see where this all goes!
Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
I'm so happy that I found this story! Its really good and I can't wait to see where this all goes!
Reviewer: Maharet (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Pissed doesn't even begin to cover it honey! It's a great story - kind of a different Edward. When I saw the summary I really wasn't sure about Tattoo artist Edward but....I like him. A LOT.
Can't wait to find out where his tattoo's are though. Update soon please.
Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Hahahaha...Definetely want one down on his abs...You are good!!!
Wanna know more :D
Reviewer: TheCutie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
the story is so sexy :D yeah that's the perfect word to describe it..:D I can't wait if Edward of the shop has hot tatoos.. no wait.. I mean he is Edward Cullen.. :D he could have a little pink princess tatooed on his cheek and it would be hot..:D
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Lol, cute but short. XD
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Edward with tattoos.....hot hot hot
Reviewer: xXShamrockXx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
I also want to be lucky!!
Dammit! Why is Bella always the lucky one!
Life is sooooooo unfair!!!
Anyhoo... enough with my whining. I love this story! and this chapter just makes me want more!!
Reviewer: mcarmen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
hey can i be lucky too ;) i wanna se his tattoos
great story and chapter keep em coming plz.
Reviewer: Ctorrado (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Oh please, tell me there's a hip tattoo a la beautiful bastard!...I iike this story very much...
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
I love it!!!!
Please update asap!!!
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Yum. I am loving this story.
Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 1-A Chance Encounter.
Awesome.
Reviewer: WouldYouLookAtThat (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Reality Check
No matter how good the story is, doing an entire recap of previous events in a different pov is not a good idea. It is... tedious to read.
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
I wanna see Edwards tatoo! *pout*
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Uhhh.......totally teasing! I'm gonna need the location of those tats PRONTO!!!!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
WHAT! All she got was a lingering kiss on the cheek!?...........well i guess i was hoping for too much to happen *sigh*....well atleast it wasn't a peck :D
LOL againat Bella's word vomit...she really has it bad.
Also it seems Edward has selective hearing cuz all he got from her rant was Super Hot Tattoo Guy lmao.
oooooooh i'm definitely intrigued to find out about his Tattoos...edward with Ink is so damn hottttt ;)
I HOPE Bella is LUCKY and we get to find out about them ;)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Yipee!!! Love their connection....and can't wait to see (hear) about his tats!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE! NEED MORE!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Reality Check
Oh Crap!! Shit I LOVED it!! esp EPOV omg soooo good....he wanted her badly as well *yay* :D
LMAO @ Bella's thoughts...everytime she said something to edward over the phone she mentally kicked herself!! hahahah that was totally hilarious!
OMG! That ending was soooo HOT!....but did it go any further...as he stepped closer to her???????????....................I'm DYING here!! Tell me!! lol
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!TOTALLY CURIOUS ABOUT THOSE TATTOOS!!!!THIS STORY IS HOT!!!!MORE PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Subtle Beginning
Argghhh! I want to know what tattoos he has!! haha
Tell me!!! XDD
-erinzomg
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