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Reviewer: erikskitty1989 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:19 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
Wow! Thats..WOW!
Author's Response: Keep reading!! I hope you like the rest of it!!
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: nataliem (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Not Enough Time
i enjoy this story:) it reads like it could be the midnight sun of breaking dawn. good work:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is pretty much exactly what I was hoping to pull off. I'm so glad you think so!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Not Enough Time
Okay, I am all caught up. You have done such a great job balancing whatever text you have to quote from the book with your original writing. I was really hoping you would get this far, so we could see what Edward thought when Bella went to the cottage and found the book. I know you are thinking about ending this soon, but I personally would love to see you carry it all the way to the end. I would love to see you go beyond that! If you have to make it into different stories to keep your sanity, well, that would be reasonable. What do you think?
I just really like the way you write and I think you would do an outstanding job with it.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, I'm so flattered! I'm not sure how much more there will be, but whatever it ends up, I'm sure it will be more than I intended. Every time I try to think of skimming over more, I get reminded of a little scene here & there that I really want Edward's POV for. I'm guessing there will be at least one to two more full chapters, and then an epilogue. The only thing I'm certain of is the epilogue, everything up until then is flying by the seat of my pants. I'm really just so flattered that you like my writing. I usually have very positive reviews, but once in a while I get the occasional, "Edward would NEVER talk like that! He would never think like that", etc etc. I'm always just so happy when people can just let go and enjoy it. ;)
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:17 PM · On: The Pink Nightmare
This chapter was so funny! I love all the interaction, but there was plenty of Edward and Bella, too. I especially loved the time they all shared with Renesmee. Oh, and the end of the chapter was quite nice!
Author's Response: I really had fun with this one, and it really came out of nowhere. It grew out of nothing but a tiny idea, and I just couldn't stop! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:38 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Wow! What else can I say?
Author's Response: Thank you!! I love to leave people speechless!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:14 PM · On: The Cottage
Biting. Nice new twist. It fits!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really like bitey Edward! ;)
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:14 PM · On: The Cottage
Biting. Nice new twist. It fits!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Awake
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:33 PM · On: The Lump
Well, I am sure you have already written this part, but I am going to answer your question about what I would like to see. I want Edward to give Bella some insight by reminding her how he had to restrain himself when she was a human, then show her the difference now that she can take it. In other words: This is what it was like, but this is what it is like now!
Author's Response: Yes, that part is already written, but I think you might like it. (if never ending marathon lemons are your thing, that is.) ;)
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Divided
Well, you can do so much more than just write a great lemon! I thought this was a great chapter. I like the way you skim through the story we already know, summarizing as necessary to keep us in the right place, then add your thoughts.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is exactly what I try to do, so that it's not just retelling the exact same scene. I did stick a little closer in the most recent chapter, but only because I wanted Edward's reaction to specific dialogue. I'm so happy that you are liking it!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:34 PM · On: The Other Boot
You added so much to this honeymoon! I love that this is Edward's POV.
Author's Response: I thought we needed a bigger glimpse into the fun times that can be had over two weeks, hehe. And I really love writing in EPOV.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
I had started reading this once before and lost it when my laptop crashed. Now there is more to read! Wow!
Author's Response: Well I am glad you came back! Thanks!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:28 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Well, you hit the ground running! This is insight into Edward like I have never seen before. I am hooked!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! I hope that you stick with the story and like it! I have tried to crack open the mystery of Edward's mind in BD, but to me, he's always just a little bit naughty. ;) I hope you enjoy it, be sure to let me know! I absolutely adore hearing from new readers!
Reviewer: dmnsqrl (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Not Enough Time
I _really_ liked the description of "morning detangling". It's a very-canon-fitting detail I haven't seen anyone explore yet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always thought it sounded like a rather fun dilemma to have to face every day. ;)
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Not Enough Time
I LOVED Edward's thoughts on how beautiful Bella's bare skin is (and even his own and their lovemaking because of it). It was just so full of emotion and joy.
Sorry for the late review! Life has been crazy. But I've kept the alert in my inbox, reminding me to read and review!
Author's Response: Seriously, I'm always happy to get any reviews, late or not! I'm so glad you liked that sunlight scene, I thought it was a touching idea. Thank you!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Not Enough Time
How much more do you plan on writing? Meaning...are you going to explore their future after the Volutri leave? I'd LOVE to read on and on where your writing is concerned.
This was TRULY AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you like it! I only have one or two more chapters to go, and one epilogue. I don't think it will go any farther than the book, unless I write an outtake oneshot in the future. Not sure yet! I have a few other story ideas in mind first, so who knows?
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Awake
EDWARD...THE FATHER FIGURE???? As if I couldn't worship the man anymore!!!! It was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You truly are a genius. This is magic simply put.
Author's Response: Thank you! Keep reading, there is much more Pervward AND Daddyward coming up!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Divided
How is it possible to make me love Edward even more?! And Rosalie just kicks ass!!! I kind of wasn't looking forward to this BD interpretation, I must have been delirious, but you have proven me wrong. I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is high praise. I'm always happy to convert someone! I just really always felt that BD needed Edward's POV, that he just HAD to have interesting things going on in his mind, even besides the smutty stuff! ;) I hope you like the rest of it!
Reviewer: BrooketheCat (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:43 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Holy crap. More please. I'm gonna have to go attack my husband now.
Author's Response: Thank you! Attacked husbands are the best reviews!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:21 PM · On: The Other Boot
That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I kid you not...I was thinking about the position on all fours and why you hadn't really addressed that. Consider me ADDRESSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVING this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehe.. I just CAN'T WAIT until you read chapter twelve!!!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:02 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
I want to bite Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Me too!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Explorations
I don't know why some of my reviews aren't accepted, but this one bears repeating: I took my husband into our bedroom and had my way with him after that delicious chapter!!!! You outdid yourself and we love you for it!!!!!
Author's Response: Why thank you! I adore inspiring spouse attacks! I don't know why any reviews wouldn't be accepted, I don't deny any. Perhaps you didn't click submit? Not sure. I'm glad you repeated this one, though!! Oh, and be sure to keep reading. I went even farther in future chapters. ;) Be sure to let me know if you like them!!
Reviewer: tiffistheone30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
i like it i think u did a very good job
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: tiffistheone30 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:25 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
I think u did an amazing job telling it from edwards pov, I always like to know what he is thinking. If u haven't finished the story please please continue.
Author's Response: I really like things from EPOV too. I haven't finished it yet, but the end is coming soon. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: BrooketheCat (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:17 PM · On: The Other Boot
that was HOT! more please
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! Thank you for the review!
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