Nice :)

Although one thing surprised me. In BD it was said, I think, that the Denali sisters stopped drinking from humans because of their affection for human males. I always assumed that this caused them to continue having sex with human males but just not to drink of them. Maybe a few bruises but not enough to kill them. I don't have my BD home right now so I can't check whether I just misunderstood the passage or whattahell.

Anyhoo, another great chap, thanks! :)

- B

Author's Response:

I think it was left up to interpretation. I just went that way with it. They HAVE stopped drinking now, but it never says they kept sleeping with them. I just assumed they stayed away from temptation and stuck to vampires.

Thank you very much for the review!

That is way hotter sex than teenagers should get to have.

Author's Response:

Hahahaha! That is an excellent point! I agree.

Thank you for the review!

What a beautiful chapter. :) Thank you so much for writing it. I particularly enjoyed Edward getting all sassy during his rough and dirty round of sex with Bella. That was yummy...

Author's Response:

Ahh yes... Sassyward!! One of my faves, too!

Thank you so much for the review, it means more to me than you'll ever know!

The fireplace scene had it's own "fire". Bella and Edward will need that bond and that release before they face the impending visit from the Volturi. So glad the Denali's have accepted Renesmee- four down, how many to go?...

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Oh, so many more to go!!

Thank you for the review!

Cullen family spreading out around the world searching for friends to stand up and witness when the Volturi arrive in several weeks.  Bella plotting something behind Edward's back.  It has bothered him, Bella never kept secrets from him. When he asked he right out she gave vague answer convincing Edward that she was lying.  He wondered why is she keeping something away from me.  Had Alice shown her a chance to survive?  He realized that time could be running out for them to be together.  He grabbed his wife and with much vigor attacked his wife.  Bella ate it up and wanted more from him.  With all the moaning and screaming from both during their violent and romantic encounter in front of the fireplace, it was surprising that Reneesme slept through it.  Edward and Bella couldn't get enough of each other.  They felt like the sands of time were running out for them.  So live each moment to the fullest.  Early in the morning they leave the cottage to return to main house and wait for their guests to arrive.  The tension of what to say and what the reaction will be towards their little girl.  Tanya and her family arrived and Edward made them aware of the situation.  They were afraid Reneesme was an immortal child which would be a death sentence.  Edward explained they heard her heartbeat and her scent.  He further explained Reneesme was his biological daughter.  Bella gave birth as a human and then Edward changed her into a vampire to save her.  Carmen was the first to listen to the information from Reneesme.  She adored her completely.  Soon Elezar, Kate, and Tanya took to her.  Now all they had to do was wait for other visitors to start arriving to retell the story of Reneesme's birth and request they stay to witness her changing.  Requesting they stay to advise the Volturi what they have seen in the next several weeks.  Just when you think that Edward and Bella will have their happily ever after, it seems all hell breaks loose for them.  Irina going to the Volturi to report spotting Reneesme and assuming she was an immortal child which are strictly forbidden.  Irina wasn't close enough to realize that Reneesme was alive and not 100% vampire.  I can fully understand why Edward is so passionate about living every alone minute with Bella to the maximum.  He is so afraid of losing his family.  His girl that is his reason to live.  His beautiful daughter he would die for her.  Both Bella and Edward's 1st thoughts Reneesme must live even if it cost both their lives. Also Bella and Edward do not want to live without the other.  Their love is so strong and true.   Looking forward to future chapters of new guests and their reaction to Reneesme and also more evening living between Edward and Bella.

Author's Response:

Wow, that's an enormous recap!

I'm so glad that you liked it, and I will be updating very soon!

This was a great chapter!

This entire was excellent! Everything in it was really well written. (Just like the entire story.)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks!! The next one is already done, so hopefully it won't be long at all before it's up!

Your Edward is so very aware, here, of himself and his desires, but I still see canon Edward in his outward displays. 

Not entirely, naturally. lol  HOT dry humping that never made the director's cut. lol

Lovely chapter. Thank you!

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Thank you so much! That means so much to me. I am glad that you still sense canon Edward, because that's who I'm really trying to embellish. I just really want to get inside his head. There just HAS to be more going on in there!

"Oh I'm going to fuck you, Bella." I watched as I slowly pushed the tip inside her opening, stopping after just the first inch. I could already feel her muscles gripping at me, trying to pull me deeper. "I'm going to fuck this tight little pussy so hard that you beg me to stop."

Jesus, bb...You really make me wish my husband was home now.  Dammit!  

xoxo Sarah

 

Author's Response:

Hehehe, you KNOW how much I love torturing you & your poor husband! ;) *evil grin*

:) You're fabulous. Now I just have to wait for an update like all the normal people. *pout*

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There will be more updats than i thought. I already have the next two chapters ready, but it takes my chapters a long time to be validated. I submitted the next one over two weeks ago, so it should hopefully be up any day now. There's another one after that already written, and at least another two or three to go. Who knows, the way I keep adding stuff, it could be even more! ;)

I thought I could do it. I thought it wouldn't be a big deal. I thought wrong. Do NOT read this chapter on your blackberry during class! BAD idea! This Christalmighty HOTTNESS should have location parameters. I think I drove home at lightning speed...whew! Sometimes smut for smut's sake is just what a story needs.

Author's Response:

HAHA, I just KNEW you'd love this chapter!! ;) Glad it delivered!

Thumbs up, biatch. Yeah, he's freaking adorable as Dad, it's true. Thanks for skimming, it still FELT complete, so that was awesome. I loved the scene w/ Alice and the cleanup. Morbidish, yes, but incredibly sincere. Can't wait for Bella's strength to come out in spades!

Author's Response:

Told you he was a sweet dad!! I just can't stay away!

I'm glad you liked the cleanup scene, I thought it was a nice tender moment between the siblings that we never get to see in the books. At least that's what I was hoping for!

My instinct says 'blahblahblah its a fucking mutant child, let's move on,' but you're right. It had to be written, had to be said. And it's almost over...I fucking hope against hope!

Author's Response:

Well, she does appear more in the rest of the story than I had originally intended for her to be, but more for the sake of how adorable he is as a father. It really comes out when you see it from his side, so I hope you don't hate it.

*fist pump into the aaaaaair!!!* Fuck yeah, Eddie!!!

Author's Response:

Hehe, he DID do a good job, huh? I was so proud of him.