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Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:14 PM · On: The Other Boot
Wow, that beachscene was absolutely steamy! I can see a sparkling Edward coming out of the water. Ohhh, mouthwatering.
I love his internal dialog through the entire story!
Author's Response: I love writing his internal dialogue! I'm glad you like it too.
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:36 PM · On: The Tea Party
GREAT JOB! Tears came to my eyes at the last few lines...*sobs*
It was brilliant...the smut was hot and amazing, as usual....no biting...LOL, I swear you have me addicted to it!
I'm glad he spent loads of time with Renesme, I laughed at the little tea party they had! I can just imagine Edward all squashed up!
It was a brilliant chapter hun, I loved it.....Do you mind me asking if you have any other fics planned for when this finishes? I LOVE your work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You know, I have to save some of the biting. I pulled it back a bit here for more impact in the epilogue! ;)
Yes, actually, I do have another fic planned. It's not written yet, but I have tons of notes and I plan to start in on it as soon as this one is complete. I've been thinking about it for months, but I just can't focus enough to write two stories at the same time! It's going to be an AH/AU story, which is a change for me, but still very naughty!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:13 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
He surrendered! So beautiful! As for the lemon itself, I don't have any words other than hot, hot, damn, hot, hot, damn...
I love that you pointed out the real reason why Edward was so freaked out after the first night. In Bellas version it seems like such an overreaction to the bruises. I love the reveal that even Edward didn't think the bruises was so bad but the real fear was knowing how close he came to actually bite her.
Author's Response: I was never satisfied with the bruises excuse, either!
Reviewer: twiadict (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:03 PM · On: The Tea Party
As amazing as your smut always is, I have to say that in this chapter, I most enjoyed reading the references to Backyardigans and The Wonder Pets. It reminds me that I'm not the only mommy trolling for trashy vampire sex on the internet!
Author's Response: Thanks!! So many people don't like Renesmee (or ANY children for that matter) because they hate the sexy couple being tied down by the baggage & responsibility. But I always try to show how loving & caring they are as parents. Why can't caring parents also be hot, steamy lovers once the kid goes to bed? Especially since they never have to sleep or get tired!
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Explorations
OMG!!! Pant, pant, pant!!! That was SMOKIN' HOT!!!! Best chapter you have written, and believe me I have read ahead a bit, but keep coming back to this one! It's my fave! Edward, you can come practice with me anytime you want baby!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
*sigh* wouldn't it be so lovely to practice with Edward??
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
That was amazing! It was everything that SM left out of BD. I loved the guys talking. You really affimed the severity of the upcoming event. It's so easy to think that Edward is just his usual overprotective self when he worries about Bella being hurt, but you put everything into perspective and brought forth the reality that he is a vampire who desisively craves her blood.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I really tried so hard in those earlier chapters to get that point across.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:27 AM · On: The Tea Party
Holy couch fuck, bb! That was HOT. And the exploring finger? Oh, yes, please!
As for what I'd like to see from the showdown? I'm not really sure...I've only read BD once, but I would probably like to see the Irina execution scene...perhaps some last thoughts from her?
Loved it!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thank you, bb!!! I always aim to please!
That's a nice thought about Irina. Could make for a touching moment. We share good dirty brainwaves.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:08 AM · On: The Tea Party
No one does smut like you. I love the way you seamlessly fit smut into the Twilight saga. The scene after Edward demanded that he and Bella go home instead of practicing more with Emmett, was priceless. You deserve that award. Congratulations and thanks for the recs.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:07 AM · On: The Tea Party
No one does smut like you. I love the way you seamlessly fit smut into the Twilight saga. The scene after Edward demanded that he and Bella go home instead of practicing more with Emmett, was priceless. You deserve that award. Congratulations and thanks for the recs.
Author's Response: Awwww.... shucks! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:02 AM · On: The Tea Party
That was some good loving. I love how you visited Renesme's day with Rose and Emmette. That was beautiful. come back soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm going to try!
Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:54 AM · On: The Tea Party
Sometimes less is better and this chapter was perfect. The father/daughter bonding between Edward and Nessie lent to the lemony perfection of Bella and Edward. Edward loves his two ladies with such great passion and with his entire heart and soul, this was shown so well in this chapter!
The battle from EPOV will be epic, I would love to know what he thought when Bella told Nessie she would have to run, and then when he realized that Bella was projecting her shield to protect them all, and when he realized that once they had won that he had enternity to be with his ladies.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm happy that I was able to show all of that for you.
I'm also happy to hear that so many people are looking forward to EPOV of the battle. I was worried most people would be all "been there, done that" about it.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Explorations
*pant* need cold shower *moan* now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, keep a cold shower within reach at all times! ;)
I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:44 AM · On: The Tea Party
You really did good. And I am sure what ever you put down in EPOV will be good. I can't wait for the end.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for that!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:08 AM · On: The Tea Party
Congrats on your award!
What I loved about this chappie and continue to love about this story is that it's not just about lust- it's about love and need and connection- physical and emotional. Edward's POV a welcome one- there's just so much going on at this point- he's trying to hold onto time. Too bad that doesn't work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that! I don't think everyone gets that, they only see the lust.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:44 AM · On: The Tea Party
i like this chapter very much! i love tea time!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I had fun writing it.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:45 AM · On: The Tea Party
Sad. Thinking this could be their last time together. Loved Edward's day with Nessie. Enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:36 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
wow!
Author's Response: Wow is good! I'll take wow!
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:53 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Very descriptive! I love Edwards pov. What an interesting idea that Edward has such violent thoughts!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love hearing from new readers. I hope you let me know if you like it.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:49 AM · On: The Tea Party
The tea party was fun. I could just see them. And the whole omnivore/carnivore moment. lol CUTE.
Ah, Renesmee's mind is going to be so cluttered...
I was, I confess, surprised that this "last night lemon" wasn't one of the slow, long, loving sorts, you know? The "I worship you and the ground you walk on" kind of night. Quick and dirty is, though, fun!
Author's Response: I was trying to hint that it turned into a night like that, but it started out rather frantic. They had to break one off right out of the gate, then he took her back to the room to spend some time! ;)
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:46 AM · On: The Tea Party
aw, wow. That was great and i'm really sad this story is coming to an end...I absolutely loved;
'On a side note, Charlie absolutely loved the fishing sonar system that I special ordered for him.
Yep... I rule.'
hehehehehe i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:21 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Forgive me for going on, but this is an intriguing issue. There is criticism about Bella, she is too submissive, not a modern woman at all, she is not her own person etc. Then, when in the 4th book she comes into her own, there is criticism again, where the heck is Edward? OK, I think she was a strong person from the very beginning, only, she had to contend with mythical worlds she could not prevail over. When she can, lo, she is the White Queen (Oh, how I loved the BD cover). And Edward recognizes it and gracefully bows to her. He has matured, finally, he is "a man at last".
There is much more I could say, but not here. If you care about it ,in my profile over fanfiction net, where I am Camilla10, you can find a commentary on the Twilight saga...
Ciao
Author's Response: You make some very lovely points. I agree, they both seem to come into their own.
Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:51 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
That was the best lemon I have ever read x
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!! That was the best, most exhausting lemon I ever WROTE!!!
Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:57 AM · On: The Tea Party
congratulations on the win! i am sad that this is coming to an end, i have enjoyed it from the start. this chapter was endearing to see edward with renesemee following her throughout her daily activities, cute idea and a super sexy ending. thanks again!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the daddy/daughter time! Thank you!
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:45 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Loved: "I was so busy patting myself on the back for my self-restraint that I forgot to worry about the lack of hers."
And: not my pulse, HER pulse. Great
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy whenever I see that I'm still getting new readers! I'm always thrilled to hear new thoughts. Thank you for starting my little fic, I hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
Holy shit! You sure know how to get a girl worked up! That was incredible!
"... well, Edward, that is one hell of a visual to give a girl. I was just struck with this image of you rising out of the surf, water cascading down your beautiful, sparkling body." - Couldn't agree more, quite a visual!!! Thank you!!!
Author's Response: Oh, how I love to visualize the sparkle peen!
Thank you for the review!
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