mmmmhmhmmhmmhm. sigh  sigh  omfgomfg, just,  this is the 8th. time i read this and loved it more each time . thank you sooo much.xxx

Author's Response:

Awww, thank you! I'm proud that I can still deliver after 8 times!!

Wow, that was some blowjob! Love that the tip came from Rosalie and that sextalk is the thing that brings Bella and Rosalie closer!!!

"Our house had quickly become the setting for the First Annual Renesmee Cullen Fan Club Meet & Greet." - Brilliant

Author's Response:

You're the first one to quote that line! I really liked it.

Wow, great intense chapter... can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you!

Edwards reaction to Bellas skin in the sunlight got me all choked up, so beautiful. And then he came to terms with the fact that their sparkling skin was not a curse but a thing of beauty! I love the way you make him realize the positive aspects of being a vampire and embrace his existence instead of viewing himself as a monster.

And later you bring back his thoughts of not being worthy of happiness. Poor Edward always has this emotional rollercoaster. You're so knowledgeable of his inner entity that I'm beginning to think that you have him stashed away somewhere where you're free to prod his brain!? If so, can I please come see him?!!!!

As always I love your depiction of Edwards thoughts about Jacob!

"I found myself wanting to hunt down the nearest imprinted wolf and beat the living shit out of him." - Hilarious!!!

Author's Response:

Well, I DO still have him chained to my bed, being forced into manual labor. ;)

Thank you so much for the kind words, they mean so much to me.

Thank god that Edward wanted more time - so do I! And you can never get enough lemons...

"Apparently Jacob had a little longer left to live... and I had to be grateful to him for instigating it all, regardless of how foolish he had been.

 I really hated that." - Loved Edwards reaction to Jacobs actions.

I love sweet Emmett and that Renesmee is able to be a little girl with him!

“Well, I guess that makes us chopped liver,” Emmett grumbled

Tell me about it." - aww, there it is again, Jacobs "claim" on Renesmee.

The bed! I don't know what to say. It's hideous and so perfect! I can't believe that someone would actually pay a small fortune for that atrocity! I do appreciate your research and the fact that you included the picture! Love your notes btw!

Author's Response:

Ahhh, yes... the pink monstrosity!!!

I'm glad you liked that!!

great chapter- thanks so much for the recommendations too- I love to read at least 3 or 4 stories at the same time. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you like the recs!

Ummmm, ahhhhh, ummmm....speechless!!!!! Amazing!!!! Hot, hot, hot!!!!

Author's Response:

Speechless is good!! I like that! ;)

Loved this chapter.  The bits about the cartoons was hysterical.  Lord knows I've been haunted many a night by the teamwork song. lol.  Oh and the lemon was hot.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I had a blast imagining them all singing it!

I adore the loving connection between Edward and Alice and the way they take of Bella!

I always like wellwritten father-doughter moments and you certainly don't disappoint! I like that you incorporated Edwards guilty feelings about his actions during the pregnancy - it wouldn't be Edward without some self-loathing!

"I felt like I'd only had seconds with her before she already “belonged” to someone else." - This gave me an epiphany!!! When I read BD I consistently had an uncomfortable feeling about Jacob imprinting that I couldn't identify. I knew it had nothing to do with the obvious issues (Bellas daughter, guy - baby etc), it was something else. You nailed it with that one sentence! That's it! Thank you!!!!

Great job describing Edwards insecurities when Bella woke up! You are so talented!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you agree with me about that part. I wasn't squicked out by the baby/man thing, i got what she was going for. but they were robbed of their infant. no time for family time without this pushy guy around all the time.

Edward knows Bella is hiding something very important from him.  He knows she will tell him at some point but it still bothers him.  It has peaked both his curiosity and his annoyance.  Edward figures it has something to do with not allowing Aro to obtain any information on her errands.  Bella takes the Volvo and is all dressed up.  Edward tells her she looks lovely multiple times.  He is holding the baby during her nap.  Edward has decided he will spend more time with Reneesme today.  So after her nap Edward questions his daughter about what her schedule is after nap time.  She has a tea party with Aunt Rosalie using warm blood.  Bear blood. Edward wonders why not mountain lion blood.  Since that is Edward's favorite. He has Reneesme visiting with grandparents and him later in the day.  When the usual time to go back to the cottage arrives Bella is still not home yet.  He helps Reneesme get ready for bed and they read each other a bedtime story.  Reneesme finally falls asleep.  Edward sits in the living room reading books.  This is his first time alone after Reneesme is asleep since he's been with Bella.  Especially since her change, the silence of the cottage drives him nuts.  He wonders how he lasted for almost a century being alone at night while other vampires are paired with their mates.  He can't imagine being able to just read all night alone.  When Bella returns home, he doesn't mention the knapsack Bella is carrying.  But he instantly holds Bella knowing this will be possibly their last night alone together.  Edward had told Bella the tent and camping gear is all ready to meet Carlisle and the family in the clearing at dawn.  The tent and camping supplies is for Reneesme.  Edward and Bella make love all night just want to be close before the Volturi arrive to Forks.  Looking forward to Edward's thoughts when reading the Volturi and their witnesses' minds and thoughts.  Also when he gets angry with Aro when he catches him in multiple spoken lies from what he actually is thinking.  Also would be cool to hear his thoughts when he realizes Bella's shield has their side all protected.

Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to writing a lot of that in the next chapter! thank you!

so super sweet!!!!!!!  I love seeing a good daddyward!

Author's Response:

than you!!! I love daddy/daughter time.

I think you would make SM proud and envious with this chapter! You have managed to bring all of Edwards feelings and thoughts out, everything from fear, hate, disgust and love to desire.

I love that you made Edward smell his own scent mixed with Bellas - nice touch.

Author's Response:

thank you so much. That chapter was so hard to write. I wasn't even going to go past the honeymoon, but EVERYONE cops out there and doesnt want to face the pregnancy. I wanted to know what Edward was thinking. I thought he deserved it.