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Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
Wow, this is getting better and better!
Author's Response: That's what I'm hoping for!
Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:48 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
that was fucking hot
Author's Response: Thanks! That lemon too a LOT out of me!!!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:19 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
So hot!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:33 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
I love Edward's vivid imagination and recall. Very good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm always so happy to hear from new readers. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Training, Trust, and Christmas
YOUR STORY IS SO RIGHT, SO TRUE, LIKE IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN FROM THE BEGENNING, AND TOLD BY EDWARD IT MAKES EVERYTHING SO MUCH BETTER, AND SPECIAL FOR ALL OF US, YOU HAVE MANY DETAILS DOWN THAT HAD BEEN MISSING AND MAKES ALL SINK IN, I LOVE IT, AND LOVE YOU FOR IT, THANKS ALOT, AND DONT EVER STOP WRITING, YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL GIFT, I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO AT LEAST MORE CHAPTERS LEFT, THANKS AND CONGRATULATIONS, FROM MEXICO LOT OF HUGS AND GREETINGS.......
Author's Response: Muchas gracias!!
I am so happy that you are enjoying my version of the story!
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Training, Trust, and Christmas
Nothing like a bit of Smutwardon on a sunny afternoon! Really enjoyed this. Agressive Edward is definitely someone I would like to meet (along with agressive Carlisle, but that's just my fantasy!) I liked the fact that it was raw and yet at the same time very emotional. I couldn't help but laugh at the thought of Rose giving Bella advice on how to deep throat either! x
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, nothing sexier than Agressiveward!! (and Carlisle's certainly not too shabby, either!)
Reviewer: RedSummer (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Visitors
I absolutely loved this chapter. You've really managed to capture that sense of desperation and raw passion, particulalry in the 'fireplace scene'! Brilliant x
Author's Response: Ahhh... the fireplace scene. That was fun!
Thank you!
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
wow! It's almost too much to fathom but since we had to swear to review here it is! Great writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you kept your word! ;)
Reviewer: thedogis01 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 06:35 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Geat so far!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are liking it!
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:25 PM · On: The Tea Party
This story was really great! WOW!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!!! ;)
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Divided
This chapter must have taken a lot out of you! I can't wait until the little monster is out and Bella is more durable so Edward can get some release. I loved the dualing monster voices in Edward's head- something between a gangsta with a pimp mobile, a human teenager, and an uptight English schoolmarm! Thanks for the ANGST! Now I need a glass of lemonade... extra sparkly sugar on top!
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry! There are GALLONS of lemonade coming up!!! You won't be let down!!!
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 11:37 AM · On: The Tea Party
Thanks, I really liked that Edward let her have her secret, and was smart enough to not ask what she was up to.
Author's Response: Thank you! He REALLY wants to know, but was at least smart enough to back off about it.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
The ending with Edward's bloodlust was amazingly scary.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I knew how I wanted it to look in my mind, but I've never been sure that came across when reading it.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:45 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
Now that was down right incredible.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:41 PM · On: The Cottage
I really like this line. "I hadn't even looked at her properly, I was so drugged by her kisses. I just couldn't bring myself to break the connection yet" it strikes me as really feverish and romantic at the same time.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think that's the first time that line's been quoted back. ;)
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 02:52 PM · On: The Tea Party
I am so sad I am at the end! Can't wait for your update! Of course, I can always reread it all! :) I loved this chapter so much. I really enjoyed sweet Edward spending the day with his daughter, the tea party, and watching Nick Jr. with Emmett. So great! And OF COURSE, I loved Bella and Edwards's "last night together" - it was smokin' hot as usual! Wonder how they explain the broken furniture and all the ripped clothes to Renesmee? LOL! Congrats on the Golden Lemon Award. You most definitely deserve it!!!!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!!! Hopefully I will get the next update out soon!
Reviewer: lion-lamb17 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
:-| I always thought of this...but never realized how hard it was for Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad I made it more believable.
Reviewer: bismarckfairy (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 01:45 AM · On: The Tea Party
Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading & reviewing!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:18 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
Ok i had to go back and read this chapter again. it is the best!
And I too hate being frusterated!
My hubby thanks you for this chapter, hell for the whole story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so flattered that you would reread it!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:55 PM · On: The Tea Party
Your story is too good to end! Just stemy lemon goodness! Congrats on the award you should win many many more!!!!
I can't wait for your next update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm so happy that you are enjoying it! I'll be sad to see it end, too!
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:15 PM · On: The Other Boot
Wow... just WOW!! So many fun, sparkly, rough, juicy lemons before the dreaded blue box realization!! I am impressed with your ability to drag us through smutville and then get us back on the straight and narrow canon road!! Nice job, dear! I am imagining not many lemons between now and Edward's teeth chainsaw through the amniotic sac!!
Author's Response: True, true, and it killed me! However, there are a few sensual moments.
Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:53 PM · On: The Tea Party
Really enjoying the story...started yesterday and haven't stopped! Such sweet smut! I love it, totally hot and so cool to hear Edward' s thoughts in breaking dawn. I also like hide and drink I am anxiously awaiting Edwards loss of composure over belllas tits! Thanks foe writing and the rec list !
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm always thrilled to hear from new readers!
I love that fic, too!!! I'm just dying for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:48 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Boy do I love lemons! Yum! Keep her in line, Edward! Show her who's boss! Yessss! I definitely need a cold shower after that chapter! Whew!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! That lemon took a lot out of me, and it inspires the most cold showers! ;)
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:43 PM · On: The Tea Party
::sigh::
::whimper::
::sigh::
Author's Response: ::smile:: ::happy:: ::hugs::
Reviewer: BloodMaryCullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:06 PM · On: The Cottage
HOLY FUCK !!! I JUST LOVED THE BITE SCENE !!!!
SOOOO FUCKING HOT !!! WOW !!!
THIS STORY JUST IS SOOOOOO GOOD !!! DELICIOUS !!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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