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Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Training, Trust, and Christmas
Your rec for "From the Cutting Room Floor" was timely! As I was reading this chapter, I was blessing you for writing it. I was re-reading "the saga" (I can't even remember why, now) and I got stalled with Breaking Dawn. I just can't get through it again. I see it, I tell myself to finish it, and I can't even pick it up. Reading your story is like getting the best parts, from the best POV - AND you have the smexin'! Perfect. How it shoulda been done. (Drat those teenage readers and decency rules ... argh!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I honestly don't think these books should be intended for young adults. Between the subject matter and the last book alone, I don't think it should be aimed at young readers. Leave the good stuff to the grownups.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Even More Visitors
Reviewing again, haha! I've been away from here for so long and as I'm catching up on my faves, I'm re-reading the chapter I left off from. And I just have to reiterate how goddamn sexy that meadow romp was. I'm flushed!
Author's Response: Thank you.... AGAIN! I'd love to romp with him in the meadow.
Reviewer: ARCullen23 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:23 PM · On: The Tea Party
I am so attached to this story now! Edward as a husband and Daddy is WONDERFUL!!!! Please tell me the rest of the chapters are coming soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working on the next chapter now, it should hopefully be up soon! If you mark this as a favorite you will get an update as soon as it posts.
Reviewer: ARCullen23 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Before I read any further I had to stop and provide a review for you! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE READ SO FAR!!!!!!! Can't wait to keep reading!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: mommapurvis (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:40 PM · On: The Tea Party
wbere's the epilogue? I'm dying here!
Author's Response: One more chapter first before the epi, and that should hopefully be up in a few days. Gotta get through that battle!
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:14 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
"We couldn't stop, that much was clear. Our need for each other was all-consuming. Even when taking a break from fucking Bella, I needed to make love to her. It was becoming an endless cycle that I couldn't possibly bring myself to worry about just yet. Somehow we would find a way to finally put our clothes back on and go about our daily business in the morning, but we had hours left before we had to face it. Until then... she was mine, this time was ours, and I wasn't stopping anything."
Wow, just wow!!! Lovin the lemon crisp, lemon meringue pie, the lemon drops, and the lemon essence. Good job with the animalistic- can't stop those inherent urges... great lemon BITES!! Of course Edward is the dominant... did we ever think otherwise? MWAH!! Thanks for taking me away from the golf tournament that my mom's b-friend is watching- into another world! Yay!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always so happy when I get positive feedback for this chapter, because it took so much out of me! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Not Enough Time
Well written but very sad. Makes me feel bad for Edward. He is so protective and loving. It is hard for me to know he's in pain, anguish really. They were so happy. But the good news is I know where this story is going, so I can look forward to Edward's POV of things and know it will all work out in the end, no matter how sad they all are now. I so LOVE Edward's POV. There should be a version from him for every one of the 4 books! (Hint,hint) ;D
Author's Response: I just adore EPOV as well. It adds a whole new depth to it, in my opinion, regardless of who's writing it. Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:54 PM · On: The Pink Nightmare
Very good, fun chapter. My five year old girl just happened to walk in the room when I was looking at the pink nightmare. Now it is MY pink nightmare! She does not understand that that monstrosity costs as much as our current home loan! She wants it and she don't care how she gets it. I have to admit though, if I was filthy, stinkin' rich like the Cullens', my baby girl would have that thing too!
And as for Edward and Bella... Sssssmmmokin' hot! Tsss!
Author's Response: Haha! The pink nightmare strikes again!
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:38 PM · On: The Cottage
Loved the biting explanation and the idea that Bella was always his "mate" in more ways than one... that was some SWEET lemonade, glad the birthing is behind us!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! But just wait, you will be DROWNING in lemonade in the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 01:38 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Wow. That was excellent! I really enjoyed the whole chapter. An all lemon chapter, what a great idea!
Great writing, great sex, great house and bed destruction, and really great posessive Edward. He can bite me anytime! I loved this more than I can express.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it!! It took so much out of me, I was exhausted! ;-) (just like the lucky couple!)
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:05 PM · On: The Cottage
Saving part 2 for tomorrow. Must sleep now! I know it will be good though. you have yet to disappoint me. Resuming the read in the morning. After the kids leave for school. ;D
Author's Response: Hehehe, save the best for later!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:00 PM · On: The Cottage
That was fucking AWESOME! So hot. I'm so glad he bit her. She would have become incorrigable, don't you think?! Great chapter. looking forward to part deux ;)
Author's Response: Ooh, starting part deux?? Get your cigarettes ready and prepare the cold shower!! That is my lengthiest and most insane lemon EVER!!! I hope you like it! Let me know!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Awake
THAT is what I thought should have happened on thier first hunt together! I am always disappointed when reading BD at this part, because as an adult, I know they would definately have sex privately in the forest after the hunt, before they went back to a not private house full of vamps and werewolves. Especially with Bella not knowing about their cottage yet. It only makes sense, right?
Author's Response: I totally agree!! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:19 PM · On: The Lump
Oh, FUCK that was INTENSE!! Very well done I must say.
Author's Response: Thank God that it came across that way. I was worried it would fall flat when reading it.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Divided
I just don't get those people who hate BD. That is what she wrote period. It is how she wanted HER STORY to end. I do however thank God for people like you who just have to know what our darling Edward was thinking and feeling. Of all the Twilight books, MIdnight Sun is my very favorite, simply because I am ALL ABOUT EDWARD. He's my guy, my fantasy, my everything. (Yes I know he's a fictional character) Don't get me wrong, I love ALL of the books, just how she wrote them, but I love indulging in the fan fiction, because they can go where her moral compass could not. Thank you for your wonderful smut. I look forward to it every day. This is such a great story. I'm enjoying every minute of it, so thanks.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so flattered!!! I agree with everything you said about the books, ESPECIALLY about BD. It was how it was SUPPOSED to be! And for everyone who says it all came out of left field... HOW? She sets it up in Eclipse! Oh well, at least there are others who agree. I'm so happy you like my story, I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Absolutely crazy and fascinating. And perv ;) Definitely the best chapter so far.
Author's Response: I hope they keep getting better. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Not Enough Time
this is awesome! I love how your keeping with the original story line. Love that your giving the sexual details and that its all in Edwards POV!! Cant stop reading!!
Author's Response: That's exactly what I'm hoping to do, anyway. I'm glad you are liking it!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:40 AM · On: The Other Boot
I think this is a very good, well written rehash of the important details. And boy that's one heavy boot! Great lemons before the boot.
Reading on...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are reading on despite the boot!
Reviewer: bun (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:02 AM · On: The Cottage
WOWWWWWWWWWWW
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:00 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Even BETTER!
Author's Response: ;) Glad you approve!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Ok, I swore! That was really good. It stuck to canon and character very well, besides the dirty talk (which I love) and it was written very well. Good detail. I hate the honeymoon stories that forget she is a virgin and forget about her hymen and the blood that goes with him breaking it. I feel for our beloved Edward though. Poor baby.
About him being so freaked out the next morning, I always thought he should have paid closer attention to the way Bella was acting, instead of assuming that she would lie to him about being hurt. He might have had a bit less angst if he had.
Author's Response: I totally agree with how Edwad acted towards her in the book. He should have loosened up a bit.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Explorations
That was REALLY good!
Author's Response: I hope you keep reading and let me know what you think!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
Wow, this is getting better and better!
Author's Response: That's what I'm hoping for!
Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:48 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
that was fucking hot
Author's Response: Thanks! That lemon too a LOT out of me!!!
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:19 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
So hot!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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