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Reviewer: sunnyfara (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:54 PM · On: The Lump
Wow. Poor Edward is right. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! That was such a difficult chapter to write.
Reviewer: sunnyfara (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Divided
Wow. Bravo. I finally paused reading to review. What an amazing job you did capturing what was really going on in E's head!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:46 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
You could never write a crap chapter! This was brilliant! I loved it! I loved Edward's reaction to everything, it was very well done!!! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried it would come out all jumbled. I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:28 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
It was not crap!!!! It was great! LOL
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:41 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Don't beat yourself up the chapter is not crap!!! I will not have you talking about one of my fave authors like that!
This is one of the hardest parts of the story b/c there is sooo much dialogue to get through and such a lead up! I look forward to the second part and the yummy epilogue!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I hope you like the second part, too!
Reviewer: swross (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:05 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
In layman's terms: The stupid bitch finally knew that she had fucked up royally.
This is why I love this story... you always get to the knitty gritty of what Edward was really thinking during all four of those huge books! Great chapter! Remember, I REALLY want you to do something with Jane that wasn't in Bella's POV in BD!! Use your imagination and GO WILD... as only you can do! MWAH!! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Don't worry, there is much more to come with Jane!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:20 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
No Kate, I have no idea if Garrett is single. I'd be happy to check into that for you in, say, a few hours. Kinda busy right now.
tee hee that lil diddy made me snort! I can't wait to see who they get to play Garrett, personally I would love for it to be Josh Holloway or keanua Reeves
Author's Response: Ooh, i hadn't even thought about who they would cast for Garrett.
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:39 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Loved it. Loved it particularly from Edward's point of view which was something new.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought BD deserved some EPOV.
Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:26 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Fabulous story, please post more soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!
Reviewer: CMC17 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:48 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
very very good! can't wait for the next chapter. I like what Renesmee was thinking
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:39 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Another wonderful chapter, bb! How I do love your story, Nessie and all. :-)
Oh, and I updated "From the Cutting Room Floor." I think...no, I KNOW...you'll love this chapter. And my new story posted as well...I'd be honored if you'd check it out! There will be lemons later, I promise. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I knew the Cutting Room had updated, i've been DYING to go check it out, but I forced myself to avoid all updates this week until I had something to post! Now I'm going to be checking that out!
And a NEW story,too?!! AWESOME!!
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:10 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Awesome chapter! I was so excited today when I saw you had updated. I can't wait for part 2!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad it didn't suck! ;) Part 2 is coming soon!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:50 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
YAY!! The battle (not so much but I like it anyway)!!
Will it have a sequel???
Author's Response: Well, part 2 of this scene will be coming soon. As for the story having a sequel, no. Not as far as I know right now. There might be some sort of outtake in the future for auction or something. Hard to say!
Reviewer: metalhead (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:02 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
good but i think there should be more thoughts edward is having of renesmee because usually a daughter is more important to a father than anything even the mother. her well being should be his #1 priority.
Author's Response: There's still a 2nd part coming, and he has much more worrying to do!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 07:17 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
I had a feeling that Aro was a perv. Thanks for confirming it. LOL
No, this chapter was not crap, how could it be? You write too well for that. I love your version of things, you know.
Although we know the basics of what happens at this point, I'm still looking forward to the next chapter where we can see your spin on things...
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, he is a bit of a perv, isn't he??
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:58 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
This is one of my favorite Breaking Dawn stories. The Blood Lust just make it that much better. I love how everyone's asking Edward trival questions. Especially Tanya, that's funny. Edward can be funny wondering if casius made up words during scabble. I love how the wolves came to the diffence of the Cullen's. Although I know the outcome of this story. I love reading your version. Come back soon. I can't wait to hear what you do with the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest of it!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:12 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Okay this is intense from Edwards POV!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping to get it out soon!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:57 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Bloody hell, this is ridiculous! I know exactly how this story is going to end and yet I'm still on the edge of my seat, biting my nails to the quick. I am absolutely gagging for the next chapter and can't wait to read Edward's reaction when Bella throws out her shield to protect them all from Jane and Alec. Absolute kudos to you for making a story we are all completely familiar with so exciting and new.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! That is SUCH a great compliment!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:56 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Love his pov...i think the chapter is wonderful...loved what u did with renesme
Author's Response: Thank you! I like her the more I write about her.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:38 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
:) Definitely NOT a crap part 1. LOVED it. Especially the fact that it was Edward's point of view of the whole confrontation with the Volturi. I'd always wondered whilst reading Breaking Dawn what his POV would have been like.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like part 2
Reviewer: nataliem (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:23 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Quickly please!! I'll pee my pants if I have to wait too long!!!! Seriously, when I started this chapter, I thought, "oh how sweet she's trying to incorporate what we all wanted, I hope it isn't a god-awful mess!" And now I'm thinking, "Has Stephenie Meyer seen this??? IS she Stephenie Meyer???" It's PERFECT! i can't wait to see the rest of it, and oh god am i excited for the epilogue. I have a secret desire that you will just keep going and let me spy on Bella and Edward's happily ever after forever! I love you! Keep it up!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You are so sweet! Thank you! I was honestly worried that it WAS a god-awful mess! I'm glad you didn't think so
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:42 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
that was NOT crap!! It was great and can't wait for the next chapter..I love love love this edward and Bella
Author's Response: Thank you! I just always get nervous whenever I write a chapter that's based so much on the book. I'm worried my own writing won't show through. I'm happy you like it!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:13 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
Awesome. It is great hearing from Edward's POV just before the Volturi guard arrived to the clearing. Then to hear all the thoughts running through Aro, Caius, Irina, etc... It's like getting a first hand knowledge of step by step on the battlefield. Everyone around and their immediate reaction based on their thoughts and what they can hear from Edward of what they thought. Edward doesn't realize the tingling sensation is his wife and her shield protecting him. It's also great to hear Jake's thoughts in the book you had an idea of what he was asking based on Edward's response to his questions and remarks. Looking forward to further mind attacks and Edward's reaction to them being denied access. Especially Jane. Caius makes so many mistakes in the next chapter makes you think the man has no brains or hasn't learned anything over all the centuries he has existed. They are just too confident of their power they get sloppy and cocky. Looking forward to them realizing they have no opportunity too win and they leave with their tails tucked tightly up their ass.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I am looking forward to writing the next one!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:17 AM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
I loved it and no it did not suck. You have done a good job with the story. i can't wait for the rest and see how you are going to write it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! i was just afraid it would be a boring read, so i'm thrilled you liked it!
Reviewer: mommapurvis (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:50 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
I need more! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: It's on the way soon!!! Promise!
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