Note to self: buy Esme a new bed....

This chapter was awesome. For reals. I'm beginning to run out of things to say besides "that was fucking awesome" because it definately was. Lol can't wait to read more

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Thank you!! I'll take fucking awesome any day!

Ahhahhahhahhahha. Loved this chapter the best so far!! Really!! Omg he ran out nude!!

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I loved that image, too. Naked Edward butt in the moonlight. Mmmmm..... ;-)

Sweet, innocent Bella Swan said pussy!! Oh my goodness.... Dirty talkin edward too!! I can see why everyone likes this story so much. Lmao

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People like my story? Yay!!! Thank you for the review. I LOVE Dirty Talking Edward.

This story could stand alone without the awesome lemons. Edward's inner dialog is hilarious. Great chapter. My favorite part is when Edward heard Carlisle and Esme's reactive thoughts to Caius. Thanks for the update.

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Wow! I don't think I've ever heard anyone say that! I always thought this was a bunch of words stuck between lemons, so I'm unbelievably flattered!!!

Brilliant, fantastic, superb, marvellous, fabulous, wonderful .... just a few of the superlatives which spring to mind.  You captured the essence of this part of BD incredibly well, keeping it tight without losing the sense of jeopardy and looming tragedy.  As I suspected, you handled the reveal of Bella's plan to save Nessie brilliantly and, despite knowing the outcome, I had tears brimming throughout the whole passage.  I cannot praise this story highly enough - you should write the bloody script for BD!  As for the epilogue, I look forward to it with both delighted anticipation and dread, because it will mean the end of this exceptionally well written and wonderfully paced story.

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Awww.... thank you so much!! What a lovely review! I'm so happy that you liked this chapter. I was worried it would be a big jumbled mess.

That was actually a hell of a lot more interesting than SM's version, simply because we could hear their thoughts.  Excellent job, bb!  :-)

Oh, and this story will get some pimpage on April 5th...I've got your Perv Pack's Smut Shack "Lemon Shot" already written, and I hope you like it!  

xoxo Sarah

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Yay! I'm glad you liked it!! I'm so excited, I can't wait for April 5th!!!

I'm going to miss this story so much..sniff. You've done a fabulous job with EPOV.  Loved the snarky thoughts of "innocent" Carlisle & Esme ;+)  Emmett...such a huggable kissable teddy bear. Great job nailing Aro's true intentions as well.  Linda

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Thank you for following this story as long as you have! I'm so happy that I've managed to keep you coming back for updates!

Wow! Amazing! Brilliant! Breathtaking! Ingenious! Any and all accolades possible belongs to you!

You had me crying like a baby when Edward realized Bella was saying goodbye to their daughter and to Jake. I was absolutely sobbing - and it's not as if I didn't know how everything would turn out! The power of your words made it impossible to withstand the onslaught of emotions. I cracked.

Okay, **pulling myself together** here are some of my favorite lines:

… wonder if he'll sound so tough when I rip his balls off and show them to him … Esme?!

I felt such admiration for him at that moment that I wished we were human so I could buy him a beer. - because obviously that's the best way for a man to show appreciation for another man... lol

I'm so sad that this story is almost over, although I have to admit I'm reeeaaally looking forward to the epilogue. Do you have any plans on writing a new story? Please, please, please, say that you do!!!

 

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Thank you so much for such a lovely review!! I always hope to convey some kind of emotion and that it doesn't fall flat when people read it, but I'm always so amazed when people tell me they were so moved that they cried. Or laughed. Any definite physical reaction is unbelievably flattering to me!!

As for your question, yes. I am planning on starting up a new story as soon as I'm done with the epilogue. I've been wanting to write an AU/AH story that's been kicking around in my head for months, but I couldn't concentrate on writing two at one time. I hope you'll check it out when it's up! Be sure to put me on author alert, that way you'll know whenever I post something new.

Yummy!  I love it!  This version of Edward is incredibly hot.  I love how descriptive your writing is and all of the detail that goes into it.  Very nice....I must continue on and see if "'practice makes perfect". 

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Thank you so much for starting my story! I hope that you enjoy the rest of it!!

Oh this was terrific! You even had me teary-eyed in parts.  Yes, really. lol

Terrifically vibrant and passionate Edward.  His internal monologues reflect his inner thoughts while his outer dialogue reflects his belief in his manners and the times in which his speech patterns were formed. I love it.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us! It was, I know, a huge work for you but it has not gone unappreciated.

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Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you have enjoyed it!!

this was beautiful. i cried so hard, even knowing the outcome. what a joy this has been from edward's pov. i know i may not be the majority, but i loved breaking dawn, and hearing it from epov has been so precious. it's late and i'm typing in the dark like the insomniac that i am, so i will leave a better review at the epilogue, but you did great, and thank you so much!

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That means so much to me, because I am a BD lover, too. I just always felt it needed something more. This was my something more. I'm glad you liked it!!

good job! can't wait for the epi

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Thank you!!