BEAUTIFULL!  This was well done.  I'm going to miss reading this story.  LOVED the ending, stayed true to SM, done fast and more.  Their last love making, sooooooo intense!  I think if a human felt so much stimulation as those two, our head would literally splatter all over the walls.  Onece again lovely and now your one of my favorite authors.   BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!

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Awww!! Thank you so much! I agree, I don't think any mere mortal could handle that much Edward. (but I'd love to die trying!)

You did awesome with epov...thanks for writing it for everyone!

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

I know what you mean when you talk about the sorrow of finishing a story. I remember how reviews truly did make it better, that being said...

I LOVE YOUR FUCK HOT LEMONS!

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Yay!!! My fuck hot lemons love you too!!! ;-)

Thank you!

Wonderful to hear EPOV all through Breaking Dawn.  Finally after the Volturi left the tension amongst the family has receeded.  Edward was retelling the thoughts of Aro and other Volturi men.  Aro was fearful of Bella and looking for a reason to back down from their attack.  Luckily Alice gave him that information in the form of Nuhiel. Edward snuggled among the 3 of his favorite women.  His wife, his daughter, and his sister, Alice.  He is listening to Nuhiel thoughts about his family. Edward is happy everything is over as Jake inferred it's going to be pretty dull around the house with out all the other vampires around.  But that's exactly what Bella and Edward want to have some peace.  Their life has been in turmoil from the beginning.  Things appeared to be great on their honeymoon until Bella became pregnant and then Edward turned into the dying man.  Once Edward could read the baby's thoughts in the womb he finally acknowledged the child in Bella's womb.  All of their memorable nights in their cottage only to have it all seem to be for naught.  The Cullens and their friends outwitted and out powered the famous Volturi.  Haven't been stopped for over 2500 years.  Quite a record, never should have come up against the Cullens.  My favorite part was when they returned to the cottage after Edward explained Nuhiel was watching her and Nessie wishing his mother had survived.  He is even more mad at his father because if he cared for his mother then they could have been happy together.  Instead for him to be born his mother was ripped apart and died in the process.  Here was Bella, pregnant while human and her husband loved her so much that once the baby was delivered safely he proceeded to save her with his vemon.  I liked when Edward got to read Bella's thoughts.  Talk about being completely blown away.  Especially when he could hear them while they were making love.  All a new sensation for him.  All these years of never hearing one thought of Bella's and now whenever she pushed her shield away he'd be able to know what she was thinking.  It sure would have come in handy after the first night on Isle Esme.  Would have saved him a lot of time in the dog house for ruining Bella's happiness and bliss.  Excellent story from Edward's POV.  The man does do a lot of thinking.  The story went from joyous and happy with a lot of laughter and smiles then to ultimate sadness and despair and tears to fall.  Enjoyed the story from start to finsh. Looking forward to your next story.

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Thank you so much for all of the reviews! I'm happy that you enjoyed it and shared it with me.

This was one of my favorite stories....so exquisite and sensual. I'd love for you to do another fan fic. You do a great job!

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Thank you so much! I do have another story in the works, but it's going to be an AU/AH fic. I hope you check it out when it posts.

God....*quick pantie change* that was amazing... sigh *blowing nose wiping tears* I can't believe it is over! You did such sweet justice to Bella's gift- it was everything times two... which made it exponentially better, sweeter, and Edward was indeed saved! Loved all of your lemons, your hilarious Eddie voices in italics, and your great canon EPOV that is one of the best and zestiest out there in fandom. Will definately favorite you, sweet girl, MWAH! Until we meet again!

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Thank you so much! I have enjoyed all the great reviews you have left in the past. Thank you for waiting it out with me.

Such a great story!  I looked forward to every update and anxiously awaited them all.  This has been such a pleasure to read.  I can't remember if I've reviewed before, but I read and review a lot of stuff so that's a given.  Really, really great job with this.  I can tell you love Edward as much as I do.  Have you seen the new stills from "Eclipse"?  Edward looks so HOT in that black sweater. *swoon*

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Oh my, yes. What that man can do to a black vneck just isn't right.

Thank you for the lovely review!

Great job so fun to read, look forward to more from you!

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

loved your story!!! please write something soon!

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Thank you! I should hopefully have something new up in a few more weeks.

wow the fact of there "last" night together... well from edwards point of view its intense... although we ALL no that the epilogue is gonna be hotttt ;)

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I hope you like it when you get there!

I really enjoyed this story. I love stories from EPOV. Thanks.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.  Brilliant ending, and Edward finally getting inside Bella's head was everything and more I had hoped for - I knew you would nail it and you exceeded every expectation.  I have thoroughly enjoyed this version of BD, it's been a hell of a ride and I can't thank you enough for letting me join you on the trip.  I will be adding you to my favourite authors because I very much look forward to reading more from you.

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Wow, what a lovely review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed traveling with me on my little EDventure!