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Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Epilogue: Possession
thanks so much for this! It was really good. I loved him reading her mind, it all fit and really worked. I mostly congratulate you on the biting thing, very original and unique and worked well too! thanks again =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading along and leaving so many lovely reviews!!! I'm happy you liked it!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:11 PM · On: A New Day
I really liked this version. I think SM should have written BD from the point of view of Edward, or at least once Bella was changed. I really really liked it welldone!
Author's Response: I can't ever say enough for how much I wanted EPOV, so I"m glad you liked it, too!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:01 PM · On: The Tea Party
love the last line!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Training, Trust, and Christmas
Hi
By the by, I completely agree with you on Hide and Drink. Amazing writing. She writes a man very well. I like the rough sex with Bella and Edward and overall its a good take on Breaking Dawn. I know you are sticking to canon but you are managing to work in your own take which is great. One thing I am not crazy about is the family crest because I believe that is from the movie not the books, could be wrong there, but I think the crest isn't great anyway, so I would have made it something else, but that is minor! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: No, you're right, it's not from the books, only the movie. I just thought it would be a nice way to tie the two together and give him a decent present to give her. Good call, tho!
Reviewer: penny2 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:43 AM · On: The Lump
I'd rather have you write the script for the next movies
Author's Response: HA!! Hey, I'd love to if they would pay me!! (or let me take it out in trade with Rob!)
Reviewer: penny2 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
This is the hottest thing I have ever read. I started reading this stuff for lunch abd I have not done a damn thing since. Sure hope the boss doesn't come by
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you so much! I adore hearing from new readers. I hope you like the rest of it, it only gets hotter from here!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:14 AM · On: The Pink Nightmare
Brilliant and I loved the bed! Just a question though, I thought Edward bit her neck and then her shoulder. I thought Bella bit his collar bone? Hmmm, maybe I misremembered. Anyway, great chapter!
Author's Response: They bite each other all over the place. Sometimes in the same spot, sometimes not. It's been so long since I wrote it, I honestly don't remember the order. I just know they LOVED it! ;-)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:57 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
I quite liked it, I loved all the lemons and did not mind the submission, totally my favorite part!
Author's Response: Yay! That is one of my all time favorite chapters. I'm glad you liked it! I was exhausted after writing it!!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:24 AM · On: The Cottage
Very cool! I really liked the conversation with Carlisle. It actually made a lot of sense to me! Biting is yummy! loved it! I am glad that you are adding in all the sex that was missing from BD. It really annoyed me that once the baby was born, the romance kind of ended and Edward became almost a peripheral character in the book. Thanks!
Author's Response: YES HE DID!!!
That is exactly why I felt he deserved his own version of the story, and why I didn't stray from canon. I wanted THAT Edward to get a chance to talk.
Reviewer: cristy (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Epilogue: Possession
I reallly enjoy reading this storyp.you did an excellent job and you really knew how to write in Edward's pov..it was definitely one of my favorite stories..thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you found my story and liked it! My new one should hopefully be posting any day now!
Reviewer: missyninz (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Epilogue: Possession
fun? understatement. enough said. x
Author's Response: Yay!!! I'm glad you had.... MORE than fun!!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Possession
PERFECT.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely reviews! I'm so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:02 PM · On: A New Day
The Wonder Twins? I love you, You rock!
Author's Response: HA!! You are the first one to mention that!!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Visitors
I think I had a stroke, too. Next chapter I'm gonna take two aspirin before reading, just in case ;) LOVED IT!!!
Author's Response: Well, fireplace sex can cause that! Be careful!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:33 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Holy shit, girl, you are the bomb diggity!
Author's Response: Awww... thanks!!! That's one of my favorite chapters!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:00 PM · On: The Cottage
quite possibly better than I could have imagined, whew
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: tonia4rob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Awake
awwww....I want Edward to be my baby's daddy.
and, I want some lemonade from that lemon, seriously good, good stuff, chick!
Author's Response: Oh, me too!!!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NoWayWithWords (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Epilogue: Possession
Absolutely fantastic ending! I'm almost crying that it's over... I added it to my favorites when you posted your first chapter (under my other account, not in my writing penname). I love this story and recommend it to everyone I talk to about fanfic!
Keep up the excellent work - give us more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the support! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it all.
Reviewer: mousekemom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Possession
Wow! I am so impressed with your version of the story. I like how you didn't rehash the same thing like many others had done. It was Edward's POV, but you filled in the blanks. Smut wasn't too bad either...hee hee hee. Kudos! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I tried to come at it a different way. I'm glad you noticed!
Reviewer: msa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Explorations
Oh holy hell--love the dirty talk. You are a master!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
There's more where that came from!! Keep reading!
Reviewer: msa (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
OH MY GOD!!! This story is H-O-T. I am blown away right now...sorry not thinking straight!
Author's Response: No need to think straight as long as you enjoy it!!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:01 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
It takes some serious skill (or perversion) to go from breaking the bed to a 69 all the way to "who's your daddy" domination in one freakin chapter! :P craziness! Also, I'm not quite sold on the whole biting thing, but I'm dealing wtih it...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, I think you're the first who WASN'T sold on the biting. I've had people yell at me whenever I leave it out! ;-)
Reviewer: mousekemom (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 05:08 PM · On: The Pink Nightmare
I think I like the metal framed carriage bed from Rooms to Go Kids. Looks like Cinderella's carriage from Disney World. I am really enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved finding that insane bed!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Explorations
brb..gotta change my panties...O.M.G!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah... that might happen again! Forgot to include a warning!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
wow...vary naughty! GAH!
Author's Response: It gets much more naughty!! ;-)
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