OH.MY.GOD.SO.FUCKING.SEXY.WOW.MUST.KEEP.READING. O_O even though i have work in the ....OH WELL hahahah GREAT JOB *continues reading****

 Beautiful. I've read quite a few stories, and this is the first I comment on. Couldn't resist.  Edward's POV is difficult enough, since he is so much more mature and educated than Bella, bit this is elegant, witty and well-thought out.  Absolutely consistent with the novels. Don't change a thing!

I had this review all mapped out in my head last night and then i lost my internet, so, here I am, a day late and a dollar short. (the story of my life!) Your story had a most satisfying ending and I truly did love reading Edward's side of things. Yor lemons are superb! Great stuff and I hope to read more, thanks again.

No way was this chapter crap, rather more a macabre tennis match, serve and volley. I did wonder that Edward was unaware of that funny feeling being Bella throwing her shield around him. No need to tell you what a bunch of blackhearted bastards the Volturi are.

Sort of a sad Christmas, thinking it may be the only one they get with their daughter. The hot pink Ipod loaded with daddy's music was a wonderful gift as was the gold locket with the inscription,'more tahan my own life'. I loved Bella's gifts, the one she gave and the one she received. Glad that Edward could lose himself in his music for a time, it must have been such a relief, though not near as much as the sex he had with Bella after she returned. 

The first hurdle is past and Edward now realizes why he's never been able to hear Bella's thoughts. It's extremely difficult for him to understand why Alice and Jasper have seemingly abandoned their family. With all the stress and uncertainty, it's no wonder he and Bella have turned to each other and their love for solace. I think it's so great that he trusts Bella so much to do the right thing, that he won't badger her about what she's hiding from him. Now that's real true love!

That pink pumpkin coach is somrthing else and I'm not quite sure what. I can imagine some little girls  would love it, if mom and dad had a lot of disposable income. Irina has seen Renessmee and jumped to the wrong conclusion, and we know how well that turns out. Lucky the Cullens were already planning a trip to South America. Perfection never lasts long for Bella and Edward, does it?

Just my opinion of course, but I think you get an A, for your vampy lovin', that was amazing! It's a good thing Edward had that little talk with Carlisle, it gave him a heads up and forwarning. Bella sure seemed happy about that bite, now she knows who's boss. 

What's any different about this moment in their lives? It comes down to Edward and Bella, Bella and Edward, first, last, and always, only those two together. They have now been blessed with a child but their love for each other is still the foundation. When Bella wakes up from the change she will want her baby and her mate. Anything they do to, for, or with each other will be glorious, I know that for sure.

You get no criticism from me, I loved breaking Dawn, borrow from it all you want. You do add a bunch of real good sex to what was a good story to begin with, so it's all good. The only sad part is how panic stricken Edward is for the next couple of weeks, the poor guy goes through hell for a while.

Talk about not seeing the forest for the trees, how could Edward have forgotten that virgin brides bleed? At least he had the presence of mind to run far and fast away from Bella, to save her life. Up until that point, they were doing fabulously, couldn't have been any better. You absolutely aced it, hot sex-wise.

Step by step, they are getting closer to the brass ring. Here's hoping the merry-go-round doesn't derail any time soon. You know what they say, practice truly does make perfect.