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Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Explorations
OMG! I just found this story and added it to my favorites! You are a GOD... best dirty talk ever. More, please! more more more! I can only wish my husband would talk to me like that! One Edward to go, please! sigh, one can dream.
Author's Response: Oh, I think we ALL wish Edward... uh, I mean our husbands, would talk to us like that! ;) Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Phangirl24 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Explorations
This fic rocks!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Gotta love dirty talking Edward :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I fully agree about dirty talking Edward!
Reviewer: Bjornsdotter (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Explorations
This is where I would love to leave an amazing review, but frankly I'm a puddle of goo right now. Gahhh, I want an Edward too! Amazing chapter, just amazing. Thanks for sharing!!
Author's Response: That's alright, I appreciate goo puddle reviews, too! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Explorations
Good thing Edward finally got some release. He was going to seriously go over the edge.
Very tasty lemony lemons. Just the right amount of tart/sweet balance.
Honeymoon huh?
Guess I'll be back for more...
Author's Response: I hope you make it back! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Explorations
holy hell! you are one talented smut writer! that was the first time i have ever read about edward getting a umm well what should we call that a titty job? ha ha ha bravo!
Author's Response: LOL, thanks! You know, funny you should mention it, but I honestly had forgotten that I'd even written that part! It sounds crazy, but I kind of trance out when I write. I make a few main goals for myself and just let it go, and next thing I know I've got all these crazy sex scenes all over the place. I re-read it today when it was posted and said to myself, "Huh... I totally forgot about the titty-fucking!" lol, I guess I'm weird like that! (although I did wonder at the time if anyone had ever done that in a twific before, lol)
Thank you so much for the review!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Explorations
loved it
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Explorations
awesome story
poor edward i think he should suffer a little more it will make the honeymoon that more explosive heha
keep writing pleeeease!
Author's Response: Well, the honeymoon is next chapter, but poor Edward still has one big bout of suffering to do.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:33 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
Hey, at least he only bit himself. But, will he see it as a positive? Probably not.
Author's Response: So true, so true...
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Explorations
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!THEY SURE CAN'T LAST MUCH LONGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: heather5476 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Explorations
HOT!HOT!HOT! I freakin love this story..keeep up the glorious writing. (never knew I liked dirty talk this much..heehee) :)
Author's Response: Hehe, ain't no shame in the dirty talk game!!! I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: Libby Michaels (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Explorations
Oh my god. As a veteran smutster, it takes a lot to get me really flustered. I think my eyes crossed, and I feel like I'm in that postorgasmic haze like B and E are. Well done!
Author's Response: From one smutster to another, THANK YOU!!!! That means a lot!
Reviewer: Raindrops (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Explorations
Wow! This story is so much fun to read. I am loving the smut I love the internal diaglog Edward has with himself, too... that is great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! that means a lot!
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Explorations
Wow - this is *REALLY* awesome! I love seeing the animal side of Edward! If you're continuing through the honeymoon, will you be writing through Bella's change? I think you'd definitely rock the lemons with vampire sex!
Author's Response: That is definitely the plan! I just have to get there! lol
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Explorations
Just so you know, according to Dane Cook, the female equivalent of a "cock tease" or "cock blocker" would be "twat swatter". Or maybe "twat tease". That has nice alliteration, lol!
And HOLY FUCK! I'm such a sucker for dirty talk, just like Bella. And a dirty talking Edward? I think I might have to go change my panties, and no, I'm not kidding.
Seriously, yours is one of the hottest stories I've read, and I think that has something to do with the language you use. I'm not one for constant use of "member" or "core" (I'm not an apple, dammit, I don't have a 'core'!), so it's refreshing to read a story with "cunt" and "cock" and "pussy". Just my two cents...don't change a fucking thing.
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I feel exactly the same way! I like flowery talk for a while, 100% vulgarities sometimes seems too much, but if they are intermixed just right, I think it is a winning combo. REAL people don't usually talk that way. When using dialogue, I try to make them sound real. Now, I know not everyone likes dirty talk... but hey, I DO!!!! ;) Glad to know I'm not alone!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Explorations
...Wow. That was... incredibly hot. Um, well done!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: janeg33 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Explorations
OOF!
Author's Response: lol
Reviewer: Embree (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Explorations
Ooooo... Honeymoon. I don't know how much more poor Edward or his sparkly can take, but I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Explorations
wow, that was quite the romp.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like to make em good & rompy! ;)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Explorations
First, I am so relieved that he bit the comforter. For a second I was afraid his dick tore a hole through Bella's panties and found its way home (thus explaining the ripping noise). I keep expecting Emmett to see the new scars on Edward's hands and pestering him about them. Then teasing him to death. *grin*
Thank goodness the honeymoon's almost here! It doesn't sound like either one of them are going to be able to hold out for much longer. Bella in particular is getting really adventurous! I'm impressed, go Bella!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Go Bella, indeed!!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Explorations
That was awesome. He's going to rip her in half if she keeps that up!!
Author's Response: LOL, Bella is getting quite feisty, no?
Reviewer: jral07 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
W-O-W...PLEASE CONTINUE!!! This is some insanely steamy material =P I'm lovin it! Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Ache (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
Ahhh! That was HOT! -fans self-
Thank you for the... exquisite... lemons!
Author's Response: You are more than welcome!!! I look forward to a life full of lemons, dripping in lemonade!! ;)
Reviewer: alunastrs (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
I think I have come back to this story about 3 times now! I am sooo ready for the 4th Chapter. :)
Author's Response: Awwwww!!!! You have no idea how flattering that is to me! Chap 4 should be up any day now. (I hope!)
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
OMG!!! That was fanfuckingtastic!!! I LOVE dirty perv Edward, but I especially love the difference between internal monologue and spoken dialogue... and then he calls himself out with "always the polite boyscout arn't we"!!!! I CANNOT wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it so far! Be sure to check back soon, chapter 4 should be up by the weekend, I hope.
Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:57 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
loved it!! So Edward. So well wirtten!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate that!
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