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Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:39 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Well, when Edward lets loose he doesn't do things halfway, does he? *grin* Knowing what happened with Bella's blood makes a lot more sense than just the bruises being the cause of his freakout, imo.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. I just don't buy the bruises thing. HAD to be more!
Reviewer: Louise-Francoise (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:04 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
I am totally loving pervward....!
Author's Response: Pervward is just.... so pervingly delicious!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:44 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Phew, this is hot, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:28 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
yes vey smutty, oh so wish he was mine lol
Author's Response: ME TOO!!!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:27 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
I loved this chapter!! I cant' wait for the next!!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's coming, I promise.
Reviewer: Greenaway (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 04:18 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
awesome as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: So are your reviews!!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
Wow! I had to keep reading, but I am still virtually speechless with this. It is so hot, and so loving, and just lovely. I love the dirty talkin'. I love that they are pushing boundaries for them. This is an excellent story idea, and you are doing a fine job fleshing out the idea completely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that really means a lot. I've been getting more negative feedback over at ff.net. A lot of people are saying that it's TOO dirty, and that "virginal Bella & Victorian Edward" would never speak like that. Well... I'm a smutty perv and so are the characters I write, lol. Even if I'm borrowing someone else's. I'm so happy you like the dirty talk, too.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:06 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
This is REALLY GOOD. Honestly, I am barely coherent after reading this. You must forgive me, but I will have to read this a second time and leave you an intelligible review once I I have calmed down. As for now, VERY WELL DONE. I love this fic.
Author's Response: That's wonderful! I love unintelligible reviews! It means I've done my job!! ;)
Reviewer: Belle_Morte (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:30 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Oh Pervward... *thud* Yum ;-)
Author's Response: Ahh yes... that Pervward will make you faint every time!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Ahaha! I never thought of it that way! Maybe that IS why Edward was so upset the morning after... Hummmm....
Author's Response: I still think it just HAD to be more than a few bruises.
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:40 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Pervward was amazing.... I am loving this story and hope you continue to be inspired, either with this or with a new project :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love our dear little Pervward!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Explorations
Jesus christ that was fucking hot! I about had my own climactic coma when Edward was tit-fucking Bella. Ugh. This was so freaking hot. I need new underwear before I go to the next chapter. Although I think it would probably be a waste.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!
(yes, panties are a waste with these two horny kids around)
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:13 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
That was freakin Hot GO Girl i loved it i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:55 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Great chapter.
Wow. That's all I can say.....
He controlled himself! Yay for Edward!
Please update soon?
Author's Response: There's another chapter coming. Hopefully won't be too long.
Reviewer: amiebug (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:52 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
all i have to say is...dont you dare let that husband of your keep you from writting!!! great chapter...can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I'm working on it, believe me!
Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:44 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
So, THAT'S how he broke the headboard! :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, well, it's how I picture it, at least.
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Your version of the story fits in perfectly. I never imagined that Edward ripped the pillows apart as they were having sex but I think you are right! I love Edwards POV - being inside his head is fun! Poor baby - the first time is hard enough but to have to deal with all that blood lust too! Ouch!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! That was honestly the only thing I ever thought about the pillows, and I wanted to see that acted out rather than mentioned as an afterthought.
I'm so happy that you like my little version of Pervward. I love getting inside his head, too.
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
well, damn. that definetly explains edwards reaction in BD. allot of times with the stories that have edward and bella practicing intamacy it almost seems that he gets too good at controling him self and that their first time, in cannon, doesnt reflect that. this makes a lot more sense.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I tried really hard to convey the reason for his panic. I just didn't think that some bruises alone would have made him react that badly.
Reviewer: Haystackhair (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
More!! Please please please mooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeee!. Love it!!
Author's Response: It's coming! I swear!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
ok it is good but i hate when Edward gets hurt so in the future could he plzzzzzzzzzzzz not make him bite himself????? i would luv u 4ever!
Author's Response: LOL, nobody likes him to get hurt, you're not alone. Neither do I. He is working on it.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: geminix2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
un...be..liev..able...
no words... really... no words...
except "hot" and "don't stop"
Author's Response: LOL, thank you so much!!
Author's Response: LOL, thank you so much!!
Reviewer: sweetpea53010 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
this is surely better than the books...
my new favorite twilight story. you've done an amazing job getting into both of edwards heads ;) if i could rate higher than a 10 i would.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!! I'm so flattered!
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:52 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
this is a very good story! well so far anyway
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Are you going to write more after this?
I really enjoyed reading it, I can't believe they finally did it!!
Author's Response: More is on the way! Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
LOVE it. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is on the way!
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