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Reviewer: jdl45703 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 10:33 PM · On: The Dawn Has Broken
have you posted some of these as one-shot stories on fanfiction.net? i have read some of the chapters there before, and just thought i'd let you know, just in case someone else posted them without your permision.
by the way, i love this story. you did a wonderful job!!!
Author's Response: I have this story posted over there, but not as oneshots. I only have one o/s that's posted on both sites.
Reviewer: Kristina79 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:37 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
WOW WOW WOW!
What a brilliant first chapter. Thank you so much for sharing.
Author's Response: And thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: sharonjane (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Epilogue: Possession
Amanda, that was fantastic. I have been in a marathon session reading this for the last 3 or was it 4 days. As soon as I got home from work the computer was straight on and I was here to get my fix of Blood and Lust. I have to say the rollercoaster that was this story was unbelievable. The story was great, the lemons were how shall I put it 'definitely some of the best lemons I have read in fan fic' by a long shot, and believe me in the short time since I found this stuff, I have read a shit load of it!!!!!!!
I always wanted to know Edward's POV from BD it was the main thing missing (except for the lemons of course) and now I do (who gives a shit what Jacob thinks), and boy can he go on lol. I love the words you gave him, how he expressed his thoughts, feeling, his love for Renesmee and especially his love and passion for Bella. I'm going to miss this story now, I loved that the story kept growing for you after saying several times that there were only a few chapters left to go and then Edward just wouldn't shut up, fantastic.
I'm off to read 'Forever' now and then move onto 'Last Tango in Forks'. Keep up the great writing. Well I better sign off here or this is going to turn into an essay.
Thanks
Sharon
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed it that much! Everything you said is EXACTLY why I felt this story needed to be written. EPOV baby!!!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Not Enough Time
Wonderful! I can't wait for the rest! Thanks again.
Author's Response: Hope you like it!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:26 PM · On: The Pink Nightmare
OMFG that bed is amazing! What little girl wouldn't want that. It is perfect for Nessie. I love how Edward and Bella are so in love with Renesmee.
Here comes the trouble with Irina, they should have caught her. What a mess this is going to be.
Great story!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Isn't that bed just insane? And SOOOOO ALICE!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:14 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
OMG! That was amazing and HOT and who wouldn't want to be posessed like that. I just love the way you made Edward so strong and possesive and controling. Yet he loved her more than life itself! He made her say she was his and then in the end they belonged to each other completely! This was fantastic, keep these sex scenes coming!! Thank you so much this was totally HOT HOT HOT
Author's Response: I think that was my all time favorite chapter in the whole story. I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:36 PM · On: The Cottage
Ok that was intense and wonderful! I loved that he bit her! Every woman wants a man in control!!! Holy fuck! This just gets better all the time. So glad hubby is ok with your writing! This was totally awesome!!
Author's Response: I just couldn't NOT have biting in here. It's just too hot.
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Awake
Well hell yes I loved it! I love that Bella is a vampire now and so in love with Edward and they have a child.......what more is there!!
Author's Response: I know! I don't get why more people didn't like BD. I loved it.
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 11:23 AM · On: The Lump
I cried like a baby! I can't believe the torture they both went through. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! That was really hard to write.
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Divided
Ok I want to kick Rosalie needs her ass kicked. I can't believe the whole family is letting Rose run everything, and what the hell isn't Edward strong enough to take her in a fight? He would be fighting for Bella and all??? This was distrubing on so many levels!
Author's Response: Very true.... but if you reread BD, I stayed as close to the book as possible. He was absolutely miserable during this time, and I still feel robbed for not getting more of him in that book.
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:43 AM · On: The Other Boot
Every chapter you write is HOT HOT HOT!! Loved this one and want to find that beach! Could you put Edward on it for me also. Thanks!!
Author's Response: Sweetie, if I could do that, I'd never leave there!!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:08 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
All I can say is that was amazing! You have made Edward amazing! Don't let hubby stop you. You have a great talent and if he does't realize that he is not seeing the real you. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I really miss that Edward!
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Holy Fuck that was amazing!!! I can't believe what he went through and how erotic that was. I can't believe how hot the scene with her cum and blood was and Edward wanting to suck it off his fingers. I just love him and that he would protect her even when he was in a frenzy! This was the best chapter ever!!!!! Thank you
Author's Response: Oh, the sex gets even hotter if you manage to stick with the story.
Reviewer: SueQT4U (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Explorations
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!! That made me wet!! What can I say, it was fantastic and the hottest thing I have ever read! I love that you kept Edward a vampire and didn't write him as human! Wow just fucking Wow!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I am a big fan of Vampward!
Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Epilogue: Possession
sorry i didn't review before but i just couldn't keep my fingers from pressing NEXT so hear is what i have to say to you THANK YOU for making me happy i loved it it was wanderfull, i know you said that you do not plan to keep it going but it was so good that you should considered it. from the first chapter to the last it was so hat that actual cold showers where need it. on chapter 20 i cryed. and on chaptr 21 i call my husband to get of work early.... thank you again.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it!!! I'm happy you liked it!!
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:06 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
The steamier, the better! More...
Author's Response: Don't worry, there is much more steam coming!!
Reviewer: devina28 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:29 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
That was the hottest chapter I have read so far! Amazing, I might need to go take a nice cold shower after this one ;)
Author's Response: Hope you didn't get too overheated!! ;-)
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:03 PM · On: The Pink Nightmare
"Frequently I found myself wondering if one could literally fuck themselves stupid. I knew without a doubt that if it was possible, I was destined to become the happiest idiot on the face of the earth."
BWAHAHAHAH! Sooo fucking hilarious, my husband even wandered in to see what the heck was going on. Silly boy, he thought the pink nightmare was cool until I told him the price. After draging his chin off the floor he announced we are going into the furniture building business.
Author's Response: That's one helluva a racket, huh??
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:45 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Let the chafing begin...
“Who do you belong to, Bella?” Crack! “Who is fucking you senseless right now?” Crack! “Who's pussy is this?” Crack! She growled loudly, her orgasm shaking both of us, sending me to the breaking point
Err... eep *bites lip, swoons*
Author's Response: Ahhhh yesss.... that was one of my favorite parts! ;-)
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:26 PM · On: The Cottage
Bite me too, Edward! Pretty, pretty please!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Only after me!!!
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Awake
I knew there had to be more going on with those two in the woods! Now that is sexy hunting.
Author's Response: Makes me wanna take up hunting!!
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:54 PM · On: The Lump
Oh yeah, totally forgot Jacob was there too. I guess the werewolves are a bit forgetable when I get all comfy in EPOV.
Hummm... a little footsie action while under the blanket? I like the way your mind works, woman!
Oh, but what a turn to this chapter - the little mystery voice he hears just about had me bawling. This is EXACTLY what BD is missing.
Author's Response: See?? I told you it was different from EPOV!
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Divided
"Come play with me! Ask me things, tell me your dirty secrets. We can braid each other's hair and stay up all night watching Twilight. (rewinding the kissing scene over & over, of course)"
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Is it possible there was a twin seperated at birth thingy going on here?? Were you born in July? Never have I laughed so much at the chapter end notes!
Author's Response: I love having fun with it! My disclaimers are always a kick, too. :-D
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:28 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
I'm hot on the trail, reading all afternoon with only a short brea for dinner! I love your stuff - nothing pervy in that sentence (!)
Author's Response: Hehe!! Well, when you get around to it, I have an extremely steamy vampy oneshot on here, and i'm in the middle of a new AH story that's also pretty smexy. (I likes the smut!)
Reviewer: wistfulthoughts (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:25 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
I know, it makes more sense and is logical the way you wrote it. It isn't rare that I want to smack Edward upside the head. I usually prefer a fictional smack elsewhere...
Author's Response: Hehehe, too true!!
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