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Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 10:17 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
W.O.W! I loved that chapter. Edward's internal arument, the mental voices, having an argument with himself...its just so Edward. This is totally in canon. And i love how Edward was embarrassed at taking his shirt off. I think he would be really likely to do that...an embarrassed Edward is a cute Edward. :D
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:36 AM · On: The Other Boot
i am obsessed...enough said...hehe
Author's Response: Yay!!! Nothing better than a healthy obsession!
Reviewer: Wrecked Medusa (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:26 AM · On: The Other Boot
love it!
Keep up the great work....cant wait for more!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:25 AM · On: The Other Boot
OH MY GOD!!!!!!THIS CHAPTER IS SO SEXY!!!!!!!I WAS HYPERVENTILATING!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:24 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
i love this story already! 'I am terrified of not only crushing her to death with brute force, but losing my control and killing her in the heat of the moment. You know, typical newlywed problems.' heehee, thats brilliant. best lines in a story ever! :D
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Explorations
Fuck me, that was hot as hell!
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:25 AM · On: The Other Boot
I LOVED the sparkle-peen!!!! I'm running to the store now to stock up on glitter so I can attack my hubby when he gets home... he has NO IDEA what's coming *pun intended*
Author's Response: LMAO! Girl, you kill me!
Reviewer: sweetstarryeyes (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:11 AM · On: The Other Boot
Yay! Thanks for giving me a great Monday morning. My boss will appreciate it, I'm sure :). I'm honestly not a huge BD fan, but I like the way you explained Edward's reaction (the other boot dropping) makes sense and fits with his character. So I liked it, and I think you handled it very well. And everything else...well...I think I need to turn the AC on in my office now!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it! Don't burn out the AC this early into the summer!
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:44 AM · On: The Other Boot
i think it is great! i will love EPOV on the pregnancy
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to it.
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:37 AM · On: The Other Boot
Guh. Yes it was hot enough. It was AMAZING!! Reading it at work was a bad idea. *fanning self* Can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: LOL, no no no!!! Never read good smut at work!! I've learned that the hard way!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:35 AM · On: The Other Boot
OK, I gotta say that I think this should win some sort of award for hottest dirty talking phrases to come from Edward's mouth. That was beyond dirty and went into filthy and I LOVED it. Dayum.
In BD, the scene where Edward gets told about Bella's pregnancy was one of the more amusing parts of the book. I don't know why I found Statueward so funny, I think it was the way Bella was irritated with having her epiphany interrupted.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'd love some kinda kinky Pervward award! ;) And he could present it to me himself....
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:42 AM · On: The Other Boot
I loved it!!! I also love BD, so anything you add that is juicy and EPOV would be great!!!!
Author's Response: Yay!!! So nice to hear that for a change!
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:41 AM · On: The Other Boot
Wow-Love this! Can't wait for more! Please post another chapter or 10 soon!
Author's Response: LOL, I'm trying! I just need time to write!
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:37 AM · On: The Other Boot
very nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:11 AM · On: The Other Boot
hot chapter. i am not a BD hater, but i am glad to hear that you will only hit the highlights. that middle part dragged on in BD.
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree. Plus, since this is Eward POV, he was kind of shut out of the middle. Not too much for him to recap.
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:49 AM · On: The Other Boot
Brilliant!!!!! and very hot!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:43 AM · On: The Other Boot
I'm a crap reviewer, generally leaving it until the end (which I know all you writers hate, with justification!) but I'm always too keen to keep going to the next chapter, so it's a kind of compliment. Anyway, thought I'd just let you know that I think your fic is excellent - very VERY hot and I can't wait for your take on the transformation. Certainly, You interpretation of the these early BD chapters is sounding good and I'm pleased to hear you will be abridging the later chapters - because OMG, didn't SM drag it out, like, FOREVER. And let's face it, most of us are only interested in what it was like when B&E finally got down to some real Vamp Love - which of course, with SM, having drawn out the pregnancy for what felt like the full 9 months, all we got was a paragraph ... argh!!! So bring it on!
Author's Response: LOL, thank you! I hope I'm up to the challenge!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:03 AM · On: The Other Boot
hey don't worry i want edwards POV of some of the events so i for one am FINE with the story going into that direction. and we were talking about "the list" earlier....well she stopped updating it so i think with it being one of the fav stories on this site. that SOMEONE should pick up where she left off. don't you agree? But knowing that you liked that one too ohhh the places you could take your story!!! -giggles insanely- i can't wait for more but 2-3 weeks between chapters sends me into a little panic. but i can try and be patient. and i suspect it might be hard to get back to your story at this point with such a long space of story time in between the next opportunity for pervward to get some action. thanks awesomesauce coz like your name says. thou IS awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it.
(Wasn't The List just updated a week or two ago? She's working on it. Can't wait for the blood chapter!!)
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:50 AM · On: The Other Boot
This was such a sexy chapter!! I never liked that Edward was so angsty about the pregnancy. I guess I wished they had research more before completing saying the baby was a monster. I don't know how you are going to handle this but they should have talked with each other more about this situation.
Author's Response: Well... I can't change the angst too much. Not if I want to stay true... but I'm hoping to flesh out his side of things a little bit more. The next chapter probably won't have any smut (gasp!) because I'll need to focus on that. But hopefully back on track soon!
Reviewer: blooddrinker (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:55 AM · On: The Other Boot
This is great fun!
Author's Response: It's even more fun reading these reviews. Thank you!
Reviewer: andreaschloe (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:08 AM · On: The Other Boot
Definately hot! Looking 4ward to next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:23 AM · On: The Other Boot
WOW that was really hot i cant wait to see what happens next :) loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:18 AM · On: The Other Boot
I really like that you're following canon with the plot.
Never considered the "Of course Edward woulda known the food was bad" angle. Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's just something I thought of as I was writing. 'Wait... why would he buy the rancid chicken line?'
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:43 PM · On: The Other Boot
i love, love, love, that bella's dream came true for her! lovely, lovely chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:38 PM · On: The Other Boot
good job, can't wait for the next
Author's Response: Thank you!
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