awesome! once again, i love Edward's internal monologue but my favourite bit in this chapter has to be the last line. :D

Author's Response:

I liked that one, too! ;)

forget the haters sweetie. i love it. i loved how their lovemaking on the beach was her dream. yeehhh. haha. everything's so sexy, sensual & intense. and absolutely fits the storyline.

 

and, to answer your question. yes, that was hot enough for me. screw haters.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I know, I shouldn't care... I just keep getting the same questions over & over. "You're not having her get pregnant are you? I hope you don't have Renesmee!" etc, etc

I don't mind that they prefer stories that don't have that, but I've been perfectly clear that I'm not trying to change anything. This is like a little project for me, to see how close I can keep it but still make it extremely sexual.

Thanks for the lovely review!

Hot, hell yes!  It was gorgeous!  I loved that whole sparklepeen/dominant Edward scene.  Damn fanfiction is making me into such a perv!

Author's Response:

LOL, me too!!!

Three Hazhs for the return of Edward and his sparkling, diamond peen!  Really what woman wouldn't like a dominate Edward? HOT... pant, pant.

Seriously, Thank you for brilliantly articulating Edward's POV.  I have always wondered what he was feeling when he found out Bella was pregnant.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I really enjoy writing for him. I just feel like there is so much there that was never explored, not even in a smutty way, just in character depth. I just happen to prefer my Edward pervy.

Scorching hot!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Pure hotness, I kind of wanted a bit more of the honeymoon what can I say I'm greedy!!!

Author's Response:

LOL... hey, I already gave you about 200% more than SM did! (oh who am I kidding, if I were reading it I'd probably say the same thing)

Yay...I'm so excited to read the next chapter and see EPOV about the baby.

This is definitely a very juicy version......and my favorite line in here was....There is a Heaven. I've just found it.

I also like it when Edward is like "Mine, Mine, Mine" that's throughout the chapters but I hadn't mentioned that I liked that so I thought I would.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I love hearing favorite scenes & quotes! (I also really like the mine mine talk... that's why it's a running theme, lol)

You definitely packed some heat in this chapter.  I love my Dirty Boy.  He's had to repress so much of himself for so long- I love that bits are able to get through.  I can't wait for the Vampire on Vampire sex!!  Great update!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

I am getting definite cries for some vamp on vamp lovin!!

Wow. I loved most of the chapter! Especially the part where Edward finally gets to ... taste Bella right at the source. And how you had him so caught up in it that he kept her orgasming for... ages. LOL. Keep writing!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

You can't distract a kinky Pervward.

Oh shitaki mushrooms! that was hot! more so than i expected. wow.

My favourite line was probably; 'Hehehe... you can still dazzle her when you want to.' i thought that was very amusing. 

And when i read 'Oh, you really shouldn't have done that'...it reminded me of the film 'you really shouldnt have said that' which kind of lead to dirty thoughts about Rob Pattinson. Is that really such a bad thing?...hmm, well, in the past i would have said yes but he's growing on me. You know, i like him a hell of a lot more when he isnt acting Cedric Diggory or Edward...he looks so much prettier when he's normal...

Anyway, i kind of went off on a tangent there but i really do like this story! :D

wow, i loved that chapter. Again, i love how embarrassed edward can get. And Bella's question about if his peen sparkles was awesome! heehee. This is a great story! :D

THAT was fantastic.

you are a master of your craft.

 

i can say this is one of my favorite

chapters out of this story.

 

honestly all i can say is...wow.

Author's Response:

Hey, I'll take wow. I like wow a lot!

I like your story.  I am curious about how you are going to handle the pregnancy.  I can't imagine that there were any sexy times going on during that.  I had a hard time persuading my husband to have sex while I was pregnant.  If he had thought there was a monster growing inside me that could very well reach out and bite him there would have been no way! 

One thing that might be fun to hear during Bella's pregnant couch time would be the rest of the family trying to get the details on the honeymoon from Bella.  Despite the scary pregnancy, their brother was the world's oldest virgin, they have to be curious.  I can see Emmett and Rosalie trying to do this.  Alice would be too sad, Jasper wouldn't really care, Carlisle and Esme would be too respectful but Rosalie would want Bella to relax a little and Emmett would want to have some fun.  Edward of course will be in burning man mode so he want indulge but that wouldn't keep him from hearing her POV.  It is just an idea.  You are way more creative, so I'm sure you'll come up with something great.  I think I just really want to hear Bella say sparkle peen in front of Emmett. 

Thanks for the great story.  

Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review. I'm sure it will be sad and angsty, simply because poor Eddie just wanted to curl up and die right about then, and he was so helpless watching Bella dying slowly in front of him and nobody would let him near her. No, no sex, he was barely allowed in the room with her. I got such a feeling of Edward being excluded during this time. I really want to convey that. Not only is he scared to death, but he can't be comforted by the only one he needs.

Nice idea on the Emmett/sparkle peen thing. That may make an appearance somewhere. Maybe not now, but hmm.... lol.