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Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Other Boot
So beautiful! I can't wait to read further.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it this far. I am waiting for psymom to update the next chappie, it should literally be any day now. She's been busy with ComiCon, so I won't hold that against her. (especially since she mentioned this story again!! AAAHHH!!!)
Must warn in advance, though... it starts to get fairly angsty for the next two chaps. (I'm not even a huge angst fan, honestly. Edward just made me do it. He's running this dog & pony show, I'm just the idiot cleaning up the droppings)
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Other Boot
So beautiful! I can't wait to read further.
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:08 PM · On: The Other Boot
So beautiful! I can't wait to read further.
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:31 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Dynamite! Wonderful passion and perfect resolution. Loved it.
Author's Response: Oooh... I got a Dy-no-mite!! (Now I can only think of JJ from Good Times, lol)
Thank you!
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
This is a great, imaginative interpretation of the missing moments from the book! I loved it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
The Volvo got christened..... I was afraid he wouldn't be able to touch her while she was touching him..... I'm so glad he did. This is so yummy :)
Author's Response: I don't think I'm the only one who wants to dirty up that volvo!!!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:58 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
Damn..... must.go.change.panties.now.
Author's Response: Well, better have a few backup pair, cuz it only gets hotter! ;) (well, I hope so!)
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:57 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Yes, practice makes perfect Edward:) I heard about this story on the Twigasm podcast and had to check it out!! Love the more dangerous and lustful twist on Edward the vampire!
Author's Response: I like my Edward a little dangerous!
Thanks so much for stopping by and checking out my fic. I love those Twigasm girls hard!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
Aww, Edward taking her on a date was so sweet. (And...ummm...I just saw that movie...you definitely just made that an entirely new experience for me...)
This story is hot! Great job:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are liking it so far!
Reviewer: lynsrob (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:52 PM · On: The Other Boot
I really don't know how to write a review, as I never have before even though I have read some other fanfic. This was extremely hot, lusty and fabulous. I love the way you have incorporated all the important parts of BD and just made everything I had imagined happening in between the lines even better. I can not wait to continue with your story. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm honored to be your first review! I'm always happy to hear any thoughts, feelings, or even favorite scenes or quotes. Even a simple, "Hot!" is great! It's truly the thought that counts.
The next chapter should hopefully post any day now. It's just waiting to be validated. Make sure you either check back soon or put it on your list of favorites so you'll get an alert.
Reviewer: Abbabble (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:50 PM · On: The Other Boot
Nicely done. A tiny bit OOC here and there, but appropriately so!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm actually trying to avoid being OOC as much as possible. This is just how I picture the canon couple acting without the author's filters, lol. Sorry if it came off that way.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: engtchr (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:29 PM · On: The Other Boot
Incredibly hot, but there's something there that always takes me out of the narrative. A minor complaint....the past tense of the verb to drag is "dragged", not "drug". Therefore, "he dragged his lips across hers", etc. I see this quite a bit in fanfic, and it's a nails-on-the-chalkboard thing with me, but that's probably normal, since I'm a teacher. Thanks for listening!
Author's Response: That never sounds right to me, lol. I've tried it both ways, it just always sounds off. Oh well, at least that's your only complaint so far. There are other fics I've read where I can barely get through the first chapter because of the spelling & grammar, so I know how you feel. Sorry!
Reviewer: engtchr (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Probably the best wedding night version I've read! Excellent story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:00 PM · On: The Other Boot
Oh very hot !
Edward + doggy style = My ultimate wet dream.
Please more !
Isabelle
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel the same. ;)
There should be another chapter posting any day now. It's been submitted, just waiting for validation.
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Oh love it ! I LOVE my Edwward dark !
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Edward has his darker moments in here.
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Explorations
Oh Wow ! I LOVE your smutt, I really do ! It's written in such a smart and erotic way... I love your sense of humor also.
I love the fact that we can read Edward's internal dialog at the same time as he's doing it ! Wow amazing !
Please more ! I'm actually begging you to write more smutt.
By the way, my husband thanks you for the incredible libido that you and Edward give me. Can't wait to read the others chapters. Please more !
Sincerely,
Isabelle
girlys75.blogspot.com
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm proud of my smut, too! ;)
And keep on reading, there's just more and more!
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
Each chapter better than the last! Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to go a little further each time.
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:19 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
Perfectly delicious, wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like making them delicious. I know I would gobble Edward up and ask for seconds.
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:38 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Loved this chapter, loved the writing.
Reviewer: elove (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:38 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Loved this chapter, loved the writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: Nikad_vise (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 05:57 PM · On: The Other Boot
Oh my, more! I love this!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review.
The next chapter should post any day now, just waiting for validation.
Reviewer: Kristi28 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:08 AM · On: The Other Boot
Ok, I'm a bad person. I read the entire story through the print version and had to wait to review. I LOVE this story! I think Edward is hilarious and I laugh at all his internal comments. I promise I'll review every chapter from now on!
Author's Response: I've done that before, don't worry! It's just always so nice to hear what people think about something that took a while to do. I'm most happy that it's getting read at all, though, so thank you!!!
Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Explorations
I am an extremely talkative, and highly verbose person, usually. But right now, I got nothing. You freakin' rock.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's high praise when I leave someone speechless!!
Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
Good thing neither of them smoke...lol. Even I needed a cigarette after that. : )
Author's Response: LMAO! Yes... Edward would be working on a really great lung tumor right now.
Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:19 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
In the words of Paris Hilton (ugh!...sry)..."That's hot!" Even the image of him biting her during is strangely sexy. WOW! Can't wait to get to the rest.
Author's Response: Strangely sexy? I LOOOOOOVE the idea of him biting her! (I really really really wish they could bite humans without killing them, like in True Blood. But... then we all know they'd be humping through all the books, so SM had to make it a no no)
Thank you so much for the review!
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