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Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Explorations
Okay, I think I'm a few chapters late but emmetts 'bust a 90 year old nut' line was hilarious. It keeps coming back to me all day long....
Author's Response: Thank you! That was one of my favorites, too! ;) It doesn't matter to me if you are a few chapters behind. What matters is that you are here now!
Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
Ok, how much hotter can this be! I need a man, right this minute!
Author's Response: Hahaha, me too!!! A sparkly one!
Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:08 AM · On: The Lump
i read Breaking Dawn - I knew what was coming - and yet I still got nervous! Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you! That means so much to me! I'm honored to know that you got into it!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:49 AM · On: The Lump
This was great, fills in a lot of BD gaps between E and B.and Oh my...a Foot Job? ...man..my feet are going to get busy tonight...Bella is right though, a blanket and an audience is a definite turn on...looking forward to hot vamp sex coming up. Ideas...ummm, something a bit wild in the forest...? Something particularly saucy that Emmett and perhaps others accidentally witness - poor Edward has put up with so much poor-virgin-crap, i'd love to see them and Emmett in particular impressed with his prowess- show em what you've been holding in Eddie my boy.
Author's Response: What lovely ideas! I think EVERYONE is hoping for some forest/hunting lovin!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:42 AM · On: The Other Boot
Hehehe... me likey. Yes. Yes I did.
I likkkke your naughty Edward with the BiG sparkley dick!!
Author's Response: Me too!!!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:24 AM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
On top of that, I lied to her. It was more a lie of omission than anything else, but I let her think that the bruises on her body were the only reason I was terrified of touching her again. No wonder she was furious with me, they really were not that bad, but under no circumstance did I want her to know how close she had been to death.
I like this, it could really have happened, youve made it fit in so well with SMs story. It makes his horror the morning after and his resolve so understandable.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just didn't buy the bruises excuse. We all know that Edward's a wee bit emo, but even HE had to know that bruises were a basic risk.
Reviewer: TaBBZZZ (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:30 AM · On: The Lump
OMG loving this! started reading ages ago but forgot to put it in my favourties (have done so now :D) can't wait to read the next chapter! poor edward but if he hangs in there a little longer im sure he will be one VERY happy Vampire :D
loving the fact that u added the BD parts in to, (i personally loved BD)
thanx soo much for writing this and cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm happy to have another BD lover who is enjoying this!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:35 PM · On: The Lump
that was great. as for ideas. i always fantasized about edward and bella videotaping themselves having sex before she was turned. its too late for that in your story now, but maybe they can still videotape themselves having sex and later on the siblings could accidentally find it or walk in on them and they all have a wild big sex party! ok that was a little over the top, but videotaping themselves sounds HOT!!!
Author's Response: Ooh, kinky vamp video! Sexy!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Divided
i always wanted a look inside edwards head and he endured this. i think you did an excellent job. kudos.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I think we all needed some EPOV for this section.
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
that was great!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking it!
Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Well, I did promise to leave a review and I don't like breaking my promises, soo...
YAY!!! I LOVE this story sooo much!!!
You've done a wonderful job with it!
Thank you so much!!!
~Brittany~
Author's Response: Thank YOU very much for the lovely review! They mean so much to me.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
“Holy shit! You mean I was right? I was only teasing because of how you were talking. I thought you and Tanya had hooked up... at least once or twice.” He was shaking his head, trying to wrap it around my situation.
yeah...i am with you Emmett i loved the brotherly talk!
OMG if only Bella knew what he gets up to on the wedding night - scary!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun writing the brothers' convo. And poor Bella just has no clue what Edward goes through for her.
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
that was hot
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
mmmmmm he's really got to get something to bite down on and just...keep it handy!
Author's Response: I agree! Poor planning on his part!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:01 AM · On: 2. Purgatory
“But nothing!” I interrupted. “If I was physically able to keep any sensible distance from you at all, I wouldn't be standing in your bedroom at three in the morning, ogling you when you're half naked while at the same time, trying not to kill you! I'm doing everything in my power right now to keep from either biting you or fucking you senseless, and it's almost impossible to think straight with the nearly twenty-four hour hard-on you give me!”
I love your writing and dialogue, its SO natural and honest! these are things they should discuss. OMG I think I need to have a cold shower, this is H.O.T.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I adore it when people tell me the quotes they like! I'm glad you are liking it!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:37 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Bella Swan had given me a painful thirst for her blood... and the first erection I'd experienced in ninety years....
Wow this is very well written and powerful stuff. Refreshing thoughts on our fav scenes and an original perpective of the EPOV of which Ive read a few. This is really believable - I'm absolutely hooked!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love it when new readers start the story. Fresh perspective is amazing!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:33 PM · On: The Lump
Brilliant chapter - God, if only SM had written it like that. My one abiding memory of BD (and it's the only book of the series I haven't re-read) is that the whole pregnancy seemed interminable - Christ, it felt like the description went on longer than the actual f*cking incubation! You wrapped it up in one chapter but still managed to give us a good idea of the pain and angst that Edward was going through AND a f*cking lemon - how great was THAT! And I hated JPOV - it has always been a mystery to me why this wasn't done in EPOV, particularly as SM had already done the Twilight EPOV in Midnight Sun. Now we can move on to what we all want, which is the VAMP SEX - and I imagine they are going to be trying A LOT of different positions LOL! I'd like to see Edward slam into Bella with her legs over his shoulders, cos that's got to go DEEP! But whatever you want to give us is ok with me - you've certainly been hitting all the right buttons so far!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I completely agree with you about the lack of EPOV and TOO MUCH JPOV. The vamp lovin will becoming soon. I think there will be a small amount of daddy/daughter time, but certainly not the whole chapter. On to steamier things!
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:54 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Delicious indeed! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Well now I don't want to die!! Of course the chapter was HOT (I'm assuming this will be your usual hahahaha!!)!!! I love that you make sure this is all so difficult for Edward shows how tough being with Bella would be.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I always have to keep that in mind so that I don't ever let things get TOO easy for him... yet.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:05 PM · On: The Lump
no words to describe this chapter.
Author's Response: I think that's a good thing, right? Thank you! ;)
Reviewer: FrostedCullen (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:23 PM · On: The Lump
That was so much more exciting than the book!! Yay!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is so sweet!
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Explorations
I like how you draw it out you know?? I always thought, what with Edward being a vampire and all, he'd have more stamina so I love how you make Bella realy have to work to make him find release. Besides it is steamy!!!!
Author's Response: Really? You think I draw it out? I'm always worried I go too fast! Thank you!
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 03:24 PM · On: The Lump
Awesome chapter! As long as Edward actually let;s go compleetely and just nails her after years of restraint, I'll be happy as a clam.
Author's Response: Oh how you read my mind! ;)
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:25 AM · On: The Lump
Oh, your ending was beautiful. I got a little teary-eyed, too. And your lemon was so funny! I love to hate Rosalie. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you like it! What's funny is that I don't normally really hate Rosalie, but I think Edward sure did during this time!
Reviewer: Robsessed83 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:03 AM · On: The Lump
Thank you so so so much for your response to my review...I guess as much as you need the reviews I feel about the author's response and maybe even some exchange...
I totally get your point...the whole point...and I guess your response made me realize how much the reader is really involved in a story...
I do think it is a double edged sword though...I mean, you seem like a good writer, a very good writer indeed, and I have to admit it kinda made me sad to hear that people stopped reading cuz of the coming plot. I don't think that is fair, of course anyone has the right to like or not like a story at every point but still. It's a bit presumptious to just assume that it's gonna suck...
See, I didn't like the whole pregnancy part in BD either but to just skip your story cuz of this? Nah, I trust you to the point where I'm pretty sure you gonna turn it into something good (if that makes sense)..and you never cease to amaze me =D I am indeed pretty happy about how it turned out...
and that leads me back to the double edged sword...cuz i totally believe that to every BD/pregnancy/Reneesmee hater is someone who actually liked it or well didn't hate it...so what to do? I think your compromise was perfect...you didn't praise the fact she was having the baby but you didn't drop it altogether...
I really hope that you won't actually suffer from people like those on other sites, people who stop reading cuz of that...and I hope you stay as confident as you seem to be at the moment about your story...Blood and Lust has made it's way into FanFic Land and lots of people love it...me included and you won't get rid of me til the very last word you write =P (yes that's a threat lol!)
Author's Response: Awwww.... *wipes tear*
I truly appreciate that. Thank you.
If you enjoy having an exchange, you really should visit the forum thread. I only have a handful of ladies that visit so far in there, but they are wonderful to bounce ideas off of and just have fun talking with. I love hearing thoughts and suggestions more than you could ever believe. Don't be a stranger!!
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