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Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Awake
THANK YOU for the daddy-daughter time. I felt robbed of this in BD, and this moment you gave us between them was just too sweet and exactly how I can imagine Edward being as a father.
I'm loving getting to read about Bella's transformation and her awakening in Edward's POV. No worries on the lack of a 'full' lemon, I know it won't be long now until these two are together again...
Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it! I fully agree about the lack of it in BD.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Awake
AWSOME - CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Already submitted Chapter 11 last night! Hopefully it will get posted soon!
Reviewer: aurora6 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Awake
Nice Job!
I love your Edward
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I love him, too!
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Awake
Steamy Edward is always best!
Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree!!!
Reviewer: mechanicalamber (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Awake
I don't mind that Renesme was in there. I know a lot of people don't like her and he whole pregnancy plot at all, but considering how your story is going so far and filling in the missing bits of BD, she had to be in this chapter. It was definitely time for a lemon, or I guess this was technically a lime. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I completely agree about the baby.
And lime... lemon.... whatever you wanna call it as long as there is some hot citrus action! ;)
Reviewer: msutton1977 (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Awake
oh yeah, this is great
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Awake
a nice slice of lemony fun in the woods! looking forwrd to the whole lemon (in the cottage?) ohhhhhhh yes please.....
Author's Response: yes, yes!!!
The cottage is coming up next! Stay tuned!!!!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Awake
Loved it!!
Author's Response: Yay!!! Thank you!
Reviewer: tigeress (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Awake
that was so good it was just the right amount of lemon for the first hunt i loved it cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought so!
I was so tempted, just like Edward, lol, to have them do more, but trying to stick close to the book, they were very clear about the actual first time together again being in the cottage. Which is next!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Awake
Great sexy chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Awake
very nice mini lemon!
can't wait for more! ah the cottage next?!
can't wait!
Author's Response: Yes ma'am!!
I just posted it last night, it should hopefully update here before too long!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Awake
A lot of it was a retelling of BD, which is fine, but you added your own spicy bits. I really enjoyed it. Nice little bit of a lemon too. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually trying to stay as close to BD as I can, yet still give it what I've always thought it needed... smut and EPOV!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Divided
ahhh.very angsty but just as i would think edward to be.
never fear you are only the smut queen- you do angst very well!
on to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so worried writing that chapter!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Awake
yay!! I like the new little bit that Bella could smell his arousal!!!!! Nice daddy daughter time!!! I Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought those were both fun little extras it would be nice to see.
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Awake
Rawr! This is totally what was missing in BD.....Love sweet Daddyward and crazy Lustward so much :)
Nice balance of Edward staying with Bella as she changes AND loving his daughter and spending time with Renesmee. His moment with Alice was sweet as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Those were things that I think were sorely lacking in the book. They were hinted at, but never really addressed.
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Awake
Great Chapter, and congrats on coming out of the fic closet! I'm barely out of the fic reading closet.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! It took months to get the courage up!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Awake
Half a lemon is better than no lemon...lol
Really liked this chapter- hearing Edward's thoughts on Jacob inprinting on Renesmee was priceles...
Author's Response: Yeah, he's just really not his biggest fan right now.
I'm so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Awake
Wow. That scene in the woods is how I wish it would've gone in the book! Haha. Seriously, though, this chapter was truly wonderful. You did a great job portraying all the emotions. And the lovely citrusy treat was so yummy. ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Just wait until NEXT chapter! mwahahahaha!!!
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Awake
Oooh, how MUCH more? ;p
It was fun! I like this--it's like BD from EPOV...and dirty. heh heh heh
Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I'm at least trying to do, lol. BD Dirty EPOV!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Awake
i really loved it .. i liked wat you added with alice yelling at rose and jacob .. cant wait till see how bella flips on jacob that gonna be funny cuz she calls him a mutt or something .. oh and the part at then end i like at well a lil lemon never hurt anyone cant wait for next chapter asap
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved having Alice snap at them!
Next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: violet2009 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Awake
Awesome chapter, bb!!
Have I mentioned how MUCH I LOVE reading from EPOV??? It makes me all giddy inside!! My fav line from this chapter:
She was Sin personified, and I wanted to be a very sinful boy.
It had me ROTFL!!! LOVE this Edward!
Keep up the good work!! ;)
Author's Response: Awwwww!!!! Thank you!
I'm rather partial to him, myself! ;)
Happy to see a familiar face, bb!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Awake
Happy Happy Happy! Those are my thoughts! Great chapter! Update soon, can't wait to read about the family reunion! Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much!!! I'm happy you're happy!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Awake
Great chapter!
This chapter was just awesome! Everything about it was great.
I can't wait to see Bella with the baby.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon?
Author's Response: Chapter 11 will be submitted tonight! I only had to wait for this to update first before I could submit it. Hopefully it will be validated sooner than this one was, but keep an eye out!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Awake
Yea, it's up here! I still think the Daddy Edward scene is so cute. Awesome chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Thank you, bb!!!
I love Daddy Edward, too!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Awake
Yay! It finally posted :) So the sort of sex after hunting was fuck hot!!
It was really touching seeing Edward with Renessme (I can't ever remember how to spell her nam right!) while Bella was going through her change. We never really got to see much father/daughter time in BD, so I love seeing moments like this. Edward getting everything he ever wanted, but never thought to want, because he never dreamed it was possible. It's good to see happy Edward.
Love it. you're awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you, bb!!! You were on this before I was! LOL
I love having a happy Edward too, once in a while. The boy needs a smile!
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