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Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:52 PM · On: The Lump
Excellent chapter... I love your take at Edward hearing Renesmee's "voice", and his chnage of heart. I'm looking forward to your vamp chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The vampy times are starting, I hope you're not disappointed!
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Awake
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one :P
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should update soon, it's just waiting for validation.
Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Awake
this was great! a nice spin on her first hunt, and while you might not call it a FULL lemon, i feel very full...
alice
xoxo
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Author's Response: Oooh... just what are you full of? ;)
Thank you SO MUCH for reading, even more for reviewing!
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Awake
Great chapter! Love the STP lyrics!
Author's Response: Thank you! You're the first to mention them. I love that song. I love that quote.
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Awake
Excellent... holy hell...
Author's Response: Thank you! I take holy hell as a compliment!
Reviewer: XTCupcake (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:17 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Ahhh I already love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time to read my little fic, and thank you even more for reviewing! I hope you like it.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Awake
Fabulous! Really like the way this came out! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Don't worry, Chapter 11 was submitted last night, so as soon as it's validated it's all yours!
Reviewer: Raindrops (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Awake
I have read so many AH fan-fics as of late that I have forgotten how much I love CANON Twilight! I love the way you write Edward's thoughts - freaking perfect!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!
I feel the same way sometimes! I love the AH, but I came here for some vamps!
Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Awake
I LOVED IT! you're right, what BD was missing was totally father daughter time and your scene made my heart clench in a lovely way, followed by stomach churning horniness after the almost sex scene. very nicely done :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you agree!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Awake
I read this at work and called my husband immediately and told him to meet me at him in 10 minutes...not a full lemon, but a great tease. I liked the father/daughter moments between Nessie and Edward, it was really sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I love being a nooner instigator! ;)
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Awake
Yes - that was hot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Awake
Loved all the sweet talk between Edward and Renesmee!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing it! I'm glad you liked reading it!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Awake
another great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Awake
Heehee! First, congrats on coming out of the closet! I'll bet the hubby liked reading that particular chapter! Now, I just loved all the tender moments between Edward and Renesmee and all her memories. And of course all of Edward's lust addled inner thoughts! Can't wait till next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was very liberating! ;)
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Awake
Actually, I really liked it. We see so little of Edward's thought in BD - it was great.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I fully agree. Why do you think this is exclusively in EPOV?
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:02 AM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
That was so well-written. And probably a more honest (realistic? haha) account of all that Edward was feeling- he is a vampire.
First erection in ninety years? Funny!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you are starting my fic! I hope you stick with it and enjoy what you read!
Reviewer: Jenn6 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Awake
Never thought I would appreciate BD so much...
This was just divine! Love non-angsty, horny, cursing Vampward!!
Author's Response: Oh God, did it feel good to get rid of some of that angst!
I'm so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: Giselle Giselle (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Awake
Oh!! I just love it and I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. Fantastic!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I submitted to the queue last night, so hopefully it won't be too long. Usually anywhere from one to two weeks.
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Awake
I loved the extra lemon! Vampire Bella/Edward is so good! I also loved the Daddy/daughter time! I really wanted more of that in the book. This is another really great chapter! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried there would be tons of baby-bashing, but I think perhaps when people really see Edward as a daddy... it's just so precious! It was hard to keep that in mind during BD. The implications are there, the way he talks about the baby, but we don't get to SEE it.
I'm so happy you liked it!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Awake
I should have stopped reading this hours ago, but i couldn't, need i say more. wow.
Author's Response: Awwww.... I'm flattered to be your distraction!
Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Awake
Daddy Edward is perfect...I love him...and I can't stand Jacob! He should be allowed near Renesmee just an hour per day...he's spoiling that baby, for God's sake!And she has parents, dammit!
Author's Response: Totally!!! He's such a jerk about it! (I know he can't help it and all, but seriously!)
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Awake
ok- lemon was way hot.
overall- frankly this makes way more sense and in character than sm's version of events. i could never get why there was no love scene when they had finished hunting together for the first time- there was no reason not to have it- and they are married!!
its all good....just keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
It was soooo hard leaving it at that. Chapter 11 delivers, though!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Awake
The storyis great! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Should update soon!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Awake
GREAT JOB! EXCELLENT!!!!! can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More is on the way!
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Awake
Oh, it was beautiful and it was hot. What more can we really ask for?
I really enjoyed the line about the hungry baby worshippers. So true, so true...
Author's Response: LOL, I thought it was appropriate!
Thank you!
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