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Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:44 PM · On: The Lump
AWESOME!!!!!! JUST FRIGGIN AWESOME!! You're a great story teller :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! You're too sweet.
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Divided
WOW! That was an emotional roller coaster. THis is so timely as New Moon is almost out and i like your flashbacks to the period when he left her. Great chapter. sad, miserable BD experiance, but you did a fabulous job getting us into Edwards' head!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Those few chapters were the most angsty I've ever had to write. I'm glad they came out ok.
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:16 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
WOW!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always happy to see new readers!
Reviewer: bambi_frious (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:15 PM · On: The Cottage
Fucking christ, bb. That. Was. HOT!!! Goddamn...you write some fuckhawt-fuckAMAZING lemons! Like...damn. Like...christ fuck. This makes me wish I had a boyfriend...or a bullet...whichever.
Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you!! You can buy your very own sparkly boyfriend online. It's called the vamp! ;) (that sex toy is going to sell like hotcakes!)
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Cottage
Damn, I loved the biting at the end. I would love it if you did a sequel or just kept this one going here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love biting, too. I just had to have more biting here!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:54 PM · On: The Cottage
If the cottage part II is anything like part I, I'm going to love it.
(Please make part II like part I....)
Author's Response: Part 2 is in the works! Should be done soon. Thank you!
Reviewer: LadyLawyer (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:35 PM · On: The Cottage
Thanks. This was really hot without being gratuitously smutty. I will never read the BD Cottage chapter the same again!!! My husband had better watch out tonight.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I can't promise that the next chapter won't border on gratuitous, though, since the only reason I'm making a part 2 is to fit in more naughty sexy times, lol.
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:29 PM · On: The Cottage
OMG!! Holy vampsex Batman!! That was unbelievable.......I need a tall glass of ice water........doused over my head........whew--better now.
I have really enjoyed this story as it follows canon. I have also referred it to other fellow twifans who did not know the guilty pleasure that is fan fiction. Please give us part deux! Quickly!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate the recs more than you could ever know! Pt. 2 is almost finished, hopefully a few more days, then it will need to be validated. So that could be a week or two, but I will get it out as fast as humanly possible!
Reviewer: booboo_kitty (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: The Cottage
GAH!! LOVE the biting LOVE IT!!! If part two means more sexy vamp times, then, yes please!
Author's Response: Thank you ms. kitty! That means heaps to me coming from you!
(and I'm only half way through part 2, but it's shaping up to be a nasty fuckathon)
Reviewer: Robs_Muse (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:16 PM · On: The Cottage
Now that was completely what I had been looking for! Yaaaaaay! *claps like a mad woman* All the fade to blacks in the book just left me wondering and felt something was missing. I love that this is all in YOUR mind too! You go sister! Mad lil bunny love to you. Oh and yeah, I'm a huge fan of Twigasm too *winks*
--Heather
Author's Response: Those hoors at Twigasm have started a freaky phenomenon! Everyone should listen!
I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Thank you!
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:08 PM · On: The Cottage
Something kinda random...back in the day I was a huge 'Toadies' fan (still like them-) and I remember thinking that the song P.K. was very reminisant of a vampire theme. They went on tour in like 96' and I got to see them at the American Theater in ST Louis, got VIP meet and greet tickets. Anyway, they were doing like press junket stuff for local radio stations and one of the interviewers asked about the song being about turning a vampire and they were like, "WTF- we don't know why people would think that-that's so not what the song was about..." I remember thinking, well "you sure fooled the rest of us"
Random- I know
Author's Response: Not random at all, that's interesting! I have always loved that song, too. I have always thought it would be amazing for a vampire, but figured it was probably about some pervo stalker killer. But I preferred thinking of vampires because that made the song sexier rather than creepier.
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:58 PM · On: The Cottage
*fans self*
Whew. I quit smoking years ago, but damn if I don't need a cigarette.
Author's Response: Hehehe, I'll take that as a wonderful compliment! Thank you!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:54 PM · On: The Cottage
Crikey! All that fuckhot sexin' and bitin' made me forget!
Ummm, love that you put up the Toadies lyrics. Reading them made me think that we should start a petition to get that song on the "Breaking Dawn" soundtrack. Do you agree??
Author's Response: I LOVE that song. I have always loved that song. It's so creepy/sexy. When you set it to a vampire story rather than some psycho killer stalker, I think it is sooo sexy.
I could totally see Edward thinking those lyrics, too.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:52 PM · On: The Cottage
Ha-so the biting thing-I like it! I've actually teased my husband about him biting me, yet he always thinks I'm kidding! I'm not. That was panty change worthy! So, with Edward's new confidence I can only imagine how dominant he is going to be!
Author's Response: I just had to have more biting. I love biting. Tell you hubby to shut it and give you a big chomp. I just think it's erotic as hell.
Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:51 PM · On: The Cottage
Holy jebus golly gee wowzers. Is that enough of an argument for an Electric Boogaloo continuation? Daaamn, Sauce .... daaaaaaamn. I need a shower.
Author's Response: Hehehe, I love to drive people to shower!
And I am working on part two now. All I can say is that it's going to have way more action.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:48 PM · On: The Cottage
Your A/N were hilarious!! Great chapter; I need a cigarette now(and I don't even smoke) LOL...Dominant Edward. Purr!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Edward makes me want to light one up, too. And I hate smoking!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:40 PM · On: The Cottage
The only thing I have to say, is FUCK YEAH! I couldn't wait, and read it on FFn first, but it's even better the second time. I'm definitely looking forward to Part Deux!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Part Deux is on the way! I'm trying to up my smut factor and really deliver a knockout.
Thanks for all the love, sweetie!
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:30 PM · On: The Cottage
part 2 please. pronto. :)
Author's Response: It's coming! ;) (in more ways than one!)
Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:27 PM · On: The Cottage
ohmyfuckinggodthatwassogood!! Edward can bite me ANY.DAY!!! I really hope that part 2 is up soon!!!! Keep doing what you do!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love the enthusiasm!
I'm about halfway through the next chapter, hope to finish soon, but it take between 1 to 2 weeks to update on here after I post it, waiting for validation. I'll get it out as soon as physically possible! ;)
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:23 PM · On: The Cottage
lmao cant wait for next chapter - i give u a perfect 10
Author's Response: Yay!!! Perfect 10! Thank you!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:20 PM · On: The Cottage
Great chapter. I would love to hear a chat between Edward and Em and Jasper about this biting thing. I want to know about Jasper's scars now. Carlisle has me curious too. It would also be great to have Bella chat with the girls about it. Of course it is your story, I'm just making a little request.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear that the subject made you curious for more. I'm not sure how much more I'll go into it, but it does make one wonder so much more now, huh? ;)
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:18 PM · On: The Cottage
LOVE IT!!!!! That's all I can say! Update soon please.
Author's Response: All I can say is thank you!! I'm working on the next chap now!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:12 PM · On: The Cottage
Great chapter!
The way put Edward having to be in control and still wanting to bite Bella was very good.
The cottage was nothing but awesome! You should write the second part. I think it will be just as great as the first. :)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! I'm halfway through the next chapter now. Going to be even more naughty times!
Reviewer: hotedward (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: The Cottage
that was f**cking awesome wahehhe..they love biting each other..that was so sexy :d thanks for updating:D:D:D
Author's Response: And thank YOU for reading & reviewing! I'm happy you liked it!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:58 PM · On: The Cottage
I loved Edward's thoughts on the Jake situation. The biting/dominance issue was fascinating- I like your take on vampire sex.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I just had to have more biting! Never enough!
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