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Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:31 PM · On: The Lump
HEART STOPPING INTERESTING, SO WELL WRITEN, I LOVE IT, YOU HIT THE MOST IMPORTANTE POINTS, AND A LITTLE BIT OF THE GOOD STUFF, BELLA GIVING EDWARD A LITTLE LOVEEEE MASSAGEEEE!!!!! SO GREAT. THIS NAUGHTY PREGNANT LADIES, WE LIKE TO GET SEXY!!!!!
Author's Response: I had fun writing that scene. I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Divided
THIS IS SO AMAZING, EDWARD IS SO LOVING, EVEN IN TIMES OF SADNESS, PAIN AND DESPAIR, I HAVE NOT FIND A STORY ABOUT THIS DAYS IN THE LIFE OF BELLA & EDWARD IN EPOV, SO I AM IN ECSTASY, I ENJOYING THIS IMMENSLY, AND I THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS, IT IS SUCH THE GREATEST GIFT!!!! MOST GREATFUL...... THIS IS SOME SUPERVE WRITING!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I thought that time was missing, too. I appreciate the reviews!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:33 PM · On: The Cottage
MORE FUCKING COTTAGE NOW!! DON'T MAKE ME BITE YOU! NOW!!!!
Holy shit where to start since my fingers are smokin from all the hotness! First..glad you're outta the closet & hope sweet hubby is getting the benefits from all this lust. LOVE LOVE LOVE every single detail=you clearly are a lusty lady like me. GRRR My fav stories are from Edward's POV so I enjoyed his side of Jacob's "suffering" at Bella's hand over the imprinting. Poor Jake! snort Adore what a loving daddy he is & his convo with Carlisle. I really liked your explaination of the animalistic control/claiming thing...HOT. I actually growled when he told him "don't hold back". Shit, almost climaxed myself. Please hurry your updates...I hate stories where ya gotta wait weeks/months for them...drives me crazy!! You're doing an excellent job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
I am still finishing the chapter, and then it will need to wait for validation, but I promise to submit it the second I can. I hope it will be worth the wait, it is chock full of naughty times!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Divided
Poor Edward! I'm so so sad for him. I think you expressed his torture exquisitely and I liked how he could smell "him" on Bella, which I'm guessing eminates from the baby. Nice Touch! Keep it up--you're doing an EXCELLENT JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! No matter how many times I say thank you in here, I mean it more every time!
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:24 PM · On: The Cottage
I love this story...still thrilled to read those missing parts of Breaking Dawn!!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad, or else this story would be boring to you! ;)
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: sucked in 82 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:20 PM · On: The Cottage
That was some goodtimes!!!! I think id like to see even more roughness between them. The biting was too awesome it really got me pretty hot. Good work on this story!!!
Author's Response: And we have another fan of the biting! I knew that I certainly liked it, I'm just so happy that so many others here have liked it, too.
(and part 2 is going to get rougher... don't worry!)
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:31 AM · On: The Other Boot
WELL, I DONT KNOW WHAT OTHER READERS THINK, BUT I REALLY LOVED THAT SHE GOT PREGNANT, I LOVE EDWARDS REACTION (VERY REAL, VERY UNDERSTANDABLE) AND LOOKING IT THRU EDWARDS EYES IT IS JUST ICING ON THE CAKE, I JUST LOVE IT, SO GO ON, PLEASE, PLEASE......
Author's Response: I loved it too. I'm glad there are others out there who liked it.
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Exquisite Torture
I LOVE THE WY EDWARD TALK TO HIMSELF, IT IS SO FUNNY AND VERY REAL TO ME. WE ALL THINK WE KNOW EDWARD SO WELL, BUT YOU REALLY SURPRICE ME, WITH YOUR INSIGTH (I DONT KNOW TO WRITE THIS, BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN) IT IS SO INDEARING.
Author's Response: I know what you mean. ;) I like writing for Edward when he talks to himself. I think it's fun. Thank you!
Reviewer: sucked in 82 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Divided
i loved this, whats wirth yhe BD haters? U made thia chappie work, even though it didnt have any lemons.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my lemon-free angsty chapter!
Keep reading, it will get better! ;)
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:11 PM · On: The Other Boot
“That was so amazing, I think I'm still coming!”
Hehehe... me likey. Yes. Yes I did.
"I want you to fuck me, Edward. Hard. Rough. NOW!”
It's past my bedtime. Other than these quotes which pretty much sum up how worked up I am right now, all I can add is Jesus. Fucking. Christ. This story is Fucking HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOMELY HOT! THIS is the honeymoon I envisioned & I love Edward even more (don't know how it's possible) for being strong enough to fight the "monster" & be THE MAN!! (fans self)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the amazing review! I adore hearing what quotes people like!
This was one of my favorite chapters to write, and one of the hottest! (although I'm currently trying to top it with chapter 12!)
I hope you keep reading and enjoy it all, there's lots in store for our couple.
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:04 PM · On: The Cottage
WOW!! You've done it again!! Love the Edward you show us, we all knew he had it in him!!
I'm glad the story isn't over, and I'm sure how ver you decide to do it will be perfect as everything else has been so far!!!
Thanks again for the fantastic story and your concept of Edward and Bella! Love the way your mind thinks!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm totally blushing!
Reviewer: tazmuse (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:52 PM · On: The Cottage
Such wonderful lemony goodness - THANK YOU and YES The Cottage Part 2 needs to happen! I just can't imagine a more awesome Vamp sex than this and so much love too! Thank you - please don't stop!
Author's Response: Part 2 is in process.... and it seems to be shaping up to be one enormous lemon. I hope readers won't miss the plot too much. ;)
Reviewer: cosmosanyone (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:31 PM · On: The Cottage
again absolutely amazing! just WOW!
Author's Response: Awww... thank you so much! I'm flattered!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Awake
I knew you wouldn't disappoint!! Well done!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that one! But there is much more in store!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:59 PM · On: The Lump
Great chapter, and after chapter 7, I totally trust you to come up with some hot vamp on vamp action!!!
Can't wait to see what you have in store for them!! And us!!!!!
Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like everything that's coming up! ;)
Reviewer: nippon (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:08 PM · On: The Cottage
Amazing writing. Love the way you explored the frustration and feelings of Edward. What a wonderful job you have done. Thanks for being such a talented writer. You make the twilight experience whole. Thanks a million!
Author's Response: Wow... thank you so much!
Reviewer: sucked in 82 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:18 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
Dear God!!!! I need to go sit on the dryer or something. very saucy!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehe... just make sure it's set on high! ;)
Reviewer: sucked in 82 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
Im dying, that was both hot and hilarious all at the same time. Good work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always worried that the funny parts won't come across to anyone but me.
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:05 AM · On: The Cottage
Great chapter! I think the conversation between Edward and Carlisle was very well written, and the idea of preditorial dominanace is interesting. Oh, and the sexing was super hot! I'm glad you were able to play on some of Edward's angst and internal musings.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the new chapter.
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Wedding Bell Blues
LOVE IT. OH THE HONEYMOON WITH EDWARD, DOING IT ALL THE WAY FOR THE FIRST TIME. WHAT ELSE COULD YOU ASK FOR? HE IS SO TENDER AND HOT AT THE SAME TIME. I HOPE HE IS ALRIGHT? HE NEEDS TO KEEP PRACTICING SO HE WILL DO PERFECT AND FINALLY, MAYBE HE WOULD NOT BE TO WORRY.....
Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading! ;) I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:08 AM · On: The Lump
I'm still crying! I could really feel his love and desparation trying to save his Bella!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! That is so flattering, because I was afraid I would be the only person tearing up at that part. I'm glad it touched you.
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:07 AM · On: The Lump
I'm still crying! I could really feel his love and desparation trying to save his Bella!
Reviewer: melstermomof3 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:33 AM · On: The Cottage
Loved this chapter. I love the way that Edward approached Carlisle with his questions about the need to bite Bella. Most of the time, Edward is portrayed as being in control of everything and a know-it-all. In BD, on the honeymoon, one of the things I loved most about Edward was his insecurity about their physical relationship and the fact that he spoke to Carlisle about it. Even though he's a vampire, it makes him seem more human.
The Cottage, part deux?? Absolutement!!! I stumbled upon fanfiction because I was looking for the missing wedding night and cottage smexin'. Bring it on, baby! I know your version will be totally hot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I completely agree about that scene in BD! I thought it was so sweet.
Part Deux is in the works, and it's shaping up to be one long, enormous lemon. I hope people aren't wanting TOO much plot for this one! ;)
Reviewer: gloria pattinson (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Explorations
SO GREAT, SO GREAT. EDWARD IS EVEN HOTTER EVERY LESSON LEARNED. IT IS SO SEXY HEARING HIM TALK SO DIRTY, I JUST LOVE HIM TO TEARS!!!!!!
Author's Response: I totally agree! He could talk dirty to me any day.
Thank you!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:20 PM · On: The Other Boot
Imaginative and Lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a lovely compliment!
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