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Reviewer: BigGlo (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:47 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Awesome review! ;)
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 02:18 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
This chapter was awesome....loved everything!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: Cullen312 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 03:24 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
I love the idea the Bella and Edward 'practiced' before the wedding night. Cannon just made it seem so unrealistic. I honestly think Edward would have needed the practice to build up to that moment.
Great chapter, on to read more.
Author's Response: I really do, too. Look how long it took him to be able to even be near her, or kiss her?
I'm so happy you are sticking with the story!
Reviewer: Cullen312 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:59 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
I love the new take on Edward's lust. It totally makes sense that the 2 would be connected. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I'm always so excited to get new readers, I hope that you like the rest of the story!! Leave me a few reviews along the way to let me know if you like it.
Reviewer: Cleigh (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Awake
She was Sin personified, and I wanted to be a very sinful boy.
Best line of the chapter........and there were some very good lines. I thought you did a great job of showing the soft, sweet side of Edward while Bella was unconscious. And then you meshed that with animal Edward or Animalward - who just can't keep his hands to himself.
Author's Response: I liked that line a lot, too. I'm happy it stood out to you.
Is there anything sexier that a mixture of soft & sweet Edward with Animalward?? I can't think of anything.
Reviewer: Cleigh (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:18 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Ha! For some reason the image of Bella taking down two deer at top speed and ripping into them made me want to laugh. The scene probably wasn't meant to be humorous, I know. :) Edward went INSANE! Oh my. It was an entertaining chapter to say the least. LOL. The lemons were exploding all over the place in this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!
Reviewer: FilleMilitaire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 06:50 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Oh my God. That was the BEST thing I've ever read. EVER. MORE LEMONS!! Especially more naughty possessive vampy lemons. :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Aren't naughty possessive vampy lemons the best??
Reviewer: potterkitty (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:55 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Awesome smuttiness, that was good stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Awake
Excellent again!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the reviews! I'm so happy you are liking it so far!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:23 PM · On: The Other Boot
This is the story that SM should have written...
Author's Response: Awww... that's so sweet! Thank you so much.
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:11 PM · On: The Honeymoon is Over?
This is the sex I always imagined they had on their honeymoon!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Explorations
This is the sex they always deserved!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, too! I always thought they deserved a little more action.
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Exquisite Torture
You did an excellent job on this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:17 PM · On: 2. Purgatory
So, so, so excellent! Thank YOU!
Author's Response: No, thank YOU for the review!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:00 PM · On: 1. Everything's Biological
Very well written. I like the topic, as it has notbeen covered much. I will read on!
Author's Response: I'm always so happy to have a new reader!
Reviewer: tcdwnsmm801 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:07 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
I am totally breathless, you are a wonderful writer. Of course the original Twilight was heavenly, but it left the massess wanting more. Thank you for the "more". I read every chapter in one sitting. The hubby is in for it tonight. I hope to see much more of your work. Thanks for your love of Edward and Bella, you did them great justice.
Author's Response: Awwwwww.... thank you so much! That is so very sweet. I'm thrilled that you liked it! I haven't gone back and read it straight through in a long time, and there are many more chapters, now. I'm happy that it still reads well in one sitting.
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:02 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
""Naughty," I practically purred. I slowly crept towards her, prowling for my prey. "Wicked... rude... sinful."" Fucking Hell, Yes Please!!!!!
The way that Edward & Bella consumed each other ~ brilliant, primal, passionate, perfect...all fueled by infinite love. Damn, I'm spent!!
Author's Response: I really liked that line, I'm glad you did too!
Thank you for the lovely review!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:35 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Talk about smutty chapters!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!! You know I would really like a third but i know that the story must go on...! ;)
Author's Response: Maybe it should be it's own mini-series! ;)
I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:40 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Wow.... I'm speachless. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:48 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
I should have heeded your warning. Printed this chapter to read on the train to work this morning ... big mistake ... very big mistake. They may need to take that carriage out of service until it can be cleaned up! Whew, that was amazing. I almost feel like it was Edward and ME, I feel so tingly. It's nearly 4 hours since I read it and I still feel turned on. Bloody hell! Roll on the next chapter. I've rated this a 10 - I've never given a 10 before.
Author's Response: WOW!! Thank you so much! I don't think I've been responsible for train lust before. Awesome! ;)
Reviewer: drednomad (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:26 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
whew, intense couple chappies. i can see now why edward had such a tough time not biting her when they made out when she was human. poor guy just wanted to claim (and sometimes eat) his mate.
Author's Response: Sometimes I wish he would have just chomped down on her right from the get go. I know it would have changed things significantly... but damn would that have been hot! ;)
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:06 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
Just when I thought you had shown us the ultimate Edward, Bamb! You give us even more!
The whole chapter was very intoxicating, and I thank you for it!!!
Author's Response: Awwww.... thanks! I'm very happy you liked it!
Reviewer: junkie14 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:56 AM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
wow
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Nutmegpoop17 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:50 PM · On: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo
OMG that was amazing. I totally want to get bitten and chased and all of that sour goodness. Thank you Twigasm hotties for rec'ing this fic. Pure, unadulterated win!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it! Spread the word around!! ;)
Reviewer: Nutmegpoop17 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Awake
That was a great chapter, however, you coming out is way more monumental. Congrats!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! (I was very proud of myself when that happened.)
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