Yet another great chapter! Very touching moment between Bella and Edward in the sunlight. It's refreshing to see him loosening up about what he is. Bella helps him to recognize the good and beauty still within him. So sweet!

Nice work as always with the EPOV. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

That's exactly what I was hoping would come across here, I'm so glad that you got it.

Thank you!

Great chapter!

 

No biting though, *sobs* lol.

 

I know how it ends, but it's still difficult to read! You wrote it brillainatly from Edward's POV, and I LOVED the bit in the sunlight.

 

In stitches when Renesme woke up. Major ROFL!

 

Well done!

 

xoxo

Author's Response:

Hehe, I can't have them bite EVERY time, lol. It was just supposed to be a little quickie. I really had fun getting them almost caught, I'm glad you liked it! ;)

it is till ok but i just can't seem to picture exactly their position in the back seat so that makes me confuse while reading this chapter...

Author's Response:

Hmm, I'm sorry. I tried to describe it the best that I could, but they were twisted around a little awkwardly.

nice one! realistically described and still intact with their characters.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

There is so little of Edward in Breaking Dawn after a certain point, and I really missed him while reading it. Thanks for filling in the holes for us :)

 

And, of course, who can resist Daddy Edward?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, bb!

I never thought I would love Daddyward so damn much, but every time I start writing a scene with the little one, it ends up way longer than I'd intended because he's just so damn sweet.

i usually review, at least i think i do!!! hahahahaa

this chapter was hard for me to read, knowing the end is so near. hmmm can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response:

And I appreciate every single review you give! Thanks for another one!! ;)

I know, I'm a little choked up that the end is so near, too.

Thanks for updating.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

The ending was very much like the book, however, I liked it. It gave me some answers that would have fit in the book about what was going on in Edwards mind. Great job!!!!!!

Author's Response:

That's what I am going for, actually. It's a retelling of the book from EPOV, only adding extra scenes where there are gaps in the book. I hope you like it.

Whew..about time! I was worried about needing rehab cuz it's been so long since you updated. Oh yes, I love this story very much. You really "get" Edward & since I'm reading BD, again, and just so happen to be at this very part with Alice leaving, how appropriate! ;+)  Now I have HIS POV in my head too.  I really really really wish you'd finish this to the book-version end so I have his beautiful voice in my head.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review! And don't worry, I have always intended to follow the book, simply to add some EPOV and more tasty lemonade. Hope you like it! 

*sigh*

I love reading EPOV, especially in this story. :)

Please update again soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It's nice to know that I'm not the only one who felt we needed EPOV for this.

EXACTLY! Not since the first book had I wanted to hear Edward's thoughts so badly ... Not fair! BD was perfect for him! EPOV, then back to Bella for some middle parts maybe, then back to Edward again. I still just don't understand why she picked Jacob, of all people - I might have welcomed it more in Eclipse! My only rationalization for it at the time was that she's testing out the possibility of a Jacob/Renesmee set of sequels, and I don't know how I feel about that. Can you imagine Bella and Edward as background players?!

Author's Response:

Never. I don't think they could ever be background players.

Oh, I know how a little idea can run wild; I've had one sentence in a short story spin off into an entirely different story (that ends up being better than the first story)! I know Edward's voice gives me a different view, and if this weren't from his POV, I don't think I'd be reading it - I don't need a rehashing of BD, but a new perspective isn't a rehash to me.

I think I have to disagree, though, that everything is better from EPOV. I do have to say that it seems I enjoy in canon stories filling in SM's holes from his perspective more than Bella's - probably because SM's stuff is BPOV. That's for the most part, though - not 100%. Anything else - AU, AH, OOC - that's a toss-up! Anything dark, dirty, broody - better in EPOV. Sunshine and puppies? Better left to Bella. Edward seems more suited to crazy angst rather than rainbows of happiness. (So sad, I know.)

This review is so rambly, I'm sorry! Hahaha. I need to get to bed.

-Brianna

PS: Excuse any typos ... too tired to edit myself.

Author's Response:

No, you make excellent points. I agree about other genres, it depends on the subject matter. Sometimes it's nice to hear both POVs. I just meant for canon fics, I tend to love EPOV the best.