I loves Edwards discovery of the attraction of sparkles. His overflowing emotion was so touching & made me love him a little more.

I think you have an amazingly masterful way of capturing & portraying deep emotion between the characters. You paint them all so well.

A second honeymoon, hotter in its lack or reserve & inhibition. Bella's awkening in more than one way

Poor Edward! Although Bella is no doubt suffering somewhat in her death, this moment always makes my  heart break for Edward. He has to see it, feel it and live with the aftermath. Bella is somewhat 'distracted' by other things, where this is entirely a lived moment for Edward.

You must have very intersting thoughts if that is what you think about . Im glad you share them and this is the result! Can't wait to see what comes next

Yep, hot enough all right, love the beach scene & tie to her erotic dream. You really do great lemons, making them new & fresh but full of emotion & connection. You know  how to write what women want. You capture Edwards angst so well, so really ahve a great grasp of the characters and translate that so well to your story.

I'd love to say that sex with Edward was so good I lost consciousness. Lucky Bella, glad it was good for her. It was obviously good for Edward too, he's just freaked out by how good & his reactionary bloodlust. Hopefully she won't bleed again but how will he react to her scent when he returns?

Lol at Edwards calm "please continue" in the cinema. His inner musings at Bella' s actions prove the vamp is definitely a man. Go Bella! And people think she is too passive. When it comes to getting Edward hot & bothered, there is nothing passive about her.

I think your version of Edwards feelings are more believable & likely than the original. Vampires have often been linked with sex & sexual imagery. Lust of any kind, be it sexual or bloodlust are different sides of the same coin really. So bring it on Ms Saucy, I love your stuff and can't wait to partake again. 

vampire sex is the hottest sex.

WOW I loved every minute of reading that, hot,hot,hot. Thanks for warming up my evenings, keep up the great writing.

Thank you for writing this!  The whole story was great.  Lemons were fantastic!  I especially loved Edward's take on hearing Bella at the end.  I couldn't even begin to imagine how powerful it would be to be able to hear your lover's thoughts in the throes of passion.  Loved it all.

I think Edward covered most of the dirty little nothings by the fireplace, lol.  It is interesting hearing all of these scenes from Edward's perspective.

Ahem...that was....ahem....I....uh....gotta go shower...cold....water...ahem.   Congrats on coming out of the ff closet with your hubby...I  can't even tell mine what I am reading most of the time.  He is a bit jealous of Edward and Rob, even though he reaps the benefits of my obsession.

I'm gonna be extra good for the rest of the year and maybe Santa will bring me a sparkle peen for Xmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  (and loop of the kissing scene from Twilight)