Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Father and Son.
I think you should make a full story out of this!
Reviewer: SvassGudinna (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:19 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
Damn! That was hot. I wish I had my turn on the beach w/Edward.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Cullen men!
Interesting twist at the end!
Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Cullen men!
wow i like the stories update soon
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Cullen men!
lol... so didn't see that one...
Reviewer: shivis315 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:59 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
HEHE EDWARD GRRR
Reviewer: shivis315 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Father and Son.
WOW... just... I.. WOW! xD
Reviewer: shivis315 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Sibling Secret!
hehehehe surprise, carlisle & esme!!! xD
Reviewer: shivis315 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:33 AM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
i don't even know what to say....
i din't see that one coming... xD
Reviewer: shivis315 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Edward and I will play, when Tanya is away!
so funny xD
tanya's face xDxD hahaha
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Cullen men!
Holy shit I had no clue that Edward was the dad. Nice! I guess I missed the clue the first time I read. LOL!
Reviewer: mollybloom (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:30 PM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
yikes..........not a fan of abusive Edward and his equally weird brother.
Rape within marriage is not a turn on.
Bella was victimized and forced into a situation she did not sign up for, your Edward and Robert characters make it clear that there is no escape for her.
This was not a pleasurable read for me.
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Cullen men!
niiiiiice!!!!!!!!!!!!!! slick twist there... ;)
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Cullen men!
This was really good. Nice surprise at the end.
Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:42 AM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
omg that was weird, i dont think it would have been as bad if edward and rob were friends not brothers and if bella gave her consent.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:28 AM · On: A different kind of affair!
this should be a full story loved it
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:15 AM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
loved it very hot
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Cullen men!
that was so hot! ;)
So, Bella was married to Jake and Embry was his brother? And Edward was Jake and Embry's dad?
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:34 AM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
I hated the idea of edward sexually abusing bella and threatening her..... it just wasn't them...
Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:38 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
do you know when the next chapter is coming?
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:05 AM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
You did realy something differant with this story!
Reviewer: blueiii (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:07 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
I loved this. Bella seducing innocent Edward. I love that Tanya caught them, LOL!!
Good luck moving and I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: tiffanypabst (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:59 PM · On: B for Bella and B for Brother!
I think that was really hott! Not about going against her will but if she would have been up for it.
Reviewer: eZmaee (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:11 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
That would have to be my favourite so far! Excellent!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:15 PM · On: My Teenage Lover
HOT! I really enjoy these one-shots! Their my guilty pleasure!
Please update soon!
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