Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
love this
Reviewer: Horizon77 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Forgive
TNN referred me to your story, and I have to say I loved it! The Cullens' individual relationships with Bella are some of my favorite fics to read. There's not enough Bella/Jasper friendship stories (or plots in longer stories) out there.
You did a great job capturing Bella's selflessness, Jasper's wonder at her bravery, and Emmett's outrage about his TV. Loved the burning pile of limbs with the "Edward" sign!
Very sweet missing scene from New Moon. :)
Reviewer: CaliMum (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Forgive
Very nicely done! I think you conveyed all the emotions very well. I was easily pulled in to feeling them, and could imagine myself in the room with them.
Great job! Thanks for sharing the story with us.
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Forgive
love the bella/jasper family talk
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was so so so so so so so sweet! I loved that! It was adorable! I always thought she needed to talk with Jazz and they never did.... this was awesome! Great great great
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Forgive
That's sweet! I really like how Bella and Jasper have bonded. I can totally imagine this happening, and I'm pretty sad that this wasn't an actual part of the series. :)
I can't wait to read the next chapter, but I have somewhere to be right now, and I'm running kinda late, so I got to go. I'll read it ASAP! lol.
Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
that was better than ok!
Author's Response: Once again, this goes out to everyone because, well, I'm honestly too lazy to write a response to each and every review. Thanks so much for the support-- it means A LOT to have random people I don't know sharing their opinions (especially since I want to be a writer, and I don't trust my family's opinions. Haha). I'm glad the Edward piece went well, too-- he was kinda tricky to write.
Thanks SO much everyone-- Be sure to read my next story, I'll have it up ASAP.
~8~
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm really glad that you decided to add more to this. You've definitely got lots of talent as a writer and I will be keeping an eye out for any more of your stuff. You made me laugh, and cry, and smile a whole lot with this short little story! :D
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Aww that's so sweet! Thanks you for adding this!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
I loved it! I kept hoping for something like that in the books - yours was very well written and satisfying! Thank you!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
Very nice follow up! Edward's worry was dead on, but I loved how everyone talked him down (especially Alice).
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Forgive
That was lovely.
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
This was beautiful.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
Chapter 1 was really good, but I love the addition of EPOV ... you did a fantastical (is too a word) job with it!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
i always like to read EPOV (even when he is being his own worst enemy!) this was a nice sweet little two-shot!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great job
Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Thank you, thank you! I'm thrilled and I'm hoping you have vampiric memory so I can get my smileys everyday.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
I loved it:)
Reviewer: carolinajoy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very, very sweet. I enjoyed it.
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
very nice :)
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Forgive
I love Jasper ... really liked your showing his character like you did!
Reviewer: teamswizterland (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Forgive
awww thats so sweet! i love it!
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Forgive
Yayayayayay!!! I've always wondered why there is no scene like this in the book. I always kind of thought it would be in Jasper's nature to want to apologise to her, but he never does! I'm so glad you wrote this, and it's great. Jasper is my favourite character so I love anything with him in.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Forgive
I liked it a lot, a sweet character study.
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Forgive
I heard Bella following, could sense that she still wasn’t nervous or hesitant. What was wrong with her?
Perfect line. And I really wish this scene could have been included. But you wrote it spot on, so this is ok too. :-)
Author's Response: Okay, EVERYONE READ THIS cuz it applies to all y'all. Thank you so much, I'm VERY surprised by how positive the feedback's been. It's my first ever, so I'm really, really glad that it went well. I'll try to get more stories up asap, so bear with me!
Once again, thank you SO much for the suggestions, feedback, etc. It's great to hear other people's opinions (i.e, not my mom) haha.
~8~
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