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Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well now you HAVE to continue it. I admit you threw me for a loop...I NEVER saw the 'Bella' part coming. I was actually almost hoping that she wouldn't appear in here at all. The way you brought her up came as a complete surprise. I am absolutely hooked on your writing. Thanks so much for sharing it!

Reviewer: AngelicFront5 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please continue this story!!!!! I am desperate for more :)

Reviewer: twilightie04 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow... this was hella hot... i mean i wish something like this would have played out between me and my art teacher in high school...

Reviewer: fr_larsson (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved your story, =)

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! So surprising more readers have not found this story. I added you to my favorite authors. Keep going with all your stories... especially LNE...I love the way you write!

Reviewer: esme_says_so (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my God, loved it!! Gorgeous and unexpected and perfect! I hope there will be  more...?

Reviewer: ikss (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just discovered this and I ADORE it! Your Jasper is yummy. I do hope you continue with it.


Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please do carry on with this, I know you said that you would but I'm just saying I would love it if you did!

I really like your style of writing, its easy to read unlike some stories where its hard to understand certain parts.

I could really see the temptation that Alice feels, poor her having Jasper in her class when she can't have him. I would pick Jasper over Edward any day!!

Oooh interesting ending.. I wonder who Bella is to Jasper, she must be the girl from the restaurant!!

Can't wait to

Reviewer: severin (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really love's the one story I keep going back to...Jasper is so lovely...more...please!?!?!?

Reviewer: jolene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thank you, I LOVED that! I love Alice/Jasper -pairing. I hope you´ll continue that story.

Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Steamy :D

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Whew. Holy hell my lovey. So....i heard a little birdie say you're continuing this and a certain bronze-haired boy may be getting a HAE.  No? Yes? Maybe?

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

I feel kinda bad for Edward, but Jasper and Alice were always meant to be. 

Seriously interested in reading more....

Reviewer: texasprincessaurora (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love Jasper...and sexy, take charge Jasper is even better! 

Poor Edward, but we all know Alice belongs with Jasper.

More soon please!

Reviewer: 18 and Life (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it...keep going, please. Very hot, and a very good start to the story.  I'm gonna love the 4 of them working this out


Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Think I already reviewed this on It's good though so I'll do so again ^.^ This was part of that contest, was it not? Are you going to turn it into an actual chapter fic or just leave it a one-shot?

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