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Reviewer: hannaha11104 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Forever
I was so afraid you were going to kill Bella off I cried as I read that whole chapter, I am so glad she came back to Edward I had some hope that she would! Thank you for writing such an excellent alternate story it was very iventive and very good!!
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 11:39 PM · On: Plans
Very intriguing 1st chapter. I like it ;) Let's have more.
Reviewer: MerryCain (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Forever
Great story !!!!!! Unique view and change up of this story!
Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Mistakes
Great story.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Family
AH! LOVE IT!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 09:07 AM · On: Paradox
hmmm what's to come? can she get her sheild back? Ok moving on ... reading
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Settling In
ah loves first kiss, i'm guessing that bella doesnt know that she can make her mind react with simple unconcious gestures, and wishing to hear what edward heard was too much for her, like how he how had to deal with it when he first changed??? just a guess
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 07:28 AM · On: Plans
Freedom, hummm. I'm curious to know more about how bella was changed and why Aro was there? are you following ... oh wait ... this one is done. OK! so, snikers me! Well its a good start.
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: PoisonAngelTears (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Crash Into Me (EPOV)
...Woah, Woah, Woah, [wipes foehead] Woah, [wipes drool] woah, woah [adds sugar to glass of lemonlime juice].......Woah. If I could, I would totally five you, that was Bombastic work! I believe you have written THE Most DEL[icious] BE Lemon I Have EVER Friggin' Read...You are now in the numder one spot of my Most Epic Story/Novel/Fanfiction Writers of All Time. Tied with Stephenie, just to let you know. :]
Reviewer: TigerBoo2U (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Playlist
Exciting, amusing, heartbreaking, emotional just four words I could use to describe this beautiful story. I've laughed, cried and wanted to club Aro/Felix and the rest of the volturi with a very sharp stake (smirk). The pace was just right, an equal mix of action and emotion and the characterisation was believable. I've often wondered how it would've gone if Bella hadn't been human when she met Edward.. now I know.
More please!!!
Michxx
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Isabella
YAY!!! my heart leaped when Jacob entered the story! even though I know he isn't a main character it was nice to have something I love so dearly show up!!!
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Forever
I loved this story!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Demons
WoW~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't expect that to happen! Its neat though seeing what you think Caius' power is. I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Isabella
Oh ny goodness!!!! Esme can be really scary when she wants to be. I liked how she met Jacob and how helped her get rid of Felix!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Family
I loved ther girl talk and pillow fight! I also loved how Edward proposed!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Paradox
I love how Bella just has to wish she could have a certain power and she gets it!!!!!!!! I actually like how Edward & Bella found out thaqt they loved each so quickly!!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Plans
I like this so far. I like how she hugged Aro!
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Reverie
You made me tear up! Not many stories can do that for me. ;c) I knew that you wouldn't kill Bella, but it got to me anyway.
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Rollercoaster
did Edward not get a ring?
Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Playlist
It's over...
Sigh.
It's really over..
Deep sigh.
Well, it sure was fun while it lasted. A truly amazing story.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Forever
I always wondered if Bella was Charlie's daughter in this story. Great ending, I like it more than SM's. Simply fabulous!!!
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Reverie
HURRAY! Bella's alive!
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Breaking Dawn
It had better of been Bella thinking his name!!! Great fight though.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Commencement
Fluffy was okay, but now I'm really intrigued. I didn't think Aro was her creator...but who, Felix, Heidi, other, hmmm.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Isabella
Even though Felix is dead dead I still have a very bad felling.
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