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Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

Whew! That was emotionally draining! Why do I get the feeling that the Cullen and Denali families are going to get even bigger?

I love sleepy Bella calling Jasper hers! I know it's not what she meant, but the Bella/Jasper fan in me giggled my head off (I'm an anomaly -- both Team Edward and Team Jasper).

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

LOL, glad you're enjoying it! ^_^ The next few chapters are going to be a bit rough as everything gets decided. I'm moving and so it will be awhile before anything gets posted, but it gives me more time to work on the story. ^_^ Stay tuned. Thank you for reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: TwiliteAddict (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow!  Quite an emotion-packed chapter!  Of course I liked the exchanges between C&E, so thanks for that.  Looking forward to the next chapter -- could I get a sneak preview?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed everything. Once I get moved and internet back up I'll see what kind of teaser I can send along. Something to drive you crazy, of course! ^_~ Thank you forr eading and reviewing! I love your stories, it's fabulous to know you read mine! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

wow, that was kind of strange its like she degenerated phsychologically but yet didnt.  I hope she can get through this and i dont feel that Charlie is going to survive either.  I hopw edward finds a way to deal with this and help Bella through.



Author's Response:

Bella's going to go through a lot, emotionally, as she struggles to recover and survive the grief of losing her mother and Phil and the fear of possibly losing the Chief. His fate so far hasn't been decided - not even by me, yet. Edward's getting a bit of a wake up call from all angles, and he might be a little un-Edward for a few more chapters. Bella, well she's going to be a bit more attached to Carlisle, Esme, JAsper and Emmett. It's the making certain she knows where her adoptive parents are, and looking for strength from her "big brothers". It might take a while for Chapter 5 to make it's way to this fabulous place, simply because of internet access issues.Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~ Wolf

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

Please, let Edward grow a pair so Bella doesn't become more dependent upon Jasper!!!

I do like the story.



Author's Response:

Lol. Edward will work through his issues in a rather surprising manner. Jasper is important because of his talent and the big brother/little sister relationship he shares with Bella. I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: sexiangel0320 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

<33 love this chapter! especially the end w/ bella & jasper



Author's Response:

I have to admit, my favorite scenes to write are those with the big brother/little sister relationship between Bella and Jasper and Emmett. Their fun to play with and such strong characters with how Stephanie created them and the movie portrayed them. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Wolf

Reviewer: sexiangel0320 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love this story :) I think its very well written and I just really like the plot and how you use the characters



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That's wonderful to hear. It's an amazing phenomenon one experiences when they begin writing the emotions that takes their readers breath away, its as though you're the one experiencing each emotion as the words appear on the page. The Denali clan might be a little more difficult to write, but I've got Breaking Dawn for windows into their characters. It might be awhile before chapter 5 is up, but I hope you stay tuned! Thank you forreading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm so happy u updated. This chapter reminded me why I love this story so much.  The emotion of the Cullen family just blows me away, I love how you write them. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love writing my stories, but sometimes the hardest thing is getting the next chapter to come out just the way I want it to. I had to fight with this one a lot. Check out TwilightAddict's work, she helped me out quite a bit with my Carlisle scene's. Thank you for reading and leaving the wonderful review! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: lmbrtvll (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

this is so beautifully written.  I can feel every emotion, and like my professor says, if what you're reading manages to make you uncomfortable somehow, it's good reading.  Excellent excellent chapter.  I love the bond between Bella and Carlisle and I love hearing from everyone.  You've rounded things off nicely.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Fantastic work!



Author's Response:

What an amazing review! Thank you so much! I'm so overcome when I read reviews like yours. I can hardly believe that people are talking about my story! ^_^ I'm in the process of moving, so I'm not certain when the next chapter will be up, but I'll have plenty of time to work on it. ^_^ Stay tuned and thank you for reading and sharing your wonderful review! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: imjustagirl (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is so emotionally beautiful... Thank you for sharing. I hope your move goes smoothly - and I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hate moving, but it will give me more time to work on the next chapter! Thank you for reading and reviewing - and the Mozeltoff note!^_^

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: vmusopero (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

 that story is really awesome. i check everyday to see if it's got updates, thats how good it is



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! Really! That's such an awesome compliment! Thank you so much! ^_^ I'll be moving soon and don't know when the next update will be posted, but you can follow me on Twitter - I'm Whispering_Wolf

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

I am enjoying reading your story. I am confused though. Are they planning to change Little Bella's parents into vampires? 

I hope Edward comes around soon. I am enjoying reading about the love the family feels for Bella. However, I miss Edward's care for Bella.

 

Keep up the wonderful writing,

 

Sarah



Author's Response:

The choice of Little Bella's parents becoming vampires, for now, is left up to Eleazar and Carmen. Why? An infant and a five year old and two parents that can't take care of themselves - plus it adds to the story.

Edward will come around...I've got that part planned and it'll be fun! Thank you for reading and leaving the wonderful review!

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is amazing! I have completely falling in love with it.



Author's Response:

Oh wow! Thank you so much! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: Vilandra (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

Excellent story!  I can't wait until the next update.



Author's Response:

The next update may take awhile to post, but it'll give me more time to work on it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love knowing that my readers are enjoying the story! ^_^

You should check into TwilightAddict's work, she a fav of mine!

~Wolf

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

wonderful job:)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh Wow.  What a chapter.  So much pain, yet so much love.  I desperately want to jump into the story, slap Edward around a bit and then jump back out.  THink that would help?



Author's Response:

Hmmm, it might. ^_~ He is gonna get slapped around a bit. It will be fun! The next chapter may take awhile to come up, but I'll have more time to work on it. ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 4

Excellent. Incredible. Love it. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! The time between moving in and whenever I get internet back up will give me more time to develop the next chapter. Stay tuned! ^_^

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 4

WOW! I'm speechless. What an awesome story. The depths of the feelings and emotions in your writing are AWESOME. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. I think this may now be my favorite of favorites! WOW!!!!



Author's Response:

That you so much! What an amazing compliment! Sadly, I'm moving soon, so I don't know when the next chapter will be posted, but the interum does allow me more time to work on it. Thank you for reading and leaving your wonderful review! ^_^

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: ToTheEights (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

Awwwwwwwww!  I love it SO MUCH!  You did an amazing job with Carlisle, I'm jealous. 

It's SO GOOD!  Update soon, 'cause this one's addicting!

~8~



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Alas, I'm moving soon and don't know when I'll have internet again. I hate that. I'm a big technophile. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 4

Aww that was so worth waiting for. I absolutely love your writing, it's perfect! Really loved Jasper in this chapter. (Who am I kidding? I always love Jasper!) I hope you get your internet working soon, I adore this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you my dear! ^_^ I don't know when it gets shut off exactly but I move at the end of the month and the place I'm going into doesn't have it yet. Poo. Lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I always love seeing your reviews!

~Wolf

Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love your story. It is so emtional. I love how well you are showing the love of all the family towards her. Especially Carlisle and Jasper. We always see Esme and Alice's love but never theirs. Very good chapter. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I've  always found it important to see everyone's love, and everyone's reaction. A family of seven vampires can't base their love and emotion on only 2. ^_~ Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: keerplunk2809 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow... this is painfully beautiful! i can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Not sure yet, but I think the next chapter is going to focus a lot more on Rose. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

I have seriously had tears running down my face for 3 chapters.  What a story!  ...and can Esme PLEASE smack Emo-ward upside the head?



Author's Response:

I have plans for Emo-ward. I love that by the way. Haha ^_^ Thanks for reading and reviewing

~Wolf

Reviewer: dare2dream (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story! Please put chapter 4 up soon...



Author's Response:

It's taken a while but Chapter 4 has finally been posted. I hope you tune in! Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^__^

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am really enjoying your story! Keep up the good work!

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Chapter 4 is being a little fussy, but it shouldn't be too much longer ^_^

Reviewer: Jilli90 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome, keep going. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! ^_^ Hopefully chapter 4 won't take too much longer to get out. The first bit of it is fighting with me. :-S

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