Can I just say that this is now my favorite fic here on Twilight. You're writing it just so pointed and honest. All the characters are developed. However I do have to mention that this chapter I felt as if there was a little too much sex all at once. I have problem with a little bit of sex, if it's well distributed. But I feel like maybe it was too much in one chapter. I have to say that I adore Edward and Bella's interactions, they are absolutely incredibly.

You're explanation of why Edward likes her, that he had never looked a face before just had so many layers. I did think the quoting of Austen was a little cheesy, but it showed the beginning of Edwards affection and desire to please bella instead of telling it. Just really solid writing.

And I adored teh Maslow refrence. I just think that you're style is what Twilight would have been if it was for grown ups and more sophisticated. The Edward Bella interacation was really just gold for me. Spot on.

I just keep falling in love with this story.  Are we going to get more pieces of Edward's past along with the "current" time-line of the story?  I find that it makes the story more intriguing!  Thank you so much for updating!

I enjoyed Bella and Edward's first conversation. I wasn't disappointed in the least. I thought it was pretty brilliant that Edward thought to talk about books with her. Very clever :)

I thought the Tanya things was kind of weird :P lol

Great fic! Looking forward to reading more. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Also, there are more chaps posted on FF. ;-)

I am really enjoying this story.  It's well written and has an interesting and in character premise(!).  One tiny nitpick would be that I find Jasper's phonetically spelled out patois to be a little jarring.  I understand why you included it in the story but it sometimes detracts a little, in my opinion.  Otherwise I really like where you are going and look forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

It's funny because Jasper's accent is probably the biggest factor I've gotten comments on so far. Sorta funny. Peeps either love or they hate. Heh. Anywho, thanks for reading. Also, there are more chaps posted on FF. ;-)

This is a great start! I can't wait to read what happens when Edward finally meets Bella for the first time. You have portrayed the vampires extremely well and the detail in the story is amazing!

Author's Response:

Thanks you . :-D Also, there are more chaps posted on FF. ;-)

Great start!  I loved the flashback, with Edward embracing the bloodlust-but with standards.  I like the premise of Edward using his mind reading abilities to sort out people with mental issues and how he does preliminary "readings" before he meets them.  I can't wait for him to actually meet Bella-I'm so excited that he is aware of her and how she affects him ahead of time!

Author's Response:

I always did think Edward should make use of his talent. Thanks for reading. Also, there are more chaps posted on FF. ;-)

I'm anxious for her first appointment, too!  I can't wait to see where this goes.  I do love your darker Edward.  AND...Jasper with some actual slang is nice!  I'm a Southerner, so I loved it.  I never thought about it, but Emmett is supposed to be from East TN...he should have an accent, too.  No one's really ever done that one before.  I'm from middle TN...TN has 3 dialects...west (Memphis), middle and east.  East TN dialect is close to North Caroline accent, probably due to the shared Smoky Mountains.

OK...enough on TN linguistics.  I'm excited to be on the ground floor of this one!!

Very intersting!

Nicely written first chapter.  It does seem really plausible that Edward could use his talents for something good, such as this.

Looking forward to more chapters.

Thank you for writing such a great first chapter! I liked how you showed a scene from Edward's earlier life and then moved on to the current times. The interaction between the Cullens was funny too. It will be interesting to see how Bella fits in with all this.

Liked the Banner too!

Your banner alone makes one want t o read this story. Mesmerising. Cpngratulations to the banner maker. So I read it and now it goes to favorites. I hope it will not join the corpses stacked there, stories that do not get updated anymore. (Authors should tell the readers who have chosen their stories that they have found something better to do...).

In any case I would like to understand what you mean when you say that Edward is being misrepresented. Really curious. Care to explain? In my own stories I am either strictly in canon or I go after BD, when I suppose Edward has changed a lot. But in a sense your Edward also seems to be rather OCC. I like the idea of Edward wanting to help people being a psycologist,  but in the saga he is  really  a self hating and self centered teen ager, just despising people, and only meeting and interacting with Bella triggers his maturing. And it takes four books...

Well, I will see.