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Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
You are so thorough, it's amazing.
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
thank you for the update! i love this story so much, but waiting sucks ;)
Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
Ignacious is one of my favorite literary characters. He was crazy go nuts, but brilliant. I named my ipod after him. I really like this story, especially the 'rebellious' Edward. I search for stories that take place during that time. Thank you.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
I sooo missed the updates and am sooo happy because this chappie ROCKS
Reviewer: Mango Cascade (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
I love the accuracy and detail that is put into the begining parts of each chapter. It must take quite awhile to assemble the glossary at the end of every chapter. I appreciate.
When Edward is talking to a spider at the begining of the chapter, I find it intresting how the two were compared. The similarites between the two never occured to me until now. But, I do think that a vampire who talks to insects and builds their webs while huming nursery rhymes is a lonely one. The last thing he says - 'Good hunting' is absolutely chilling.
It seems appropriate that we find Edward in New Orleans. It suits him, in a way. I find it funny how Edward condemms a person though he may deserve it, then seconds later he tries so hard to sae another. Its good to see that he still has some humanity left. The fight was great, - New Orleans is in the South, so vampires are pretty territorial there, I guess.
I kind of like how the main issues that took three books to come up all appear in this one chapter. It makes perfect sense, with Bella's vast curiousity. Most of them weren't resolved, of course, but that's just all part of the fun.
I have a feeling baseball will be a source of much entertainment.
Reviewer: Mango Cascade (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
I love the accuracy and detail that is put into the begining parts of each chapter. It must take quite awhile to assemble the glossary at the end of every chapter. I appreciate.
When Edward is talking to a spider at the begining of the chapter, I find it intresting how the two were compared. The similarites between the two never occured to me until now. But, I do think that a vampire who talks to insects and builds their webs while huming nursery rhymes is a lonely one. The last thing he says - 'Good hunting' is absolutely chilling.
It seems appropriate that we find Edward in New Orleans. It suits him, in a way. I find it funny how Edward condemms a person though he may deserve it, then seconds later he tries so hard to sae another. Its good to see that he still has some humanity left. The fight was great, - New Orleans is in the South, so vampires are pretty territorial there, I guess.
I kind of like how the main issues that took three books to come up all appear in this one chapter. It makes perfect sense, with Bella's vast curiousity. Most of them weren't resolved, of course, but that's just all part of the fun.
I have a feeling baseball will be a source of much entertainment.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
I just love your imagery in the flashbacks. You obviously know your cities and eras!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
Mesmerising. From the dialogue with the spider (lovely) to the fight with vampires, to the development of present day love story.
I just look for the next chapters, sure that they will bliss me...
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
Loved the reading out loud. Bella is quite the girl! I see her playing to her strengths most effectively, here. :)
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
again, an awesome chapter. Your amount of detail is astonishing, yet it doesn't make the story drag.
Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
wow woman, just...wow
love the fight with Pru, was not expecting that. I have often wondered how edward got so good at the fighting...and now i know:)
Loving you hard chicken
Alice
xoxo
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Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
Wow, another wonderful chapter. The love between Edward and Bella is progressing in such a beautiful manner. They are so innocent, and yet so worldly at the same time. Both have experienced such heartaches in their lives, and they've both grown because of it. Yet, despite everything, they are still hurting and don't know if they will ever be completely whole again. I love that Bella is throwing her heart and soul into her relationship with Edward, and that she believes so fully that he is a good person, despite what we know about his past. Hopefully he will come to realize that there is hope, even for the undead.
Thank you for a wonderful story, I'm really enjoying it!
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
I love this story. And being from New Orleans, I really love this chapter. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:52 PM · On: The Wax Drips
Wow, so intense. I love that you start each chapter with a look into Edward's past. It gives us a glimpse into his life without Carlisle and Esme that we aren't usually privy to. I love it. And such an interesting twist on the Edward/Bella relationship. Can't wait to see where things go from here!
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
'demons have no prayers' wow, what a title!
i love Edward's communion with the Black Widow. What a great little vignette within the story.
His dark grace of redirecting Prudence, and then the confrontation in the alley. He sees what he almost is.
Will Bella be able to truly understand this life he has led in the past? Can he feel fully known (and thus fully loved) by her if she does not, if her affection and faith in him remain naive as they are so far ... ?
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Demons Have No Prayers
Always a joy to get this update...
I was very glad that Edward saved Miss Iggy...
They have SAID they love each other...
Uh oh...the ball game? Is this where they go their separate ways? I hope not...
Thanks for sharing...and I"ve voted for you...
Kathie
Reviewer: MooMin (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:34 PM · On: If Love Could Light a Candle
Muhaha!
I beat the system!
I read Ch. 8 at fanfic, but am reviewing here, now I get to be the first!
I always love how you envisage Edwards life before. The thing you did with the black widow, I loved it.
Just as well as accidental I love you's.
I love you too, you know!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:57 PM · On: The Wax Drips
i like how long ur chapters r
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:23 PM · On: T'would Be Better to Dance Alone
great ending lines finally edward sees it
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Beauty Hath Fangs Like a Rose Hath Thorns
I'm surprised that....like Edwards feelings for Bella they are all confusing.........he likes her.....but nothing shows that its very intense
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:29 PM · On: The Differences Twixt Monsters & Men
I like that you keep going back to his past.....I wasn't sure you were going to do that but I guess you are.
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Perhaps the Box Is Better Left Closed
Okay so I'm not lovin that Edward is so interested in Tanya's stage show
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:47 PM · On: If Love Could Light a Candle
Personally I liked "quit your bellyachin'" I've used it a few times while I was reading it on my family, lol.
Good story so far.....I especially liked the scene from his past...
Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:42 PM · On: The Wax Drips
great writing, I can't wait to see how their relationship takes shape
Reviewer: MooMin (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:03 AM · On: If Love Could Light a Candle
It's that time again. Thrice-a-daily-check-time :)
How is it that this story has so few reviews? Is it unknown to the masses?
How the H can that be?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Actually, it has a ton of reviews on FF (so I don't feel ignored), because sometimes Twi takes a while to update, so most of the alerts are over there.
Anyhoo, thanks for reading!
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