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Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:31 PM · On: If Love Could Light a Candle
I'm enraptured. This is so fucking amazing, I've resorted to swearing for expletives to express my emotion. ***********!************ I'm speechless!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:01 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
I was so depressed it was so long before I got to read this chapter! I read it yesterday on my ipod but had to come leave you a review!!
Fantastic, as always. I liked how you weaved the past and the present together in different spots in this chapter. I also really like the family coming together to fight and protect one another.
Huge sigh of relief that Victoria is toast! Good god! I think out of everyone her games make me the most anxious! Then James....dear christ...you know how to hold the suspense there for sure...I was almost positive someone was dying by his hand. Now he's dead but Bella's hurt...blood everywhere...and HOLY HELL! Can Edward resist!?!?!?!?
I am so looking forward to an update and not at the same time because it means it's the last chapter with only an epi to follow. Of course...you have other great stories to read so I will just go read those then!
Great job!
XOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXO Jess
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:32 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Oh my god! What a chapter? I cannot believe the twists this story has taken! Compelling as always!
Thanks so much for sharing!
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:23 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
no.....
~ B
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Songs of Past
See what you did Alice? GOD! If people you know die it's all your fuckin fault. Smooth. If you hadn't been so damned BLIND the maybe just maybe you wod have noticed what was really going down.
~ B
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:03 AM · On: If Trees Could Walk. If Stones Could Fly
Amazing chapter!! Berta and Al broke my heart! And oh my God, Charlie! That was a horribly tragic scene! So well done! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:18 PM · On: If Trees Could Walk. If Stones Could Fly
I have to admit I have stayed up longer than I should have some nights reading the story, enjoying the take you have on Edward prior to present day and I even put up with the silly accent of Jasper. But... and you know whats comin I hated the way Alice got all stupid around James and then u killed Charlie, you could have had Edward save then and Charlie would have conceded on the fact Edward was Bellas older therpaist and accepted that relationship, life sucks this story shouldn't shameon u.
Reviewer: sass052 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:31 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
I have loved this story. It is so well written and I love how we read past and present to learn more about edward. I wish there was more than one chapter left. Please write more soon I'm anxious to see if bella and edward will get their ever after.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:33 AM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Thanks for updating- and for saving Angela & Ben... :-)
Reviewer: heatherbug (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 10:44 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
no no no no no how can you leave us like that??? I hate you right now, ok not really but pretty please don't make us wait long.
Now that I'm thru with the pouting, this is a very good story. I like how you kept jumping between the past and present showing how Edward is starting to come to terms with what he is and letting himself feel love fully.
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:14 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
I finally realized I was holding my breath. Amazing last couple of chapters. You got to love a Bella who takes things into her own hands.
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:44 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
"And yet the ardent soul objects
to the silent heart's demise"
Nice. Especially considering what follows ...
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:53 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
God this story is so gripping I sometimes forget to breath.
Still weird to see my name in print (see my profile on why being named Roberta is so arcane).
Leave it to Bella to completely change the equation. Yep, she's the one Edward never figured on...
Eager for more ('cause I'm a very greedy bitch) soon please...
Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:49 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Ooh Wow! This is just getting better and better. Your doing an amazing job with all the characters! Keeping them in charaster, but adding your own flare. Keep up the great work, and the fast updates!
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:16 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you cant leave me like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im beggin u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Songs of Past
dont let any one die please!!!!! i'm gonna cry if you do!!!
wtm
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:22 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Wow. A cliffhanger in more ways than one! I am so glad you said that you're going to update this soon!!!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:22 AM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
OMG, I never imagined Bella jumping off a cliff as the way she would be changed. James was absolutely diabolical wth his strategizing. And Bella was so amazing when she tells him she doesn't wish anything away. Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon...
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:23 AM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Very good chapter. Very well written.
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:05 AM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
amazing amazing amazing...can't wait for the next installment!!!!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:30 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Her blood, he better not try to eat her.
Charlie dying was a big twist, usually doesn't happen.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:05 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
WHOA!! OHMYGOSH THIS IS WILD!!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:05 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
I love that after all the horrors of vampire brutality Bella just witnessed, she refuses to believe that Edward is anything but humane. She chooses to sacifice herself, taking the decision right out of Edward's hands. She saved him, now he has to deal with that. Can't wait to see how you play out Edward's response!
Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:26 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Wow! quite the literal cliffhanger! I love it!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:03 PM · On: A Silent Heart's Demise
Oh man what a chapter. I like how you incorporated the past in bits this time. Plus Bella's decision at the end is excellent. Only way to thwart James.
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