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Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oooooo I wonder who is calling? When will Edward make an apperance? Maybe to save Bella from jasper cause he might be jealous. Hmmm update soon please!
Author's Response: Working on Chapter 7 even as we speak. Just needs a little work. I have this story written through chapter 14 so far.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh yey! Maybe they can both start to heal! *does dance*
Author's Response: You know...I originally started writing this because of some healing that I needed. This story has taken some twists and turns I didn't even expect. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
wow so i was totally wrong on who the mystery pov was, but damn this is so good! i can't wait to see what comes next! this story is freaking addicting :)
Author's Response: Yea! Another addict! Thanks for the review! They make me happy!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yay, all is forgiven! Great job!
Reviewer: simplywow (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 5
Can you update more soon? I hate cliff-hangers and I'm debating whether to just stay away from this story until it's completely done or torture myself by reading each new chapter right away and then having to wait for more...
Author's Response: Please read the PM I sent you regarding this issue!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh please update again soon!! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: I hope to post at least chapter 6 tonight. Once my beta (on this site) approves it, she'll put it up. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
You made my day by updating! Wonderful chapter, poor Jasper. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wow! Need an update again soon!
Author's Response: I plan on posting chapter 6 tonight! My beta will have to read it before it is approved! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much. Chapter 6 up soon!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 5
You have me intrigued to find out what has happened to Jasper the last 3 years and why Alice is not with him. I hope to see some Edward soon.
Author's Response: Not to worry...he shows up too. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: thinning_ice (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
Very nice....i really appreciate how you give the character's depth, and not just dialog like a bunch of fics....can't wait of more....
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice compliment!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yay! I love JxB!
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story.. can't wait to find out if the rest of them are there!! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see what happens please udate soo!!
Author's Response: I am waiting for the approval of Chapter 4! Hopefully it will happen soon! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
Go Jasper ,um Jackson Hell I'll take either one. I love the fact that they are both away from the family.They are both better around each other when a certain sexy bronze haired god isn't trying to control the situation.
Also if Jasper ends up with Bella wouldn't Alice know and let him go his own path cause, well she had a vision right.Sorry I love Jasper and Bella That way it leaves Edward for Alice.
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Jasper! Yeeey! They need to get together for coffee (well only Bella) and soon! Where's Alice? Where's Edward? How come Jasper separated from the family? Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter and the next and the next and the next...
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
I knew it was Jasper!! I love him!! Yay!! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Me too!!! In my opinion, I didn't hear enough from him in the series. Thank you for the review. I love them!
Reviewer: simplywow (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
I KNEW it was Jasper! The only thing that kept me hesitating was that I figured there was NO WAY Alice would let him up and leave her like that. And even with his guilt over Bella, I think he would HAVE to take Alice with him if he were leaving the family. I don't think he can live without her. I hope Edward makes more than just an appearance! Keep writing! We're waiting...
Author's Response: I thought about the whole Alice thing when I wrote it...however, for my story I needed her to be in the background for a while. You will see why later on! Thanks for the support and review. Edward makes more than just an appearance but he won't be there for a little while. I will update soon!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter! More please!
Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
Edward, Edward, Edward. Total douche. Seriously, he is so fricking self righteous sometimes it shits me. I love your story, I'm thinking it is going to find its way into my favourites. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Next chapter should be up soon and you can see who it was.
Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love the stories where Edward hasn't come back for Bella, but they both still love each other yada yada he comes back, it's awkward, they get together, its all so beautiful. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
My guess would be Edward. I just know Bella will be in his class. I can't wait for that.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Keep them coming. Next chapter up really soon!
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
I can see where that last reviewer is coming from about it being jaspers POV, but I really think that its Edward. That may be too obvious, but he talks about how he chose a smaller college so that he didn't have to worry so much about his overwealming gift. He states "I had learned over the years to block unwanted things from my mind, but I still didn’t want to overwhelm myself after being so secluded the past three years." I think this means that its edward. Great chapter and story so far... hmm i wonder what college bella is attending in seattle :)
Author's Response: She is attending Seattle Pacific University. (I have never been there...however my college played them in Basketball and we were a small college) Next chapter up really soon!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hmmmm..is it Jasper? He's really the only one that I would think of that would be teaching. Also the line: "She always knew me better than anyone else." That's my thought! Like it so far!! Anxious for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! It makes my day. Next chapter up really soon!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like this beginning. I'm interested to see what you have in store.
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