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Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Having Edward attracked to another woman other than Bella is gonna be an interesting adventure.
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well, you've got me hooked into reading more of your story! Great start...love that passion scene between Bella & Jacob!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
That was an evil cliffy. I'm afraid to know what Alice's vision was. I didn't expect Emmett to be the one who called.
Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter!! Thanks for the update........
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Such a great story so far! I'm really curious to find out what Alice saw.
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 8
No!!!!!!! What did Alice see???? You have to post the next chapter asap, you can't leave us like this! You know it already, but I love your story, can't get enough of it. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 8
oh i just love it!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!! Keep up the Amazing work!!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh, what did she see??? At least she looked! Yay!
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hurry up and update.I have to know what she saw. Will her and Edward get together now?I love the stories that Alice/Edward and Bella/Jasper
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will be putting up chapter 9 for review in a couple of days.
Reviewer: megz8709 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 8
Evil cliffies! Grrr... It's ok though because I know you're going to update tomorrow, right? :) Keep it coming ma'am! I'm loving it!
Reviewer: DazzledMom (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 8
Arrrrrgggggg! You and your cliffhangers! I love your writing style and your plotline has me hooked and begging for MORE! Please update SOON!
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 7
hmm I hope that was just a dream and not an incubus. Nicley done I think might need that shower as well. Keep em' coming.
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
OH my word! I can't wait to read more! AH, that dream sequence was amazing, although I wanted to scream at the end of it when he walks away! OH I hope the ending of the dream is not ominous foreshadowing! Fabulously done!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was an exquisitely written chapter! You did a fabuolous job confusing details just enough to make sure we can not be entirely certain of our assumptions on whos POV it is. Just wanted to say well done before I find out if I'm right or not as to who this is.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read this.who is that Prince? Update soon.!!
Reviewer: Nurse_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
The prince should totally be Jasper!! I am in love with this story and I need to know the ending. Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Chapter 8 is up for approval! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 7
I want a dream like that! I want a prince too!!!
Author's Response: I know! Me too!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yay! All is forgiven! I bet it's Alice on the phone!
Author's Response: Chapter 8 will resolve the question of who is on the phone. I am just waiting for approval! Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 7
I love the story line. The interaction with Jasper is very good. Please update again soon!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 7
A cold shower would be a dinfinite must after that dream. My first guess would be that the prince is Edward. He is calling her love. What she sees as a crown could be his yummy wild "sex hair" as we all love to call it. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great story so far! I love the plot.... can't wait to see how it all develops!!
Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oooh, very interesting! (And I get to return the favor now and review yours.) I like that we have Edward teaching for a change. The name risten made me laugh, along with the eyes. :-) Hmmm, wonder who modeled for that. Ha! More seriously, I want a job like Edward's, where I'd get to have a regular room all to myself with a desk and shelves! Here where I teach, we have to share. I tend to teach in one of about 5 usual rooms, but it varies from semester to semester, and other profs have it for other classes, so I can't personalize it much (beyond sticking my power-points on the computer). I look forward to reading more! But wanted to leave a quick review and comment on the unusual twist of Edward teaching instead of Bella teaching and Edward (or others) showing up as a student.
Author's Response: Are you sure it's Edward? Hee hee hee!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, please tell me it is Alice on the phone and she had a vision of Jasper and Bella meeting again. When his phone rang I swear I was bouncing up and down in my chair like Alice. I'm so glad you have kept true to what SM has laid out as vampires not changing their feelings. I was so worried Jasper and Bella were going to fall into some weird kinda love and was not looking forward to that. Now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Bella, in my mind, should always be with Edward. There will be some blurring of the lines but each character knows their place. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love this story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words.
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 6
Noooo, you can't leave it like that.Oh wait you have more chapters already written.Thank goodness. I can't wait till they meet again.
Author's Response: I promise I will have the next chapter up as soon as I tweek it a little! Thanks for the review.
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