Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hmm, interesting. Who's this woman?
Reviewer: Sonshine0124 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter! Great story! I can't wait to read more!!! Bring on the next chapter!! :o)
Author's Response: I am just waiting for my beta to approve chapter 9! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow! Lots of uncertainties, but cliffies can be fun (in a tormenting sort of way!). Wonder who's hating Bella across the street -- Victoria?, Irena? -- what's the impact of Jasper meeting Bella? Sap that I am, I kinda hope the "prince" isn't Jasper, but is Edward, less because I'm a big E/B shipper than because I LOVE Alice and Jasper, and can't bear the thought of them apart. But I'm still very interested in the whole Jasper-Bella dynamic, as friends, as both feel inadequate within the family ... they really DO have a lot in common, and I like that you picked up on that! Good job! Look forward to more!
Author's Response: I am loving your story too. Thanks for the comments! I know you won't be disappointed!
Reviewer: jordan hernandez (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
i love your story so much and i cant wait to read more
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
Liking it so far. Loved the prince!!! Gimme more of the prince!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
at first i thought it was edward, then the second i saw " civil war 101" it gave it away!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
very good!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
love it, love it
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
if i post 100 reviews will you please post a chapter faster!?!?! its a really good story, i love it..please post a chapter quick!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Awwwwwww, I can't believe you left us hanging like this!!! Please, please, please update soon! *sending reviews love vibes your way to help you post SOON!*
Author's Response: You'll be happy to know that I am working on chapter nine. I hope to have it approved by Friday!
Reviewer: Nurse_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love it, but please do not let Edward and Bella back together. I would like to read something different. I love you writing style though, keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
What was the Vision??What was it Update asap
Reviewer: sweeta8585 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love this story! Please post the next chapter soon!!!
Reviewer: simplywow (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 8
oh no... did Alice see Jasper doing something inappropriate with Bella? Jasper needs to get Bella home to Edward ASAP... like in the next chapter. Then I will forgive you for the cliffhanger.
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
I'm really enjoying your story. Keep posting!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
Very good chapter. Since you left us with w cliffy you must update soon!
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 8
AHHHHHH! I absolutely love this story! For once I can not already guess what will happen. You are doing a fabulous job with the suspense without using easily deciphered foreshadowing! I can't wait to see what the vision was.
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 7
Mmmmmm, what a dream!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey i just want to say that im absolutely loving this story!Im a big jasper/bella fan and even if they dont end up together in your story, im really enjoying their chemistry so far. I felt really sorry for Edward and Alice though, your writing was extremely emotive and insightful!Keep up the good work!I'l be waiting impatiently for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
Awwww, poor Jasper! I hope he gets back with Alice soon!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
Yes,...are the others here, too?
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yikes! Jasper!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
Surprise, surprise, surprise...JASPER! (I simply LOVE Cold Stone Creamery...yummy!)
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
