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Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
cool, so when will victoria make an appearance? Is Edward going to help with the protecting?
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 10
It is a great chapter. I hope Edward comes to the rescue.
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
crazy! i hope they get more help before victoria comes!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 10
Good chapter, even though it was short. (sorry, I tend to like longer chapters :/ ) Looking forward to the next chapter, keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 10
Aah...too short! Thanks for the update though, I look fwd more and hopefully soon!
Author's Response: Sorry...this was the shortest. Thank you for reviewing...I promise the next ones are longer!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
WHAT THE HELL???? Irina?? Never cared for her or Tanya. Jasper just take off her head and be done with it. I am liking Jasper and Bella together maybe Edward can stay away alittle longer. I know....I know for you "just" Edward fans dont hate me. Update soon...please
Author's Response: I'm not just an Edward fan...I have always thought Jasper wasn't given enough time in the series. I love him so much. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: rubies_and_topaz (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
gasp ! Irina ! this is wonderful. i hope there will be more !
Reviewer: rubies_and_topaz (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
gasp ! Irina ! this is wonderful. i hope there will be more !
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 9
what??! please post again soon!!
Author's Response: Chapter 10 is up for approval! Should be up in a couple of days!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
Just read all nine chapters, and I'm enjoying this so far. I can't wait to read more of it. :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 9
Whew, Irina...I thought it was going to be Victoria and Victoria had been planning to "kill" Jasper...hence the reason for the vision of Alice's. But, I was wrong...oh well! The suspense is GREAT in this story! Lovin it!
Reviewer: BettingonAlice (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
I just started reading your story today--good work! I love Twilight what-if stories! Looking forward to the next chapters!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ah, the ever irritable Irina.
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ooohh! I did NOT see that coming at all!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
Good More
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love how this story is going! I didn't expect it to be Irina but I can't wait to see if Edward is going to get to Jasper before anything can happen to him. Please update as soon as you possible can!!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 9
I'm not sure if my review went through, my computer had a fit, so i thought i'd post another one just incase... So another great chapter!Well done!I was so happy to see that you'd updated, but upset when i got to the end, it was to short, i kept trying to scroll down for more :) But i guess you could write 10 pages and it still wouldnt be enough, i'd still want more Jasper and Bella! Great twist with Irina living across the street!I was not expecting that! Love how your writing Jasper, hes so adorable and protective! When Edward said Alice had a vision of Jasper being murdered my mind went to a weird place. I immediately thought Edward had done it, out of jealousy or something. I know i'm probably way of but i guess i love the concept of fighting for someone you love, so my mind went there.BUT please dont kill Jasper, i love him, hes to pretty to die! :) Keep the chapters coming!And dont get down heartened by the limited reviews, people are just lazy :) and they obviously love your story, 400 reads is amazing, well done!So keep up the good work and update quick!Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know there are a lot of people who read...I am one of those people who review everything because I know the person loves a pat on the back. As for Jasper...I guess you will have to see...I love him too!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
Now this is a cliff hanger if there has ever been one. Please ...please dont leave us here long. I am really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: Chapter 10 is up waiting for review!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow, wasn't expecting it to be Irina! Would never have occurred to me. This is interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. I love Jasper, I'm so glad he is there with Bella.
Author's Response: I love him too. I have always felt he didn't get enough time in the series.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
A cliffy! Now you must update soon! Love this story! We need Edward back!
Author's Response: Don't worry...he'll be back. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Excellent story!!! Very well written, and quite interesting!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 9
Nice. I wasn't expecting Irina. I totally get the anger vibes now. This is about to get really interesting.
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 9
Irina? Huh? Still mad about Laurent maybe? Weird. Nice chapter though
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow. I totally didn't see that coming! And poor Alice I hate seeing her so miserable. Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story and appreciate you sharing it with us. Looking forward to the next chapter already!
Author's Response: Chapter 10 is waiting for approval. I needed to tweek it a little. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 9
great story, great chapter
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