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Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
That was so sweet. I can understand why you like that chapter so much. How much did you cry just writing that?
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 11
I will take you up to that offer Of a tissue this is what got me crying a ocean "I will always be thankful that I moved to Forks and met you and your wonderful family. I have no regrets." Update soon This is great
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
Nicely done! I wonder if he will ever get the letter? Hmm.... Oh and did you get my email about the banner link moving? You have to redo it in your story. Anyways, great chapter. Update soon....maybe with some Eward?
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
What a change in pace! Action adventure to angsty romance in the blink of an eye :) I am really hoping that Edward and Alice find them soon... Thanks for sharing, I'm really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Bellavampiresbetterthanyou (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
Excellent story! I can't wait to see Edward make an appearance.
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 10
I hope you're getting past the writer's block! This is really good.
Author's Response: Chapter 11 is waiting approval...and if I say so myself...it is my favorite chapter so far. I hope it is up soon!
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 10
Interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going to go. Things keep surprising me as I read through the story, so I'm sure that I can't predict what will happen next!
Reviewer: LoveEqualsEDWARD (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
I'm totally enjoying this story and the potential for a J+B connection (even if Edward does eventually come into the picture)! Heck, a J/B/E love triangle (which I'm only guessing at) has been my dream for a while now! :D Great story! I'm excited to see where you take it.
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
Interesting twist at the end of chapter 9. I'm loking forward to a good old Cullen family adventure. Hopefully they will be reunited soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with the story...it isn't a J x B story but does blur the lines a little to keep you guessing. Chapter 11 is awaiting approval.
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yay for EPOV! This is a major cliffhanger. Thank God I have more chapters to read.
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
Whew! I'm so relieved that Alice is still in the picture, so to speak. I hated the idea that they would be apart long-term. Thanks!!
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ugh, I don't know what to think! I am really enjoying this so far but I am afraid of it turning into a JasperXBella story and I am just not into those. Even when they are well-written, which this one is, it is just hard for me to swallow. I'm happy you put the little comment about Edward appearing at some point. I'm going to keep reading for now... I just hope this isn't going down the path of others I've read. But like I said, well-written and I'm interested to see what happens next.
Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ah! The plot thickens, so to speak! I like it, and look forward to more. Poor worried Alice!
Reviewer: Sonshine0124 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
Seriously, I know you just posted this last chapter...But I need MORE! Awesome story. Great job!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 10
Jasper is my hero...just love him so much for keeping Bella safe!
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
Nooooo! I keep hitting next but there is nothing there. Where's chapter11!? Great plot twist. Love it!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
good more
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
Loving it!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hi, Thanks for updating so quickly!I needed my fix :) This is a great chapter, i love how Jasper is protective of Bella, so cute! This was a short chapter but i feel it created the right emotions in the reader, a fast paced escape, so well done! Try not to worry about writers block, im sure it will come to you, try listening to some music you feel relates to the story or even try reading other fan fictions or watching a movie you love, it nevers hurts to borrow and change an idea, if its what you need to keep the story moving, make it your own. Hope my suggestions help, i do the same things when i'm stuck for ideas and the words eventually come. Anyway keep up the good work! Thanks :)
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMG. I so want an update fast. Why do I have a feeling if Edward finds out he will rip Irinia to shreds. I can't wait.
Author's Response: I hope to have Chapter 11 up by this weekend for approval. I have to tweek it a little to make it flow better! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 10
oh I love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter, this one was wonderful!
Reviewer: DazzledMom (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
This story is so good.....please update soon! I can't get enough!
Reviewer: Ken_Doll (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 10
please keep writing this is great wow your really quick at updating! sweet!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
I hope that Jasper is able to kill her soon, I am ready for some "happy" Jasper/Bella. I think that they both deserve it. Irina is a bitch and Victoria needs her arms and legs ripped off and made to suffer. Oops...is that alittle violent?? Sorry *blushing* I cant wait to see what is next!
Author's Response: Just a little violent! Hee hee! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ah, things are starting to make sense. My guess is that the werewolves are going to make an appearance soon? I love Jasper. He's such a good character, and really underused.
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