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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 12
<whew> did someone just turn up the heat??!! nicely done :) Poor edward and poor poor Alice. I hope this doesn't hurt them too much and that soon all will be right again in my Twilight world.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
Shit....I am seriously bawling here. I even wore makeup today, oops. That was one heartfelt letter, wonderful job writing it.
Author's Response: LOL! I had to laugh at your review! I initially wrote the letter first. I was up late one night and couldn't sleep and this letter came out. I was literally crying by the time I finished writing it and knew that I would have to work it into my story. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
I've really enjoyed this story! I like all the twists and turns and all the drama! I hope you update again soon! I'll be waiting :D
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
Poor Alice! Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really enjoying where you're heading with this.
Reviewer: Lee Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 12
Edward must get to Bella and Jasper and fast! I don't know how I missed all your updates but I was SO glad to find so many chapters to read, you had me glued to my screen, wonderful! Thank you and update soon!
Author's Response: Well, I am glad you found me again! LOL Chapter 13 should go up sometime this week.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
I can't wait for the next chapter! I was so glad to see that Alice saw that Bella is with Jasper. You are doing a wonderful job!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
It is very difficult for me to stop reading and review when I know there are still a bunch of chapters to go in this story, but I learned from starting my first story how beneficial reviews are to the writing process. So here goes...this story is GREAT. It's a nice change to read about Jasper and his take on the situation. I can't wait to find out what happens. FANTASTIC JOB!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. As a writer the reviews are really nice. I am ahead in my story, and plan to get another chapter up for approval very soon. It should be approved sometime next week. My twilighted beta is a very busy person!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 12
It's about time Edward found out about Bella.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
Find Bella
Author's Response: They will...eventually...thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
wonderful story. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
AAAAAWWWWW
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NNNNNNOOOOO i love it and it alost made me cry BUT how could you stop writing!!!!!!!!!! write more i really really really really really really want to see what happens please write FAST *kisses* *hugs*:):)
-vapire by heart P.S i give your story a 10:)
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
AAAAAWWWWW
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NNNNNNOOOOO i love it and it alost made me cry BUT how could you stop writing!!!!!!!!!! write more i really really really really really really want to see what happens please write FAST *kisses* *hugs*:):)
-vapire by heart P.S i give your story a 10:)
Author's Response: Chapter 12 is awaiting approval! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Killerbunys (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
A friend pointed me over here, and I'm glad I came.
This is a great story, I can't wait to read more. I have a big soft spot for Jasper, and you write him well.
I like that Bella is coping, she's still sad and she still misses Edward, but she's still getting on with things.
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
Very good chapter. The letter was so sad. I hope Edward (idiot) gets to read it!
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
Just found this story. I am intrigued can't wait to find out how it ends.
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
This was really good! I'm just wondering if we'll see the pack coming in to help the Cullens like we did in the books. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: elizabeth18 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
I like this story :-) Update soon!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 11
*sniffles* amazing...very amazing!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hey great chapter!Very emotional!My heart really went out to Bella!Though i didnt cry it was very moving, i cried while i was reading New Moon, thankgod i had Eclipse there to erase those awful feelings!I think the main reason i didnt cry while reading your chapter is because i know Bella has Jasper there to help her through and i believe that this Bella is stronger, more determined to move on and live her own life.Your writing is great, very expressive!Keep up the good work!I look forward to the next chapter!Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yes, I need a tissue. I think you said it all in that letter. Edward was an idiot to think she could ever forget him. I think it is impossible to forget your first love, especially a love like Bella and Edward's. I like how you have Bella helping Jasper move on and actually finding out he is ready to go home. I just wonder if you are going to have the Cullens or the pack help Jasper with Victoria and Irina.
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
That was really good! I hope Edward gets to read it somehow. I love Jasper in this.
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh My Goodness...I was ready to start crying, it was sooooo good! Oh how I wish that Alice would see the letter and know that Bella was with Jasper. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't make me wait for long, I love this story!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 11
Well you had me in tears! Poor Bella...will the Cullens runite to help Jasper fight Victoria and Inrina?
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yes I need a tissue. Now to find out if Edward, Alice and Jasper moved on. Edward with Alice and Jasper with Bella. Sorry Bella/Jasper lover here. Update soon
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 11
Nice. It's a lovely letter, too bad Edward will never get to read it. Can't wait for more! ~Cat~
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