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Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 13
I bet he smells Bella. I better read the next chapter right about.....now.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for reviewing! BTW...I loved the banner you made for my other story! It was really hot. The story has been well received as well. Chapter 14 is my favorite chapter to date. I hope to get 15 up ASAP!
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
Ah, so sorry that it's taken me this long to review... but I just freakin' love this story and cannot wait for an update! Great chapter...!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope to have chapter 15 up soon.
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
Ah, so sorry that it's taken me this long to review... but I just freakin' love this story and cannot wait for an update! Great chapter...!
Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
FINALLY caught up with the chapter updates. I liked the confrontation between Edward and Jasper here, and that, ironically, both men have hurt the women they love. It's nice to see Jasper's protective side, and that he gets all over Edward for leaving Bella. Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! This was my favorite chapter. Your story is awesome too! I love Jasper's protective side. Edward will definately have to work to see Bella for a while!
Reviewer: Whiterabbit61 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
This story is great! Just read from chapter 1 till here, and can't wait for the next chapter! Jasper is so lovely! =]
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review... If you like this story...and Jasper...check out my one shot (maybe two) called "Another One's Arms"
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Actually, I kind of have to keep reading. Curiosity really should be considered a disease. I'm sure I'll start liking your story again when everything gets out in the open. And I think you misunderstood me. I love the fact that you're giving Jasper a bigger role to play. That was thing that I didn't like about the originals though I understood Jaspers hesitations. I like the relationship you're building between them. And it was a compliment. You have a great wirting...eye? ear? hand? I don't know what they call it. But you have it. It's strange how you think you can't do something and then all of the sudden something inspires you.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am really glad I have found that I can write. I do it all the time now. By the way...your comment put me at 200 reviews...so double thanks!!!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
okay, well I guess I can see where you're coming from now. I may not agree with you, but I get your point of view. I do like that you're making jasper a bigger part in Bella's life, but I just don't like how you're doing it if that makes sense. To each his own I guess. Keep up the great writing. Even If I don't like what you do with your talent, I think you're talented none the less.
Author's Response: That is the wonderful thing about life...we don't have to agree with everyone. Thank you for the compliment on my talent (I think?). To be honest with you...I have NEVER considered myself a writer. I stumbled across my muse when I was stressed out one day. I don't quite understand what you meant when you said you didn't like the way I was making Jasper a bigger part of her life. This is NOT a Jasper/Bella fic (although I have an AU to this AU on the site). I understand if you don't like it...sorry. I appreciate your honesty...it is a wonderful quality. When I don't like a story on this site I tend to shy away and not leave a review because I don't want to hurt the author's feelings. I hope you will continue to read These Dreams (if you want), if not...I totally understand. Thanks again for your honesty.
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 14
Okay, I see why this would be your favorite. I love the interactions with the family and Jasper playing big brother trying to protect Bella. She is so fragile with all the things going on and he just convinced her to put together her feelings, even though he doesn't know that she took his advice. He knows how she's hurt after walking in when she was having the nightmare and comforting her so now he's just trying to keep her from getting hurt any more. I think that Edward is starting to see his point after he finally calms himself down. Don't really see that the Cullen men being in town staying a secret too long though. Bella's a smart woman and is more perceptive than some of them give her credit for. So glad you updated so quickly, hope the next one comes out soon too! I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. You're right...the cullen men won't be away from her for long. Bella is too smart for that...and besides, that wouldn't be nice!
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 14
I still am a little uncomfortable with Jasper's possessiveness over Bella. I don't think being dishonest with her is doing anything to ease her pain. I do like this fiery Edward though. And I also like that you make Jasper aware that he is guilty of leaving his soulmate as much as Edward is. I was secretly hoping Bella WOULD notice a change in the house's smell! Patience is not my strong suit. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Jasper will lighten up over time. He is protective because he knows Bella's true feelings about what happened to her because he can feel them. Jasper will have to do some major kissing up when him and Alice do FINALLY reunite. Thank you for reviewing...I might actually hit 200! I am glad this story is well received.
Reviewer: Love_Dynasty (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 13
I absolutely love this story....
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 14
This is a great story! Please continue to update quickly! I love how emotional you write. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing...you made my day!
Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wow, great chapter! It's starting to get really gooood!! Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: It will be a little angsty...but I want Edward to work for Bella! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 14
I am still surprised that Edward was able to calm down enough not to bust into the house and carry her away. You also done a great job writing Jasper's lines about what Edward done to Bella when he left, hell what the whole family done to her. Keep up the great work and I cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Reviews make my day!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 14
Hey!Great Chapter!!Well done! Firstly let me say that Edward is so hot when hes angry and jealous!!I can just picture him fuming :) Secondly im alittle upset that Jasper only feels brotherly feelings towards Bella, i know he and Alice are a perfect couple in the real world of Twilight but i like to shake things up in the fanfiction realm so please dont make the relationships predictable...but hey i know you'll keeps us guessing in the end! Your writing is great so keep up the good work!I cant wait for the next chapter!!Keep em coming!! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Please look for my AU of this story..."Another One's Arms". It is based on what could have happened in Chapter 13 of this story if Jasper couldn't control the emotions swimming around Bella. I am waiting for approval. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Cutthroat_Beauty69 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 14
I love overreacting Edward! He's so funny! This chapter gets a 10 just beacuse of overreacting Edward! Great chapter can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: I love it when he overreacts too. This chapter came easily to me. I saw it play out in my head like a movie!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm so happy they are staying. I just knew Edward was going to think Jasper wanted Bella. I love your Jasper. You do a great job writing him.
Author's Response: Your faithfulness in reviewing makes my day! Thanks jennmc for your support!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ah man....no Edward and Bella kissy-face. It makes sense though.
Author's Response: Patience.....it will come! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love seeing Jasper in brother mode with Bella. It warms my heart. Yay, Edward is there :)
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aweseome chapter. I love it that Jasper told of Edwad! More please, soon!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. I pictured Jasper being protective of the new found relationship with Bella, then wrote what I thought he might say.
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 14
There is the Edward we know and love! Finally starting to wake up to the fact that he needs to do something to win Bella back. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: I don't want it to be easy for him. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 14
*grunts* well....I think you're a talented writer and I really like some of your stuff, but I have to say I really don't understand this. It's Edwards business what he does with Bella and if he loves her, why should he wait to see her again when they can be together. What? Jasper gets forgiveness but Edward doesn't deserve it. I'm really trying hard to understand, but I can't get over it. And another reason why I don't get it is because Jasper did the same damn thing as Edward! How can he do that to Alice and be angry at Edward? At least Edward was doing it becasue he thought he was protecting her. Jasper ran away because he couldn't handle it. PS and By the Way, this isn't som over the top yelling rampage. I really did like you're story up till this point. Well I still do like the plot and everything, but this chapter really did disturb me.
Author's Response: Let me see if I can explain so you understand where I am thinking with this chapter... Yes, Jasper did the same thing to Alice...believe me when I say that he will be paying for his actions as well. The angst isn't over for him. The reason why Jasper wants Edward to wait to see Bella is because he is playing the protective brother role (that he hasn't played before). Jasper knows first hand the pain that Bella has experienced because he has felt it. He wants her to be prepared and ready to see him. (It is how I pictured a big brother acting in regards to someone he cares about.) Jasper gets forgiveness from Bella because she never blamed him. Edward will get his too, eventually. For right now, this is where my story turned. Jasper isn't thinking about Alice at this time in the story...although he will be...his first priority is keeping Bella safe. This story has a mind of its own. I sit down to write and the words come out. I can take constructive criticism and I don't mind explaining where I came up with things. I appreciate your review and comments and hope I answered your questions.
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
This "reunion" chapter was perfect. I think Jasper said all that he needed to say!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 14
GREAT chapter!!! I wasn't expecting an update so soon! Somehow I think Bella will figure out on her own that the other Cullen boys are in town...she was always very perceptive! And I love how Jasper stood up for Bella against Edward! Looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: I wasn't expecting it to be approved so soon either! I thought she would approve it this weekend. Thank you for reviewing! She is very perceptive.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 14
Arrrgggh I LOVED this except it was just way too short :( I want more!!! I'm glad it's not going to be easy for edward, he needs to work for Bella's love. And I'm glad that the boys are there to stop Victoria's evil plan. Update soon. Please??????
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the story to this point. I was very surprised that it was approved so quickly. Usually it takes my beta a little while to get to it. Edward will have to definately work to get back into her life! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow, can't beleive I missed the update for this chapter. I am so glad this didn't turn into a Bella/Jasper thingie. I can't wait for the reunions. OH hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: No this isn't a Jasper/Bella fic; however I do want them to develope a relationship that wasn't developed in the Twilight Series. I have always felt sorry for Jasper because he couldn't get to know Bella on a personal level like everyone else. Thank you for reviewing!
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