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Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 17
OME!!! Yeah, YEAH! YEAH!!!! This chapter is so beautiful, so sweet, so PERFECT!! I am glad Edward is being held in check by Jasper, because is it giving him the important opportunity to really wallow in the mess he created and all the resultant angst, fear, jealousy and regret. Since he will have to fight so hard to get Bella back, maybe he will be more appreciative of what he has. Also I continue to love protective-Jasper; I think his proximity to Bella is also making him more appreciative of what he has waiting at home for him. I am glad Bella had a good dream for once and Edward could be there to bask in its splendor with her. Fabulous!!! (Now your review addiction has been fed; feed our update addiction, please, please, PLEASE!!!)
Author's Response: LOL! Your review made me chuckle! I am glad that SOMEONE understands what I am doing with Jasper. Jasper is going to be such a better person because of what he has been going through with Bella. Thank you so much for the review. I hope to have chapter 18 up sometime tonight, however it does take my Twilighted Beta a while to get to it because she has so many to read. Be patient...it will be coming!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 17
I loved this chapter. Like you said, not a conventional reunion, but definitely a good one. I just wonder how long poor Edward will be able to contain himself. Poor Jasper. All those emotions he is subject to between both of them. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: They will have their reunion shortly. I knew you guys needed a "reunion" of sorts. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 17
Awwwwww that was so sweet!!!!!
Author's Response: Loved that dream, huh? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 17
Sigh... that was great.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: cullencrazy (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
yay he saw her! and held her! and spoke to her! *chanting* wake up bella! wake up bella! edward finally got to be near bella. yay! im glad that jasper has been so truthful with edward. he needed to know about all the things he did to bella. he was let off way too easily in new moon (though i am team edward). please update soon. xoxo
Author's Response: I am team Edward too...I was also chanting the same thing as I wrote this chapter. I loved how Bella was dreaming but Edward was really there... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 17
I loved that her dream was a combination of reality and her imagination! LOVED the make out session and the kiss!
Author's Response: Can you imagine having your dream become a reality? That is what I was thinking about when I wrote that chapter! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 17
I enjoyed this "reunion". The emotion was lovely, compared to the possible angry/sad feelings coming from Bella if she was awake. Thank you for updating and I hope you do again very soon!!!
Author's Response: Unfortunately for us...those angry/sad feelings are on the way. (They are the hardest to write!) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 17
Woah, that is so cute it makes me all warm and fuzzy! :D i like love your writing! Cant wait for another update! I love how he hums her lullaby it's so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
You made me very happy by letting him see Bella & cuddle with her while she slept...so sweet & yet so sexy!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to send me some love...
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
I'll take the dream reunion for now. :-)
Author's Response: The real reunion is on it's way!!!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great next chapter! I was wondering when you would update! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 17
I think Jasper's getting a bit too heavy on the controlling side of things. It seems like he's obsessing over Bella as a way to avoid dealing with his own problems and guilt over leaving Alice. It's not his right to tell Edward that he can't see Bella. What is Jasper, Bella's warden? It's about time for Jasper to step back from the situation and stop treating Bella like she's made of glass. He needs to leave and deal with his own problems and let Edward and Bella make their own decisions. Just my opinion. Love the story!
Author's Response: One of the things that I thought about before writing this story was how Jasper would feel if he ever got the chance to be around Bella. In Twilight, he was never able to forge a relationship with her because of his bloodlust. In New Moon, he nearly kills her because of it. I figured if he were ever able to gain control over the bloodlust that he might just be a LITTLE overprotective. He has felt every emotion that has coursed through Bella's body in relation to her nightmares and their discussions involving Edward. He will lighten up. He will make it back to Alice and fix his own problems. I truly value your opinion to my story and hope that you will continue to read it. I love all reviews! Thanks for taking the time to share your view of my story. Jami
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
OK, that was creepy, sexy. I half expected Bella to wake up with a vampire on top of her. What a strange dream. I hope she tells Jasper about it, that and the fact she thinks someone is watching her.
Reviewer: JennieGirl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great story! Update please update please :)
Author's Response: Chapter 17 is awaiting approval!
Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 16
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
I don't know if poor Edward can survive much longer just watching in the shadows. I have to think that was Edward that took her up to her bed.
Reviewer: ccrawford92 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
Update please!
Reviewer: ccrawford92 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love the letter... it's eloquent but simply says everything. Great writing. I love your work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 16
Oh WOW! It's Edward isn't it? He's the one tucking her in to bed? Jasper's going to be pissed. Royally pissed! The scene in the kitchen with Jasper covered in cornmeal, yeah, too good. Way too good. I swear, you must have snuck over to my house in TX and peaked through the window when I'm trying to cook, right? Fess us! I know it was you. (Yep, I was as bad as Jasper until I gave up on cooking.) I actually enjoyed Edward "stalking" the house and talking to Jasper and telling him what to do when Bella got hurt. I'm a little suprised that she so easily gave up on Jasper hiding something. I understand that she trusts him and knows he will tell her, but I still expected a bit more of a fight. Oh well. It was still fantabulous! (My new made up word.)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. Your words are appreciated. I have Chapter 17 up and waiting for review right now. I figured if Bella fought too hard, Jasper would give in...and for my story that wouldn't work. So...for that reason she was a little OOC, but it works for the story. I keep thinking about the movie when Bella is at the hospital and Edward says, "You're not going to let this go are you?" and she replies..."No." That just wouldn't work for my Bella!
Reviewer: Love_Dynasty (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 16
please let it be edward!
Author's Response: IDK...have to wait and see!
Reviewer: nutella (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love your story! I had to read it all at once. I cant wait to see what happens next, Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: buttonaye (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 16
This story is just amazing, I swear I love it and I'm really stoked to see what happens next (: Your writing is fabulous!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Heya, i'm loving this story!! It's so cute! I really like that ending, with edward (i'm hoping it's Edward) Can't wait until you write more!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! It could be Edward...it could be Jasper...the next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: kymbacullen (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 16
PLEASE tell me that its Edward at the end...PLEASE;) Great story btw but Jasper needs to go look after his own relationship now. Time for the big boys to step up
Author's Response: IDK! Edward will make an appearance in the next chapter...guaranteed! Thanks for reviewing.
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