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Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 18
Nooooo Jasper can't love Bella THAT way! I really don't think he does, he just missess ALice! hahahah I can't wiait for Bella's reaction to seeing Emmett! "Honey I'm home!" LOL Oh Emmett! :)
Author's Response: He doesn't! He is just a little overbearing when it comes to Bella right now, and he is missing his wife. I am glad you liked the last line. It seemed to fit!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 18
why do all authors insist on putting cliffies at the ends of their stories? *sigh*
the person who came in was emmett wasnt it? it woudl be really awesome to have emmett back. a lot more fun :)
keep writing, things are starting to get really interesting.
xoxo
Author's Response: I really didn't intend for that chapter to end that way...it just did.
Who else could come in a room like that? I love Emmett and feel that it is his turn to have some Bella fun. Next chapter will hopefully be up soon! Thanks for reviewing...it made me smile!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 18
I loved this chapter and i cant wait for the next one. I have a feeling it is emmett coming in the door because that is definitely something he would say to bella. I cant wait to see bella's reaction. I am ecstatic to see bella and edwards reunion as well. This was an amazingly well written chapter. YOu do such a great job of bringing everyone's emotions to life. I love this story!!! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope to have the next chapter approved soon.
As for who is coming through the door...who else WOULD say that?
Reviewer: ndtwilightluvR (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 18
I LOVE this story! please keep writing! i really want to know what happens!!!!
Author's Response: I hope to have the next chapter up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 18
your lucky your writing is so good or i would hat you for the cliffy, but i love your writing to much! More More, i check this every day waiting for more!!
..:Taylor IS Jacob:..
Author's Response: I know! I almost hated leaving the story there. I will have the next chapter up as soon as my beta can approve it!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 18
um update now........ now now now now now now........ please.
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 18
Ugh. Jasper forbids Edward to see Bella? Ugh, ugh, ugh. How controlling and manipulative. He has no right to do that and needs to butt the eff out. I'm really starting to not like him in this story.
Author's Response: He is a little overbearing huh? Well, that will soon change...trust me. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 18
it's Emmett!!!! oh i love Emmett!!!
Author's Response: Me too!!! I hope to have the next chapter approved as soon as possible so you won't have to wait long.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 18
EMMETT! It HAS to be Emmett! Too cute! Now you've got me dying for your next chapter! Not that I don't always. By the way, what's up with Jasper possibly feeling jealous? Of Edward? I so hope not. Maybe it's just more of a jealousy in the sense that he, Jasper, has been the one to care for Bella all this time, and now feels threatened by Edward's apparent effect on Bella. She may not need him anymore, and Jasper has come to love being protective over his little sister. I so hope that's where this is going, IF you plan on going down that road at all. And I miss Edward's POV! I'd love to know his thoughts on now that, apparently, Emmett is about to burst back into Bella's life. What will Emmett say of Edward to her? An Emmett pov would be great, too. I loved the last one you did. Very big-brotherly! I can't wait to read more! PLEASE POST ASAP! I love it all!
Author's Response: Jasper is NOT jealous of Edward. You hit the nail on the head. Jasper feels threatened by Edward's presence because he has been the one to take care of her. He is the overbearing, overly protective, big brother. He has never had a relationship with a human before and tends to take it to extremes. EPOV is fun to write but also very difficult for me. It is hard to be broading at times. I can assure you that a EPOV chapter is coming soon. I also have an EmPOV coming as well. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: missmaj (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
Noooo! Don't leave us with a cliffy!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry!! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Love_Dynasty (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 17
that was great!
Reviewer: JennieGirl (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 17
I am dying here! Update soon :)
Author's Response: I have chapter 18 up for approval. I am hoping for it to be approved tonight! Hang in there! It's coming!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 17
So I am guessing that in Bella's other dream of her prince that Edward was not him. Am I right? And if not, then who?Hmmm... Jasper maybe? He does seem to be a little too attatched to Bella(not that I'm complaining, I like Jazz) Anxious to find out!
Author's Response: Bella never sees his face in her dreams. The prince has always been Edward, however her dreams were mixed with reality in this chapter. In her first dream about the prince, it was just that...a dream. This time, as she dreamed, Edward was there and the two states became confused. GAH! Am I making any sense? Thanks for taking the time to review. If you like the idea of Jasper/Bella, go check out my other story..."Another One's Arms". It is based on what could have happened if Jasper lost control of the emotions flying around the room in Chapter 13 of this story. Lemony goodness...for sure!!!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
Aaahhh...that was such a sweet little reunion. (Even if half of the party didn't realize it was real.) I can't wait for what's coming next!
Author's Response: Chapter 18 is up for approval! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mercury10872 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
omg, that was just as heartbreaking as the pages in New Moon where Edward leaves Bella! Great Job, you have me hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 17
Yay! Even though it's a semi-reunion, I loved it.
Author's Response: The real reunion is on the way...thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
that had to be the best.. "reunion" I have ever read, period. Thank you for your words.
Author's Response: Your welcome! Thank YOU for the review!
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
great chapter. i wonder what Bella will do when she see Edward? cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great pseudo reunion! I will take what I can get and this will defintely hold me over for a little while. They just need each other SO much.... its so good. Please update soon. I love it.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 17
Now THAT went COMPLETELY differently than I had imagined. I originally thought that Edward had "snuck in" to watch Bella sleeping, risking angering Jasper. But what you wrote was SOOO much better suited for the flow of the story. I love how Bella reacted to Edward's touch and voice while sleeping. Wonderfully written! I cannot wait to read more. Please post more ASAP. Thanks!
Author's Response: The idea to confuse the readers was my beta's idea, and it worked. Edward needs to learn to listen to others instead of thinking that he is the only one that has a say in everything. Besides, it was his fault that things are the way they are in the first place! Thank you for the kind words. I hope to have the next chapter up very soon. It is written, I just need to tweek it and then have my Twilighted Beta approve it!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awwww... little tears for the "reunion"... love it
Author's Response: The real reunion is on the way...will be just a tad bit angsty! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter!!! I have been waiting forever to read that! I cant wait to see their actual reunion! Update soon please!!!
Author's Response: I am sorry it took so long. The chapter has actually been waiting for approval for a while. My beta is a really busy lady. I will have Chapter 18 posted tonight and hopefully she will approve it by next Friday. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
So Sweet. Its nice that they can at least be honest with each other in her dreams.
Author's Response: At least he can huh? It is too bad that she doesn't really know he is there. She will eventually! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Tatiana Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely love the storyline! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please post again soon.
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