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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 23
Excellent update! I am happy for Alice and Jasper. They had a hot reunion! I am so contented by Edward and Bella. I'm glad they are putting the past behind them and focusing on their future together. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up as soon as I get it just right...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 23
aww so cute! glad Alice and Jazz are back together!
Author's Response: Yes they are...thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 23
Thank you for this chapter. It was well worth the wait. I found Edward's reaction to Bella's confession to be loving and understanding. Gone are the days of his irrational temper, having now had 3 years to realize what the loss of his Bella meant to his life. I truly cannot wait to see where the go from here.
Please post more asap. It feels like FOREVER since last you did. I really missed it.
Author's Response: I want you to know that I post the next chapter very quickly after the last has been updated. This last time, I wanted to make sure that Jasper and Alice's reunion was just right, so it did take me a little longer. Sorry about that. I will be putting the next chapter up this weekend. Validation takes a little longer...but I know you understand.
I do appreciate your continued support. I think I value your opinion a whole lot. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
These Dreams is one of the first I started reading on Twilighted - intrigued by the unique storyline and less common lead character.
I'm pretty sure I'm TEAM JASPER after this story. Nicely done - can't wait for more.
Oh, and ya. I really hope Ed's got a lot more to prove before he gets back in Bella's good graces.
Chris to Edward: As guilty as she might feel about bedding a wolf - THE WOLF WAS THERE while you weren't. What's a red-blooded early 20-something girl supposed to do you moron?
I digress. Keep writing!
Chris.
Author's Response: I loved your review. It made me chuckle. The Chris to Edward part...? Priceless. I am hoping to have Chapter 23 approved soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
OH I love it!!! Can't believe its almost over!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Magic Reader (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wow that was scary Jasper!!!
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 15
love emmett's pov...wish more people would write it....i'm loving your story...sorry i haven't commented after every chapter, but i'm reading it all at once and i can't hardly stop
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I do have the next chapter up (Chapter 23) and it is waiting to be approved. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter! I love that Bella needs time to take him back! Sometimes I think she's a little too forgiving of Edward.
Sorry its taken me so long to catch up! I'll hopefully be caught up with all my reading (which includes your story) by the end of tomorrow!
Author's Response: Don't need to apologize. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Carmina (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 22
I really liked this story! please update soon!
Reviewer: marie-jo (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 22
Hello,
I am new to this site and I just read all the 22 chapters of your amazing story. Wow!!!! It is very well written and I cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response: Welcome marie-jo! I am glad you found my story. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 22
dum..dum..dumm.... Holy green tights batman!!! Ouch.. that's gotta hurt poor eddie but he did say nothing..
That was a nice lil cliffy ;-)
Author's Response: Believe me when I say he will have plenty to say in the next chapter!!! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 22
very realistic here. I grinned as I imagine Bella screaming at Jasper and Edward not saying anything for fear of her turning on him too.
I'm glad they are beginning to open up to each other.
Edward will forgive her for sleeping with Jake... right?
Author's Response: Not to worry...I do believe in happy endings...it just takes some pain before getting there. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: giovanna (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 22
great
Reviewer: Tudor1 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 22
OMG!!! Update!
Reviewer: brandybunny (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
OMG I totally did not see that one coming!! Does Jacob make an appearance? I love it though, great plot twist =) I can't wait to find out more....reeeeeeeally soon I hope lol. keep up the fabulous job!
Reviewer: Lunar Eclipse (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow That was an great chapter. I think that Edward will be a little upset that Bella slept with Jacob but will forgive her because there is nothing he can do plus he has cause her enough pain. I also think that Jasper and Bella have more than brother and sister love for one another and she realize that she loves Jasper. But Edward still loves her she just doesn't have that same kinda of love for him anymore and that has a lot to do with the fact that he left her broken. But hey those are just my thoughts however you decide to finish your story I'm sure we will all love.
Author's Response: You're a Jasper lover huh? Thanks for the review! More to come.
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, I was about to say that I loved this chapter till I got to this line, "I slept with Jacob Black!".
*sobs*
Your killing me here... I think you did a nice job with the whole Jasper issue that you were concerned about - whatever you changed, worked well within the story. :D
Author's Response: Stick with me, lovey...it'll all get better! Bella needed to get mad at Jasper and the way I had the chapter written before, she didn't. Thanks for your continued support!
Reviewer: Newbie0100 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh god I hope that edward is understanding that just because he's an abnormal (in more than 1 ways) vamperson that it doesn't mean everyone has the same qualms about virginity. It was completely normal for Bella to move on and have that experience hopefully he realizes that and doesn't let that come between them. I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: He might lose it a little, but he will realize that she was only doing what he told her to. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 22
Ahh geez I have to get caught up with the story so that I could get hung up on THAT cliffy. Gee thanks haha. Now I'm going to be left pondering the many different ways that he could react to this bit of news.
Ahhh such a cruel twist of fate this cliffy is... but I am so relieved that you have her being honest and truthful with Edward from the get go.
Ok...I'm off to sit back and wait like everyone else is. I hope that the next chapter comes soon, but regardless of if it's tomorrow or next week, I'm super excited!
Author's Response: You are my new best friend!!! Oh my gosh...I came back from teaching (I teach a few HS classes) and had all of your reviews to read! Thank you so much.
I am glad that you are enjoying my story. I have enjoyed writing it. I have made so many new friends from being a part of the Twilight world and I couldn't be happier.
Jasper is by far my favorite character to write. His head is easy for me to get into. I really wish that Stephenie had explored his character a little more. I know I left with a cliffy...but rest assured...the next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 21
YES! *dances about in a happy fashion*
Now normally I hate it when Bella just welcomes Edward back with semi-open arms, but hell poor Edward's been tortured enough by being forced to sit outside and watch from afar while his brother becomes total BFF's with his beloved. I mean really! So for once I am perfectly content with the lack of resistence from Bella in Edward's re-entry into her life.
I'm going to go squeal now and read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed the next chapter as much as you enjoyed this one. Thanks for taking the time to review. I think you will love chapter 24!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 20
Forgive me for this is short...but Bella just saw Edward so I HAVE to jump to the next chapter and read right now!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
It's Emmett, it's gotta be because it's a total Emmett thing to say hahaha.
Silly oaf.
Onwards I go
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
The addiction to reviews is all consuming isn't it? That's why I review, I figure that if other authors are as addicted to reviews as I am, it would be good karma to feed their addictions lol.
I love how he went to her in her dreams, while she was sleeping. It was just so touching. I even tilted my head and went "awwww" out loud. Ok...onwards to the next chapter...
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 16
Edward came to visit her while she was sleeping didn't he?
I love the varying POV's of different scenes. Normally that drives me crazy but you do it very well!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
Ok so please forgive me for taking so damned long to review but I just couldn't stop my reading lol. I love the way you write Jasper. So few people take on the task of writing his character, because in many cases, it's hard to do and people just can't pull it off... but you do. You write his character very well and it comes out naturally.
I'm so glad the rest of the Cullen boys are there now, and I'm wondering about Edward and Bella's reunion, and even more so...Jasper and Alice's.
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