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Reviews For These Dreams
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 23

Not so much a review as a response to your response of my earlier review...yes...I have often wondered about the letter in chapter 11...by now, Bella has probably forgotten it is there...she would probably be mortified if he read it since it is her deepest, innermost thoughts...usually those letters are for someone to read after you are dearly departed so they can wallow in whatever it is the letter brings them to: guilt, self-pity, regret, the wan glow of everlasting love and devotion...whatever...I wanted him to find the letter one of the nights he was sneaking in there while she slept...but perhaps now is as good a time as any...she's already purged the big, hairy, shapeshifting skeleton from her closet...if Edward has any doubts left...perhaps that letter could set him straight...but it only seems fair if he does read it that he responds in kind with some deep heart felt sentiment or action of his own...maybe not telling her he's read the letter...because she might be embarrassed or angry...but definitely assuring her that whatever her feelings are, they are returned in full and then some...whatever her suffering, he suffered too, whatever her regret, so his...you get it...I mean, it's your story, I trust you implicitly...I'm just rambling on about my own thoughts on the matter...

I do love your story...as is perhaps evident in my reviews...



Author's Response:

I have the chapter written out but I do need to make it better. I am never really happy with my work. I am always tweeking it and trying to make it better. I am glad you enjoy my story. I have enjoyed writing it. I had never in a million years thought of myself as a writer and now I am doing it. It has been quite therapudic for me. (did I spell that one right?)

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh goody, all is well in Jalice world, cant wait for more, looking forward to Edward running himself ragged for Bella.

Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 23

I loved the Edward and Bella parts...I was at work when the Jasper and Alice parts took me by complete surprise...and our cubicles only have half walls...whoa! So I had to come home and give the whole thing a thorough reading again. I loved the build up of Jasper's emotions as he got closer and closer to home and then...nothing...Alice wasn't waiting for him...I felt so sad for him but her entrance was perfect..."You kept me waiting a long time..." It was poignant for me...like a do-over when you are a playing a game and you don't get it right the first time...that was my favorite part of the whole chapter...how sweet and quiet and subdued Alice was when she finally came to Jasper, and how easily she forgave him and gave herself back to him...I loved it...I wish Bella and Edward could have some of that ease...the two of the them are always suffering...the emotions between Jasper and Alice were better for me than the lemonylicious parts of their reunion...I guess because I always perceive their relationship on such a deeply intimate and unspoken level...intense but not overt like the others...but I guess after 3 years...they deserve a little somethin'

Well done...



Author's Response:

You are too funny. I have had to do that at times...surpress a moan from reading some lemony goodness...

Edward and Bella will have their time in the next chapter. They still have some things to resolve and Edward keeps bugging me to find that letter that Bella wrote in chapter 11. More to come!

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 23

Awwww! I loved it....so happy our favorite couples are getting back together now, even though Bella and Edward didn't get all their issues sorted out quite yet. I can't to see what kind of ending this story has. Love it totally!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words. Still a little more with Bella and Edward...then the Epilogue. {Sniff}

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 23

Well DAMN!!! I think that I am all for some Jasper and Alice now... *shifts in seat...* I should go wake the hubby!



Author's Response:

I know, huh? I read some of these stories on this site and think to myself...there is no way in hell that I could be a single woman reading these! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ally72 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 23

As always, another awesome chapter!

Reviewer: that_writr (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Yes, I think they made some progress.  And Edward had BETTER earn her trust back.  Please forgive the grammar nut: "I felt my heart sore and I held my breath."  (heart soar ...) :-)  sore means it hurts.  Her heart may have BEEN sore, but now it's flying (soaring).

The Jasper-Alice reunion was sweet, but this amused me: "Jasper, quit playing with me and fuck me! It's been three years! There will be time for making love some other time."  Trust Alice to put it in no uncertain terms!



Author's Response:

Don't mind the English corrections at all! What surprises me the most is that my Beta (who is really big on Grammar) didn't catch it either! I will go change it as soon as I am finished responding to your review!

Thanks so much for your kind words. I don't normally drop the f-bomb but for some reason there just wasn't any other way for Alice to get her point across! I envisioned her becoming impatient with his gentleness and being Alice, wouldn't have a problem voicing her opinion.

Reviewer: raindancer (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 23

I love the depth you've put into Jasper's character. Its an interesting and compelling take on our friends from Forks. Hope you keep updating, I'll keep reading!



Author's Response:

I am all team Edward...but I loves me some Jasper! He is an awesome character that didn't get enough "airtime" in my opinion. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 23

THANK YoU, thank you.  I was so afraid you would fade to black on Jasper and Alice.

Because it has been, essentially, Edward and Bella's story  I feared that you wouldn't let us know what happened with J and A.  I just needed tosee it all.

Man,can you write the steamy stuff!

Thanks so much I have enjoyed your writing tremendoulsy.  Now I must get to the long-neglected upstairs bathroom and you must chain yourself to your computer to continue on with this story



Author's Response:

I couldn't let Jasper fade to black...even though in the series it is always about Edward and Bella, I hope in my story that I made it a little bit about Jasper too. I love the character and knew that he would always end up back with Alice but I really got to explore his mind in this story.

Edward and Bella have a little more to go and then there is the Epilogue. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 23

so happy to see a & j back together again!  great reunion!!

 

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 22

I absolutely LOVE this story.  You really know these characters inside and out.

It is sometimes difficult with fan fiction to let go and let the author run with the characters.  I feel you can be "trusted" with my beloved characters to be true to them.

Thanks so much for feeding my obsession with everything Twilight!

Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great... lol

 

I really love your story..



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 23

Woohoo!  Jasper is back where he belongs (Loved the welcomoe back scene btw).  I'm so happy about that!!

And happy too that Edward and Bella used tongues!!  WTG sexward!!!

Another well written chapter, you could feel the anxiousness Jasper had coming home, the pain from Alice too.  Very well done.

Now hurry and update!



Author's Response:

I want to thank you for reviewing my story. I have loved writing it.

Jasper is back and Bella and Edward have a little more to do too. Update will come soon...hopefully.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 23

Squeal Wow go Jasper!  I am so proud of the way he handled himself cough cough. 

And for Bella as well no scerets she told him the truth and nothing but the truth.  Swoon!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 23

Well I am glad that Jasper went back to Alice. It is about time. Yes, I like your story and I Edward and Bella will work out their stuff or baggage. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

One more regular Chapter and then the Epilogue...{sniff}. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 23

This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read what comes next for Edward and Bella. I am glad that Jasper and Alice are together again. Kudos



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Newbie0100 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 23

I was doing a happy dance when Edward didn't totally screw everything up with his temper! It was refreshing for him to let her take some credit for her own mistakes without yelling at her like she's a child he must protect. I loved the Alice/Jasper reunion! I was almost worried that this was going to turn into a Jasper/Bella fic and we were going to find Alice with another man when she wasn't there to greet Jazz after his flight. Not to worry though jbluvs2sing would never do that to me! Yay 3 cheers for a wicked 23rd chapter well worth the wait!! Will wait for more so update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Edward has grown as has Bella. I knew he needed to respond a little like he had in the past, but didn't want him to totally lose it.

I have one regular chapter left...Edward and Bella (Edward just had to find the letter she wrote back in Chapter 11)...and then the Epilogue with the Bella/Cullen reunion! Thanks for trusting me! Also...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great...isn't this the end???I assumed that it was...E back with B, J back with A...I was going to remove it from alert status!

Well...good...waiting for more!



Author's Response:

NO! I have one more chapter (Edward and Bella) and then the Epilogue. Please don't remove it yet! Edward still has to find the letter that Bella wrote back in Chapter 11...and I just couldn't end the story without a reunion with Bella and the rest of the family.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 23

YEA!!!!  =D

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 23

OOPS - it was a Giants TShrit. I forgive you Jazz.  =)

Chris.



Author's Response:

What's funny is that I don't even like the Giants. I have been a 49er fan for years. (Sad but true...dates back to Joe Montana) When I was writing this chapter I couldn't get the Giants out of my head. It was so weird. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 23

YAY Jazz and Ali are all good again.

I am  STILL team Jasper, and would gladly wear a NYY tshirt for him even though I really do NOT like the NYY's! He will calm the guilt and remorse later...

 

I swear Bella better stick to her guns and make Edward work for it.

 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 23

You've kept me waiting a long time.....how perfect to pop that in here!!!  Perfectly sweet and lovely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter. Glad everything is starting to work out.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Dena (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 23

Awesome Jazz and Alice reunion.  Thanks for not making Edward go nutso over Jacob and Bella.

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 23

aww yay i love this edward and bella re so complicated but alice and jasper were so sweet perfect combination

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