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Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 24
whew! hot! fanning self. cant wait to see what happens when they go back to bella's apartment.
Author's Response: You are too funny! My beta had to take a cold shower after approving it...hee hee
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 24
Ok This story rocks!!!
I have loved reading it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Belated Birthday! Hope you had a great day :)
I really like how you get into Eds head, that was a great chapter, so full of intimacy and love, I thought it was a piece of art. Thanks for writing it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the Bday greetings...I had a great day. I also thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: gemma (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 24
happy b-day and I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Belated Birthday! and wow with a chapter like that I assume it was a very good birthday~! Squeal that was so hot more so sensual but still very good! Iam glad he read her letter I was wondering if that would come into play! There is stillso much this has to work through will she be changed can she get pregnant? Post again soon will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: I don't know yet if I am going to do a sequel....probably not...but I have loved writing this story. Thanks for sticking with me.
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Birthday!!
Well done, another wonderful chapter! The chemistry you portrayed between bella and edward was great and very hot! :) But I dont want it to end, ive been a fan since your very first chapter! Well i hope you leave us on a good note, im sure you will do us proud! Keep up the good work! i look forward to reading the epilogue, though it will be bitter sweat!
-Erin
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and bday greetings, Erin! I have thoroughly enjoyed writing this one!
Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 24
Loved your story...spent all morning reading it from start to finish it was so addictive :) I think u did an excellent job of getting into Jasper's head I loved all his parts in the story.. Looking fwd to the epilogue :) Oh and happy bday for yesterday u r an excellent writer :)
Author's Response: I do that with stories I find too. I am glad that mine kept you interested. Thanks for the review and the bday greetings.
Reviewer: katydid2363 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 24
Excellent lemon! This has been a great story! I'm a day late but I hope you had a happy birthday!
Author's Response: I did have a great day. I am very excited about the movie coming out on DVD. (my husband worked on the film) Tomorrow I get to go to a Cast and Crew DVD release party! Don't know who is going to be there, but I am excited none the less!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 24
YOU GO, EDWARD!!!! Woo Hoo! That was wonderful! I am so happy to see them together again!
Happy belated Birthday!
Kathy M.
Author's Response: Edward is the man in this chapter. I am glad they were FINALLY able to let things go. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 24
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
I loved this chapter. They finally did it! I loved EPOV.
Can't believe this story is gonna end soon. It's been great.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: It seems that everyone is sad that the story is coming to an end. The conflict is over and the only thing left is meeting the Cullens again. Thanks for the review and the Bday greeting.
Reviewer: Lit_chik (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 24
Wow! Stumbled onto your work by accident....but I'm definitely glad I did! I was completely drawn in....didn't stop reading for over 4 hours! Can't wait for more of your enthralling storytelling!
Author's Response: *doing happy dance* I am so glad you found me! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Birthday... er, belated... but it is only 3am on the 19th, so it still counts, lol! I really love this story, and am sad to see it ending! You've done a great job and I've really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read the epilouge... Keep up the great work! Any new stories on the horizon??
Author's Response: Thanks for the bday greetings. Yes...I have an AH story that I am working on (I haven't posted it ANYWHERE yet), It is different from anything else I have ever done. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Birthday! And thank you for the update. I am sad that there is only the epilogue left. But, it has been a wonderful ride through this story. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the bday cheer, and thanks for the review...great present!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 15
oh poor edward .. watching jasper with bella.... i just found your story today and have read 15 chapters straight!
Author's Response: Well...I am glad you found me! Thanks for the comments!
Reviewer: addicted to twilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 24
I have loved every bit of this story...it was wonderful!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wow! That was awesome! I'm so glad they worked everything out!
I can't believe it is almost over. You did an awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 24
Happy Birthday Sweetie! But I've gotta say, it feels like you just gave US the present we've always wanted with this chapter! You truly, truly outdid yourself.
That love scene was absolutely divine. It was sexy, exciting, and most importantly, drenched in love. Never did it feel smutty or vulgar. It was always romantic, perfect for our beloved B&E.
Thank you so much for giving them this moment. And for making it so beautiful. I couldn't have imagined anything more exquisite. Sigh....
Author's Response: Ah...my dear! I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the bday greetings. Today has been a fun day, and you made it better by your kind words. I am glad you saw it the way I wrote it. I wanted the love to shine through, along with the tenderness that I knew they deserved.
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 24
omg nooo i dont want i to be over i love this its soo perfeect
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words...all good things must come to an end.
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 24
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I am sorry that it is coming to an end.
Happy Birthday!
~Sapphire
Author's Response: I had a hard time deciding that it should end, however it seems that the conflict is over...therefore there would be nothing left ot really write about! I am hoping to post an AH story that I am working on right now. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 24
Excellent chapter!!! I feel like I should be smoking a cigarette now. It was written so well. I loved Edward's insecurities. I loved that Bella initiated it. It was all perfect. I really don't want this story to end. I am so sad about it. Are you considering a sequel? Great joB!!!
Author's Response: Right now...I am not considering a sequel. I am currently working on an AH story and hope to have it approved within the next couple of weeks or so. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 24
I need me an Edward!
Author's Response: ME TOO!!!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 22
I hate that Bella feels guilty. Edward left HER; it's none of his business if she did every guy in Forks.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 21
They should have killed Irina. She not only allied herself with a human drinker to kill an innocent girl; she was willing to kill Jasper. A friend of her coven. Carlisle's SON.
I know Carlisle's big into forgiveness, but that would be hard to swallow.
If I were Bella, I'd call Jake and let him know where Irina was!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review my story. I realize that it is difficult to see the Cullen's help Irina by keeping her alive...when I wrote this chapter I had a hard time killing her off! She had been a friend of the family for many years and she JUST WOULDN'T DIE!!!
Reviewer: Dena (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 24
great chapter...i am so glad he found the letter. that was a great first sex...very realistic and so special...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. He had to find the letter...and the lovin? I have always pictured it like that.
Reviewer: KerriDia (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 24
Awww....I'm sad. Only the epilogue is left? ::sniffles::
As for this chapter....definitely different, but I'm not complaining ;). As always, I can only leave <3.
I guess I shall eagerly await the epilogue!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
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