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Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 23
Amazing!
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oh Shit! I love your story!
Reviewer: cullenswanson (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Epilogue
nice! for a sec i thought this was gonna be a bella/jasper fic.... and ya almost had me convinced thats where i wanted it to go! nice lil fic though!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: blackjacklily (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 21
Hmm. I really wish Bella wouldn't run back to him so easily. The more fanfic I read, the more I start disliking Edward. He's such a child. Horrible I know lol. I want a Jasper/Bella relationship!! Like in the Chapter 13 alternitive you wrote!
But since I won't get one, I will say that I am really loving this story. Thank you for all your hard work so I have something to read while pretending to work lol!
Author's Response: Ha ha! I do the same thing...read at work...bad huh? I am glad you are enjoying this story. It was a labor of love, my first fic. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW! Way to start a story and pull a reader in:)
Reviewer: twilight legacy (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Epilogue
Great story! I love happy endings! :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Epilogue
i love it.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Epilogue
Great story! I really enjoyed it and was pleased Bella and Jasper made Edward suffer for being such a dolt. ;) As painful as it was, I loved the twist you had with Alice and Jasper. Poor Alice really had too much to endure, didn't she? I'm so looking forward to the rest of "Devil in Disguise." It's terrific!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! Thanks for recommending this to me. I LOVE the way you have retained the sweetness of Jake's personality and the passion Bella and Jake had for each other even though this is a Bella and Edward story. Terrific job, girl.
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 24
Happy 40 and a half birthday! (It's 9/19 today)
Thank you for sharing your story! It's well-written and definitely worth reading!
Reviewer: vampire-25-princess (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Epilogue
beautiful lovely story darlin! Well written and intruiging! (sorry bout the darlin thing; I'm a texan!) great job!
Author's Response: I love Texans! I used to live in Houston when I was younger. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 24
so damn hot!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Epilogue
OH ....HELL.... YEA... VERY good and very well written.. you have quite the talent. I cant wait to read the updates on your other works when you do so.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 24
perfect reunion
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 23
so happy for Jasper... very well done
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 22
OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!" ducks behind the couch for protection...
Author's Response: You are too funny! I am glad that you liked my story, and I appreciated every review you gave me!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 21
DAMMIT.... she didnt make him pay...."pouts"..lol please tell me she does in later chapters... "begs "pleaaaaase..lol jk very good so far
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 20
OH SHIT!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery interesting... nice build for suspence
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 18
FIGURESS Em would scare the freaking shit outta her... your evil.. hehe
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
Oh I hope you make their face to face meeting Brutal for him.. he deserves it and she needs to put him in his place definatly
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
its good for Edward to get taught a little humility.. good work
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
I kinda figured Em and Rose would get it on like this...lol
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
NICE!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
so far... DAMN good writing as usual.. you have a huge talent and if you ever publish anything not Twilight related.. let me know I cant wait to read it.
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